Survival from the Center of the Earth: Starting with a Pickaxe

It's very beautiful. The characters of the heroine and the supporting characters are very good and flesh-and-blood. I finally found one that didn't write about various appearances. I can still understand what kind of character they are. I really love it. In the early stage, it felt a little too detailed and unnecessary. But later on, the rhythm will be better. Just don't describe it like dripping with sweat. It would be nice if it comes with pictures. I'm looking forward to it.

Survival in the center of the earth is a relatively rare game, and the world view is also innovative. The plot advances smoothly. The heroine is not invincible at the beginning, but has a sense of progress as she gradually upgrades. It is rare for female videos to have detailed descriptions of battle scenes. There are many female characters. The fairness of the transaction is relatively well controlled, and the heroine will not feel that she is suffering a big loss, nor will she be too fussy about it. I feel like my writing gets better as I get to the end. A few minor issues. 1 All the emotional descriptions are very strange. For example, the heroine "dislikes" everything for no apparent reason. The excitement of the heroine going out to fight at night is described in an awkward manner. When doing business, I always hesitate and do what I have to do. For another example, it can be seen that the character of Orange is portrayed by the author as a good person, but the author's description of her words and deeds always made me think at first sight: She is so hypocritical and won't betray the heroine in the future, right? It is recommended to reduce the description of emotion and describe more action. For example, Bai Zhixia and Lin Zhao have said many times that they have a good relationship, but I didn't feel anything at all. Lin Zhao was so anxious that his bullets bounced back in the Whack-a-Mole copy and he wanted to rush back, but I got it all at once. The author describes action better than emotion. 2. There are quite a lot of plots that involve shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target, such as shoes. This problem is always described. The heroine is in such a nervous situation but does not want any way to solve it. She immediately guesses that it will be arranged later. The sense of substitution in plot advancement is a bit weaker. 3. Some small details are not handled well, such as the first two points, which leads to the feelings/actions made by many heroines. When watching it, I always feel a little unable to empathize. It would be better if the battle rhythm could be smoother. For example, biting the tip of the tongue is usually a move to force oneself to wake up and survive before falling into confusion. At this point, it basically means that the protagonist has to use all his trump cards to fight. Generally, it can be used once in a battle. It is best not to appear more than 5 times in the whole text. However, you can count how many times you have written the part about fighting the queen bee, and suddenly the thrill is gone. At present, the follow-up update of the world view seems to be very interesting. I hope the author will write better and better!

So far, it looks pretty good. The setting is quite novel. There are a lot of flaws and nitpicks at the beginning, but the author writes more and more smoothly later on. Whether it's the level of gripping people, the smoothness of the plot, or the level of attraction, it's getting better and better. Relatively speaking, the description of battle scenes is the author's strength, and the battles are a plus. The lyrics and related descriptions of women are shameless, and the named characters who appear are basically women, which is a bonus. Follow for more updates😌😌

Mark it, it looks good Strong woman + no cp + single rabbit + interesting setting + multiple copies The setting is quite novel. It is not a cookie-cutter endless survival on the raft road. The monsters and landscape equipment settings are very much the author's own. The players she encounters are basically female characters. The heroine gradually becomes stronger, her force value gradually increases, she is very cruel to herself, and the battle scenes are described very well! ! ! The author knows how to write! All kinds of little monsters have unique cuteness! ~Finally, I haven't seen any public scolding or positive reviews in survival-related articles! Multiple dungeon settings can expand the world view. I like the designs of some dungeons that are quite weird.

It's beautiful, but the number of words is a bit short. Generally speaking, the protagonists in this kind of survival shelter novel develop themselves on their own, and most of them are in a lone wolf state without seeing anyone, which makes people feel a bit lonely when playing stand-alone games. The author also has a good grasp of the degree and makes up for this through copies. However, the description of human nature or communication is not particularly good. The protagonist meets all good people, and those who expect the writing style to be darker and more realistic will be disappointed. The settings and cool points are well described. It's not mindless and cool, and the protagonist is not the best in the server or the invincible type. I recommend [give my heart]

The writing is super good, the plot is quite novel and interesting, there are no surprises so far, and the all-female team is a big hit! (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) It's just a bit short, please give it a try

It's pretty good so far, but I hope the author can stop letting the heroine's IQ fall off the line all the time.

The inner earth world always welcomes the strong! The straight line between the two points is the closest. I am starting to dig holes now. I guess I will be able to go abroad for free soon [Cool] [Cool] No, I dug the subway and am in trouble... [Crying] [crying] Good-looking, non-toxic, the heroine is a calm, strong, serious and lively single mother (currently raising a rabbit), and her partners are all healthy and normal people (handsome and cute sisters! There are quite good supporting partners in several survival books. I can't remember why I was so determined to be a lone wolf in the past🤔 Oh... Because of poverty alleviation and fake people, and I also have to write backstabs. But this kind of low-income relationship, the level of normal interaction is just right, I agree to this marriage!

