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Reader comments
Hmm... How should I put it? It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm listening to a story without many details. However, the emotional line is quite good, the writing style and the official complaints are quite interesting, and the layout of the progress is condensed three times. My brain is smoking when I listen to the book. If you are short of books, you can read it.
It's pretty good, with solid writing and good humor.
The narrative style is somewhat unique, more like someone telling a story than an ordinary novel.
The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also well arranged, which really makes me happy.
Also, although the scene where the male protagonist fights Lazy Sheep over eating snail noodles is also very exciting, I think the tea made by Jin Kela is indeed better than Bawang shampoo.
All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are very good!
Not bad, but it's really uncomfortable that the chapters don't have names.
The plot of "The Master and the Disciple" was great. The plot was okay, but the part about killing the princess made me uncomfortable. Everything else was good, especially the interaction between the master and the apprentice was very sweet. I look forward to the follow-up.
It is one of the few short chapter novels that are good to read. Pure love, single heroine. The ending is also unexpected but reasonable. After passing the level all the way, I found that there is no boss. There is a lot of sugar in the early stage, almost none in the middle stage, and a little more in the later stage. My personal hope is that the ending will have two female protagonists, and Chen Miao will be added as well, so that Myolie can always be the servant of the protagonist. (In view of Myolie's persistence in the contract of prostitution, she would follow anyone who had one. It can only be said that she was expecting someone to redeem her, so accepting her was not suitable). Other plots are very good, the protagonist is decisive in killing, and Song Hemiao is the best character. A tsundere is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, while a darkened loli is cute in contrast. The Queen of Beiyan was also miserable, and Murong Hai was gone too. It can only be said that it was all fate. The white cat runs through the main plot in the later stage, which can be said to be full of suspense. I thought that Chen Miao would turn black, be taken away from her, and then be killed by the protagonist. It turned out that she could speak, and would run over and ask the protagonist directly. Then the misunderstanding was resolved, and the contrast was transformed into cuteness. Fine. A bit short. A good short story. One more thing, has Master Bai Mao really achieved the goal of restoring Beiyan to orthodoxy? At best, the throne is vacant, and Song Nian'an is not the emperor at all. Looking at past comments, it's been a year and the author probably won't update them, so here's a look.
No, you're too lazy to even bother with the title, right? [Face covering]
It's ok, not bad, but the chapters have no names, which makes me uncomfortable.
It's okay in the front, but there are less plots about Master in the back
The writing is okay, can you give it a title?
Master, can you give me a hug? (I'm about to die, vomiting blood)
Bonus points for pure love. Bonus points for not pulling and tugging. The poison spots are small and worth a look.
This book with a single female protagonist is very well written. I really like the way the male and female protagonists get along with each other.
It's okay, nothing ambiguous, but the male protagonist and the female counterpart have physical contact
It's very well written, I like it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The plot is good and the writing is also good
Four stars, keep working hard, and automatically ignore some areas where logic fails, because I have temporarily lost my brain.
Personally, I feel that the pull between the male and female protagonists in the first thirty or forty chapters is the most interesting.
Mainly whipped sugar, if you want something a little sweeter you can try [eating melon]
Overall well written [like]
It feels okay for the time being
Good-looking, big, good
Okay, okay, recommended [smile]
Good-looking, good-looking, still good-looking [laughing evilly]
It's okay to be desolate, it's so shameful
Very nice looking
It's okay. Xiaodu skipped it and can watch it.
If it looks good, I would recommend it with five stars.
It was good in the early stage, but I didn't feel that way afterward.
Hmm... How should I put it? It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm listening to a story without many details. However, the emotional line is quite good, the writing style and the official complaints are quite interesting, and the layout of the progress is condensed three times. My brain is smoking when I listen to the book. If you are short of books, you can read it.
It's pretty good, with solid writing and good humor. The narrative style is somewhat unique, more like someone telling a story than an ordinary novel. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also well arranged, which really makes me happy. Also, although the scene where the male protagonist fights Lazy Sheep over eating snail noodles is also very exciting, I think the tea made by Jin Kela is indeed better than Bawang shampoo. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are very good!
Not bad, but it's really uncomfortable that the chapters don't have names.
The plot of "The Master and the Disciple" was great. The plot was okay, but the part about killing the princess made me uncomfortable. Everything else was good, especially the interaction between the master and the apprentice was very sweet. I look forward to the follow-up.
It is one of the few short chapter novels that are good to read. Pure love, single heroine. The ending is also unexpected but reasonable. After passing the level all the way, I found that there is no boss. There is a lot of sugar in the early stage, almost none in the middle stage, and a little more in the later stage. My personal hope is that the ending will have two female protagonists, and Chen Miao will be added as well, so that Myolie can always be the servant of the protagonist. (In view of Myolie's persistence in the contract of prostitution, she would follow anyone who had one. It can only be said that she was expecting someone to redeem her, so accepting her was not suitable). Other plots are very good, the protagonist is decisive in killing, and Song Hemiao is the best character. A tsundere is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, while a darkened loli is cute in contrast. The Queen of Beiyan was also miserable, and Murong Hai was gone too. It can only be said that it was all fate. The white cat runs through the main plot in the later stage, which can be said to be full of suspense. I thought that Chen Miao would turn black, be taken away from her, and then be killed by the protagonist. It turned out that she could speak, and would run over and ask the protagonist directly. Then the misunderstanding was resolved, and the contrast was transformed into cuteness. Fine. A bit short. A good short story. One more thing, has Master Bai Mao really achieved the goal of restoring Beiyan to orthodoxy? At best, the throne is vacant, and Song Nian'an is not the emperor at all. Looking at past comments, it's been a year and the author probably won't update them, so here's a look.
No, you're too lazy to even bother with the title, right? [Face covering]
It's ok, not bad, but the chapters have no names, which makes me uncomfortable.
It's okay in the front, but there are less plots about Master in the back
The writing is okay, can you give it a title?
Master, can you give me a hug? (I'm about to die, vomiting blood)
Bonus points for pure love. Bonus points for not pulling and tugging. The poison spots are small and worth a look.
This book with a single female protagonist is very well written. I really like the way the male and female protagonists get along with each other.
It's okay, nothing ambiguous, but the male protagonist and the female counterpart have physical contact
It's very well written, I like it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The plot is good and the writing is also good
Four stars, keep working hard, and automatically ignore some areas where logic fails, because I have temporarily lost my brain.
Personally, I feel that the pull between the male and female protagonists in the first thirty or forty chapters is the most interesting.
Mainly whipped sugar, if you want something a little sweeter you can try [eating melon]
Overall well written [like]
It feels okay for the time being
Good-looking, big, good
Okay, okay, recommended [smile]
Good-looking, good-looking, still good-looking [laughing evilly]
It's okay to be desolate, it's so shameful
Very nice looking
It's okay. Xiaodu skipped it and can watch it.
If it looks good, I would recommend it with five stars.
It was good in the early stage, but I didn't feel that way afterward.
It looks interesting from the front, come on
So far, I quite like it.