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Hum hum hum! Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh w(ﾟДﾟ)wahhhhhh w(ﾟДﾟ)wＯ(≧口≦)ＯＯ(≧口≦)Ｏahhhhh! ! ! ! ! Has the author of Haji not sorted out the plot yet? It's so beautiful o(^▽^)oahＯ(≧口≦)Ｏ!

It's super good-looking, but I don't know if it's a movie with two female protagonists. I want to see a movie with two female protagonists.

Hurry up and update bro. The authors who have been updating for a long time are all going to fall into disrepute! ━┻╰(‵□′)╯┻━┻

Quite interesting. The subject matter is novel, unsystematic, the sex is different, and there are scenes of making love with Suzu and Miyabi (I can barely count), so it is considered light. The protagonist begs the brothers and sisters to take them in, so he will follow the main plot. Anyway, it is all a matter of one sword. The author also tries to omit this part and just skip it. I will also try my best not to leave any regrets, but it wasn't long before the protagonist traveled back in time. The early stage and the part about recognizing each other with Miyabi are really interesting [face covering] I feel sorry for Soichiro. He did nothing but was found out by Miyabi that he has an illegitimate daughter outside. It's such a big deal. That part almost destroyed Soichiro's image in Miyabi's heart, and she felt that his father dared not do what he should. But it's okay to get the story out of the way within a few chapters. Despite all the flaws, it's worth seeing The most useless protagonist in Shuangwen

It's very nice to watch. Even a person who doesn't play Zero Zero finds it quite interesting. I take back what I said above. Anyone who doesn't play JuZZero will find it poisonous [smile]

The content of this book ranks among the top 10 Zero Zone novels that I am aware of so far. Whether readers have played the game or not, they can roughly understand the world view and specific situations of that game from the explanations in this book. So far, except for the occasional word errors, everything else is remarkable. I hope the author can maintain the current writing level and further improve the word errors, sentences, and incorrect sentences. I hope this book can surpass its past when it reaches the passing mark of 200 chapters. Come on! --Peach

I have also read the same type of novel, that is, the adventure of Ying and Yingtevat in 2022. This book is a bit similar to that book. The protagonist is very scared at the beginning, but gradually becomes familiar with it, and there is a bit of lily. I really think this book is okay, but the interaction with Ya is a bit less, which is a pity.

It's my favorite type, and it's rare in the same type. The author is great. After finishing this book, can you come up with a book where two of the same characters appear at the same time? I've read too many others, but this one has aroused my taste buds. It's delicious.

It looks good, I love reading it, write it quickly, we need more excellent authors like you, I hope you can keep writing this good story.

I think the books written by the author are really good. The so-called role-playing or time-traveling books are much better. This is just a personal opinion, because it really didn't hit my mark, so I didn't think it was good. I continued reading, but in the end I didn't have any sense of immersion at all, and the protagonist was just like an empty person. Mainly because I think the plot written by the author is really interesting and makes me look forward to it

The back is no longer round and a bit poisonous. But the significance of this book is quite great, the subject matter is very novel, and it is the originator of the same type. Overall, it's 3 stars for content and 1 star for meaning (at least there will be a lot of articles of this type later).

My evaluation is that although there are many flaws and the plot is not very smooth, it is still good except for the six embarrassments. According to the objective score, it is about four points. I hope the author will continue his efforts and give me a five points. There should be fewer typos. I feel like these pictures are a bit poisonous.

The writing is good. I can find my own feeling and rhythm. Then I will think about how to write better. Finally, when I get the feeling back, I will work hard to update. I will give you four stars first and five stars if you do a good job. Come on. Comment: The author seems to be unable to remember the plot at the moment. It may be because the book has been reported to be removed from the shelves before, so I can't remember it now. I understand this, but I recommend the author to remember it well. First, keep updating normally and record the creation of the plot. If it is not possible in the short term, you can save the manuscript, but don't save it for too long to avoid the book's popularity disappearing. This is my opinion. The author's book seems to have been removed from the shelves many times. He is very persistent. You can also think about the rhythm. This is my plan and recommendation. Anyway, come on, I saw the author's news. It is understandable that the plot needs to be sorted out. After all, going high and going low is definitely not a good ending. It is understandable and I hope readers can be more patient and wait until the author regains his strength and starts updating. This is what I think. Anyway, keep going.

