Xiuxian: I Was so Scared That the Male and Female Protagonist Screamed

Essay on Cultivation to Immortality - Time Travel - Group Pet - No cp, fast pace, compact plot The heroine Yun Yitang is nine years old. She belongs to a top aristocratic family. She is the favorite of the whole family. She has a harmonious family and good luck. When she enters the sect, she must use invisibility to change her appearance when going out. To seize opportunities, she must have a photo stone mantra. The male and female protagonists of the original drama, their enemies and licking dogs, used all kinds of methods to expose the truth, trap and kill, sneak attacks, poison and poison. The attack was swift and he was killed several times. It turns out that the male and female protagonists are wanderers who came down from the fairy world. The heroine is Feitang Immortal Lord who was reborn into the world and is in charge of the Heavenly Way of Huanyuan Continent. It ends too quickly! Jin Dan restored his memory and repaired his body, and the decisive battle at Dingfeng ended.

This book is a great read, and it is incomparably refreshing. Anyone who likes to read refreshing novels will be blessed. The heroine has a high IQ and her cultivation will always surpass the male and female protagonists in the original book. She always thinks about revenge on the male and female protagonists and takes action. It is really revenge from morning to night. It took five days to go from the fifth level of Qi training to the Great Perfection of Qi training, three months to go from the early stage of foundation building to the golden elixir stage, and I was trapped for a hundred years, and I went from the late golden elixir stage to the Mahayana stage. It was like riding a rocket🥲The upgrade speed was so fast that it beat the male and female protagonists of the original book, as if they were in the next chapter. He inserted the waist of the original heroine, destroying the Dantian and spiritual roots of the original heroine. Later, in the Mahayana period, he defeated the original male protagonist (the original male protagonist destroyed the heroine's original immortal body and replaced the heroine as the next pseudo-heaven), and made her soul fly away.

It's nice to watch, very enjoyable, and fast-paced. The heroine is not procrastinating at all, she is very smart and will not take revenge blindly. The author's writing style is also very good, and some of the explanations are very accurate. Strong recommendation, show them all to me [punch hard] [take a closer look]

I think it's pretty good. Why is the rating so low? The writing is really good. I especially like the heroine's character, especially when dealing with the original male and female protagonists. Come on, author, I think the writing is great👍🏻

Highly recommended. The heroine is very capable and doesn't seem aggrieved at all. She doesn't wait until she is wronged and killed before she fights back. It seems really cool to take the initiative. It doesn't feel like other novels that can't resolve an issue after several chapters and the ending feels a bit rushed. The extras are also very well written. Highly recommended for book lovers who don't like to feel uncomfortable reading ink.

The author's writing style is very good, and I can see that he has a solid foundation. However, the novel contains too many explanations. You have to remember that this is your book. You can do whatever you want. Don't be constrained. Too many explanations are counterproductive. Just like your explanation in a text, just let nature take its course. This is actually the most taboo thing when writing novels. If the author feels that he doesn't like my suggestions, he can choose not to read them. I hope that the author's writing style will make my eyes shine next time.

It's very, very nice to read. I especially like this kind of article that progresses very quickly. What's more important is that there is no CP [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [flying kiss] [flying kiss], which is very good. Moreover, this article is not a group favorite. There are not so many people around the heroine, which is great. It's very nice, but the ending is a bit sloppy. It would be nice if the ending was a little fuller [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]. This is a fairy tale that I have particularly liked for a long time. The progress is very fast, and the heroine is the kind of person who takes revenge when she has a grudge. It looks very enjoyable [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Wow! ! ! I have never seen such a beautiful article about cultivating immortals! ! ! If you have any grudges, you'll avenge them on the spot. There's no procrastination at all, and you don't hide your talents or anything. Her family background is also very good. It's really great to be able to work as a backstage for her! He won't be slandered by the original heroine or anything! ! As long as you confront the heroine, you can directly take out the shadow stone to prove your innocence. Moreover, no one in the sect will show favoritism and will punish you directly. It's really cool! ! ! No loss in investing! ! ! It's just that the number of chapters is a bit small, I hope the author will update it more! !

It's really great. I've just read Chapter 16. The writing is very good, the characters are successfully created, and the plot design is reasonable! This score is actually a bit low. Maybe it's because it's not finished. [What] The author, please keep up the good work! !

A five-star review, I love it! Recommended, it saved my book drought. The plot is not sloppy at all, and the author's writing style is also very good. From now on, I will be a super fan of the author and will always support it✊

Finally, I saw a normal rebirth revenge story. He went directly to the original heroine's sect and crushed the original heroine. From time to time, he secretly assassinated the original heroine and licked the dog. Whenever there was an opportunity, he would destroy the heroine's good deeds and assassinate the original heroine. Unlike other novels, I either avoid the original heroine and dare not take revenge, or I feel aggrieved in front of the original heroine every day.

Wow, it's so good, but the ending is a bit rushed. I feel like I could continue writing about the fairy world. I only watched it for a day and it's gone. This is the first time I've seen such a decisive heroine [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, it's a great read, the plot is not boring, and the reading experience is great! It talks about snatching the opportunity of the original heroine, just taking it and leaving. There are no chance encounters, no bloodshed, no suspense, no procrastination, no cruelty, only tormenting the original heroine and heroine, and everyone is fine in the end. The only flaw is that there is no scene where everyone reunites with our current heroine after ascending. Look, it's not a loss if you fall into the trap!

