A Poem Accompanying the Moon and the Iris

It's a pretty good road novel. It's my first time reading this genre. Let's talk about the world view first. It's half Western fantasy, half steam, and there are some alchemy techniques, pistols, freighters, and trains. The level of technology is not low. I can only say that I don't like the world view where magic and technology come together. I prefer the pure one. The writing is pretty good and it's comfortable to watch. But the fighting is a bit strange. You can write more straightforward fights. There's a single heroine who loves pure love. This is not a criticism. I hope that the emotional drama and the male and female protagonists will be good. The other ending felt abstract to me. I gave up everything to be with the yandere heroine. Plus the heroine was not my type and ran away. The Farewell was still a good book.

I'm looking forward to the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. I hope the updates won't be interrupted. This is the only article about the female protagonist.

This book is very special, that is, there is nothing that particularly attracts me, but it keeps me reading. Each chapter is obviously very short, but it feels very long when I read it. This is also a skill. I can enjoy reading it with 2000 words. Many books that take 2000 words to write are as good as not having been written at all. The ending of the story is known halfway through, but the journey continues. If you like an ordinary book with surprises, I highly recommend this book and hope the author will continue to work hard. If you really want to say there's something wrong with this book, it's probably that the if is too much, but just skip it [laughs]

After reading a little bit, I didn't want to comment at first, but I was worried about Bao Si after seeing so few comments. . . The writing style is very comfortable, the settings of the male and female protagonists are very likable, overall it is a good novel, I look forward to the follow-up plot

I immersed myself in it unconsciously. After I finished reading, I realized that it was already dark and the book had to be updated. I like my sister, I have always wanted to have a sister, but in just a few dozen chapters, it would be nice to have a sister

A plain, measured Western-style road novel can make people calm down. By the way, I would like to ask the author if he will finish the book. I want to finish the journey of Chris, Moben, Alvey, and a certain bard. I hope the author does not want to be a eunuch. Qwp

After reading about 30 chapters, I still can't help but want to ask, who is the heroine? Couldn't it be Angelina? It's almost done, let me make some comments. The shaping of the male protagonist is a bit too strong, and there are obvious traces of "what he wants to express". He is somewhat reduced to a tool for the author to output his own ideas, and lacks some of the character's own personality charm and three-dimensional image. In fact, not only the male protagonist, but all the characters are like this. Also, as a growth-oriented character, the male protagonist has some immature thoughts and behaviors in the early stages of the story, which is understandable, but the male protagonist still feels a bit too "paranoid" or "childish" to me. The whole person seems to be a combination of certain paranoid thoughts, the product of the author's absolute idealization, and does not feel "angry". It may be a bit arrogant to say this, but I myself am a relatively withdrawn, paranoid and naive person. To some extent, I have something in common with the male protagonist, so I don't want the male protagonist to fall into a dead end of thought, and I don't want him to live only in his own world like now. Admittedly, this is a common problem in today's novels, but this novel made me see something different and resonated with me. So I thought I should point these issues out. If this offends the author, I apologize in advance. Sorry.

It's well written, I really like this style, but it doesn't have much popularity here, I hope it won't be too eunuch. Big cheers for the author! ! ! Two updates a day? Currently, "Sword Yue Qin Xing" is separated from "The Great Thaumaturge", which is updated once a day. That's fine, just stop being a eunuch and continue to raise him. Come on, author.

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A road novel from another world, with a leisurely style

Author, this book needs to be read for a while, but I'm afraid I'll give it to you [laughing and crying]

I like this style, keep it up

There are also some novelties in the traditional Western District magical adventure novels

He's the protagonist I like, so I'll show off directly My sister is the heroine [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

An adventure novel with a sense of everyday life

A very beautiful book [Punch Out]

I really like this more relaxed western fantasy adventure style. But I hope the emotional line is written more carefully

It's good-looking, slow-burning, so it's a bit niche, a road novel, the protagonist is elegant, emotional, reasonable and charming, and the world view is quite good and new. Sometimes I read articles while complaining, and sometimes I connect headphones to listen to books while working (when I encounter interesting plots, I don't post them to complain). Recommended

Coming, coming, coming

I quite like this style

Come on author, you write well.

A book I like very much Pretty good I think

I quite like this style of novel

The writing is fine, the plot is detailed and detailed, but the emotional drama with the heroine is currently progressing slowly.

It's a good novel, but it has one flaw. There are conflicts in the early interpersonal relationships and it seems a bit awkward.

A very classic Western fantasy novel, but the content is not cliché. The writing is smooth and beautiful, suitable for leisure and retirement

There are no fierce conflicts and the writing style is relaxed and peaceful. It will be boring if you read it too much, but it can easily make people calm down. It is very good.

A relaxing journey that looks very comfortable

Haokan. Recently I like to watch this type of casual monster-fighting occasionally. The progress is pretty good and there will be more updates.

Come on, come on, come on