Well, not bad, the characters have good personalities, and the distribution of combat power is not excessive. The key is that there are no systems or anything like that. If the follow-up is not bad, it can probably be written as a plot about Hoshimi in another gray parallel world. You can also write it according to the original plot. Anyway, you can write a lot

The content is relatively novel, at least there are no big holes in the plot. The author seems to be a novice. If you write from a novice's perspective, it's pretty good. After 34 books, you should be at the level of a veteran.

It was very interesting and many people complained about the storyline of Yaya being deflated in Chapter 118, but I thought it was quite interesting, especially the daily posts with the 6th sister. Unfortunately, the ending was a bit hasty because of the poor results. It would have been nice if there were some extra episodes.

Although there are indeed imperfections in the plot at the beginning, after reading so many Tomato novels, I have become adept at taking out my brain and throwing it away [facepalm]. Generally speaking, the daily plots are very comfortable to write. Everyone can decide whether to abandon the pit or stay in it after reading it. [Like] I saw that after more than 110 chapters, I was finally poisoned and ran away. I left out the features of invincibility, daily life, and stickers, and forced the three main characters, Suzu, Zhe, and Ya, to suffer together. In the end, the villain still ran away without being killed. Anyway, this paragraph is written just for the protagonist to recall the plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings. What if it were changed to the protagonist wanting to challenge himself to draw a sword and go directly into the memory? No plot is 10,000 times better than negative plot. Originally, if I lost my mind and ignored the minor points, I could still appreciate the daily parts in detail, but here it is really too poisonous. One of the biggest points that originally made me happy was that the protagonist was invincible, but here the highlights of the book were completely shattered [awkward laughter]

I personally feel that this book is pretty good, except for some bad points (at least I can personally accept these bad points). I hope the author will not stop updating it! This is the first book I have read and the first time I have seen such a novel fan theme. Although there may be many books with this theme in the future (at least in my heart this book still has a special feeling)

It's pretty good so far. Although the writing style is still quite immature in some places, I can't express some emotional aspects well. But for a new book, it's pretty good to be able to do this while keeping it updated. Come on.

It looks good, you can explore it yourself, it looks good Republish it, an author should have some knowledge of his own book, and an author should be responsible for his own book. So it's a pity.

I'm very curious about how the author plans to bring the protagonist's life story back to life, and I look forward to the follow-up plot. The characters' IQs are basically online, and their views are not distorted. Very recommended.

The plot is very clearly written. The protagonist has a slightly "beautiful and strong" personality but not too much. The pace is also appropriate, neither too fast nor too slow. Once you watch it, you won't be able to stop. Highly recommend. It would be great if the author could improve the if line [laughing]

Is there anything you can say? I gave it five stars, keep reading, there will be surprises! To my liking! I don't think I have too many good words, but kids, keep reading, it's really good. When I saw the plot, oh, next chapter, next chapter, every word in this book is not missing.

Thank you to the author! It's very beautiful! [Blowing kiss]

The current rhythm is pretty good, and the protagonist's role is enough. I hope it won't end badly [Love]

The writing is quite good, there is no system, and the plot is relatively stable.

It's quite nice to read, and the author's writing is good, but a bit rusty. The plot theme is very novel, it would be nice if it could be expressed more clearly.

Not bad. The one star it lacks is that it updates too slowly. It updates once a day, which is not enough.

If this book continues to be written and the plot does not collapse, it will still be very good. I have high hopes for this book.

My eyes are bright. But for those who have never played Zero Zone Zero and only heard about it, I feel a bit blind when watching the subsequent plot. I have never played it [crying]