I really like the character of the heroine. There are no messy plots or characters. The whole chapter is simple and comfortable to read. I like this kind of comfortable writing and I enjoyed reading it. There are some minor flaws. The story is too short and not enough to read. I didn't like the plot of needing to save the world at the end. I hope the author will continue this style by writing a book, and add more secret treasures and spiritual pets to make the novel richer. If there are any shortcomings, please work hard.

It's okay, it can be used to kill time. The main heroine is cool in writing, and then prefers group portraits. But it may be because it is relatively short, but basically every step is written in a sloppy way. But the plot description is okay, there are causes and effects

It's super, super good-looking, fast-paced, and the heroine is 10 years old and has reached the stage of adulthood at 100 years old. In episode 96, the original heroine died. In episode 97, there was a reason and energy for the heroine to travel through time. In episode 100, the original hero died. The ending was a bit rushed and fast. It's still very beautiful. I recommend [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The non-CP heroine is quite impressive. This article didn't kill the hero and heroine at the beginning, but it didn't say that the original hero and heroine were suppressed and beaten, which is also very good. The settings of the original male and female protagonists are different for each one, which is already very satisfying to a certain extent. There are indeed those who directly kill the original male and female protagonists from the beginning, but the setting of this article is not such that they can be killed from the beginning. After all, it is a kind of clone of a god from the upper realm, so it is not easy to kill it at once.

It's good to read, it's really good to read. I really like the setting of the heroine. She's strong, beautiful, and rich. She's very talented and works hard. Some of the plots are quite interesting, but the pace is a bit too fast. I didn't finish the book enough. I think it's a little unfinished, but overall it's a very good book.

The characters are full-bodied, the storyline is not procrastinating, and the character fits my taste very well. The relationship between the senior brother and the heroine is also touching. The relationship between the family and friends, as well as the teacher-student relationship with the master are also very touching.

The writing is quite good. The proud man of heaven steals the opportunity of the heroine. The only drawback is that the original heroine is not dead now (current chapter 66

Looks good, the text is clear and clear Keep up the good work! ! [Laughing][laughing]

So far, I have seen the sect competition here, and the plot is currently very good. Although there are not many typos, why are the names of people misspelled? Shen Mu'an was already typed as Shen Mu'an. I thought it was some new character, so I searched the full text, but it turned out that it was just a typo. Why didn't I change it before it was finished? Didn't anyone remind me in the comment section? (I didn't open a comment section because it seems to affect my mood)

It's okay. It's good overall. It's just a little short, but it's better than the long one. It's not good to read. It's also good to finish it in a timely manner. I've seen it before and it was obviously hard to write. It directly ruined the evaluation of the whole book.

The biggest highlight is that the heroine and her team are action-minded people who do what they need to do immediately, without procrastination at all. They are not Madonna, but they are definitely not Black Heart Lotus. There is not much nonsense in the whole text, so the whole story is relatively short and the plot is compact, so you can read it in one sitting. The disadvantage is that there are errors in the use of words and sentences, and the names of people and objects are often wrong.

The heroine doesn't procrastinate and takes revenge. It's very enjoyable to watch. Secondly, the plot is also okay, unnecessary chapters have been reduced. Although there are a few chapters, it is enough to read. It's just that the ending could be written more, but it's not enough. Overall, this book is very good, and the heroine's character is also likeable.

This is the first time I read it this year. The plot is very smooth and coherent. There is revenge, and the original male and female protagonists are not spoiled at all. The friendship and family relationship are very good. It is a non-CP novel that I highly recommend this year😍

Not bad, not bad. Revenge is fun. No ink. Although it is a short story, it was really fun to read! It's really not that much more satisfying than watching a long grinding drama. The heroine's ability to do things is top-notch, haha. Bai Lian is really stubborn and has a strong attitude. After watching it, I feel better all day long! It's just that the original heroine and heroine died too quickly, and they kissed Piao Piao before they were tried and tortured. The other people in Heaven are really rubbish for making such a big mistake.

It looks good, I enjoyed it, and it's not cowardly at all. There is no complicated relationship, the heroine is single-mindedly trying to seduce the original male and female protagonist, and she is quick, accurate and ruthless. Even if she is protected by fake heaven, she is quick and ruthless, which makes it super comfortable to watch. I like this kind of ruthless heroine. Although she is ruthless, she is only ruthless to her enemies. She is also very kind to her family and friends. The heroine has a very good relationship with her family, and it is not an exaggeration to say that she is the family favorite. It was really fun to watch, and I felt very relaxed. There were no knives in the whole process, so you can watch it with confidence, and it is not long.

The pace is fast, probably because it is a short story, and the content is very exciting. The heroine takes the initiative and is quite smart, such as exposing the original heroine's photo stone, which is linked together. Too short, not enough to see!

It's a good read. This is the third novel I've finished. Good! The plot is fast, not draggy at all, and very enjoyable. People like me who like fast plots are lucky, but the ending is a bit too fast, which is not satisfying enough. The original male and female protagonists died so quickly that I didn't react. At first, I thought I would have to wait at least thirty or forty chapters for the part where the senior brother recognizes his kin. Unexpectedly, it only takes two or three chapters to find out his identity and recognize his kin. It was so satisfying. The heroine is strong and reassuring. She is also a little cute at ordinary times. She grows up rapidly. There is no plot to fight monsters and upgrades. The plot is compact. There are also some small characters and so on, and each character has a memory point. All in all, it looks great. I wish it were longer. I recommend it! [Like][Like][Like]