Not bad, the heroine doesn't have any big gold fingers, she grows up slowly, and those who like the heroine who is number one in all aspects should be cautious, because the heroine grows very slowly and can barely be considered in the first echelon. If the author continues to describe at this pace, there will still be about 70% of the heroine's growth to the number one, but the heroine... Um... She has grown too slowly, maybe because her life is relatively comfortable? It feels like the mentality has not completely changed yet. Of course, it is also possible that this is the character of the heroine and cannot be changed. If you like evil girls, don't enter. The heroine is chaotic, neutral and kind.

The rhythm is very good. Looking at other survival novels with golden numbers flying around, this one is a bit more steady, and it's finally not the first place on the list. In some novels, the protagonist can get the first place without any special features. I really don't understand.

Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good-looking. The writing is relatively realistic. The heroine slowly improves through her own efforts. It's not the kind of novel that starts with a lot of problems and all the benefits fall on the heroine. The heroine is also getting stronger little by little and is following a growth path.

It feels oily, the combat descriptions are good, and I like to pretend. It's an extreme battle every time, but it's still possible to fight another one after the battle. Well, I try my best every time

It looks good, my wife is good at writing battles, the heroine fights very handsomely, and the plot settings are also very innovative. Some plots may not be logically smooth (for example, the heroine didn't know how to use a whip in the previous chapter, but she used it very well in the battle in the next chapter), but the flaws are not hidden, and it is still worth watching.

I think the writing is very good, why are so few people reading it? This is a rare book I found that is not a noob. The heroine is good, the story is logical, there are no super messy people, and there are no big flaws in the book. I look forward to the author continuing to write. I like to read this kind of survival type and upgrading the safe house.

Chapter 114 to review, the article is getting better and better. It's not the kind of cool story that dominates the rankings as soon as the plug-in comes on the scene, but it's not aggrieved either. It gradually gets stronger and stronger, and it's also a ruthless person in battle. Hopefully this sense of gradual climb can be maintained.

It is a rare hard-core survival story. The protagonist does not rely on luck or cheats such as the system, but slowly becomes stronger through his own efforts. It has very detailed descriptions of wild exploration and killing monsters and fighting. It has rigorous logic, online IQ, reasonable prices, a complete world view, and good character creation. There are currently no minefields. Recommended by old bookworms.

So far, I think it's pretty good. The heroine develops normally, unlike other novels where she's always at the top. It's a cyclical progression. That's what I want to see. It's boring to write about how awesome the protagonist is all at once. Why do you think the popularity of this book is so low? I have only saved 5 chapters for a long time, and the quality is quite good. I thought there were many people waiting like me, but it turned out that there were only more than 20 people urging me to update. Don't lose heart, author! What you wrote is super nice, it's quite a good article [love] [love] [love]

It's a nice update flow article, not a cool article. But the heroine herself is also a very good person who is working hard to become stronger. It's not like some of the novels I've read before, which are too cool and the protagonist is number one in everything. Or it's very inexplicable, and the protagonist feels like he's just lucky, not smart, has no strength, and is just pretending. Personally, there are very nice articles about refuge in Tomato. And so far, his power system has not collapsed. I don't know what will happen next.

It's very interesting, but the author's updates are getting less and less, and I feel like I'm going to run away. No, it's not easy to have a good-looking survival story for girls.

It's not bad. It's a female channel survival story that doesn't have golden fingers. It's not a European emperor's charming man's survival story. Everything hits my mark exactly. I look forward to the follow-up development and silently pray that I won't become an immortal!

Overall it's pretty good, there are many outstanding female characters, I really like it. The heroine is constantly growing. She made some small mistakes in the early stage, but her personal strength and resourcefulness are constantly improving. She is a growth-type heroine that I like very much. There is nothing wrong with the plot, and it feels like the writing is getting better and better. In daily personal survival, there will be copies to unite and cooperate. I can grasp the overall situation.

There are a few plot arrangements at the beginning that are rather deliberate. For example, the foreshadowing of the heroine's opportunities is a bit stiff, but innocuous; the author's fighting and adventure scenes are well written, imaginative and atmospheric, which is a great advantage; the heroine has just come of age, has good skills and a not tense personality, and the partners are not very close but trust each other. I like to watch things like upgrading monsters, exploring equipment, developing skills, and gradually becoming stronger. I prefer games and Western fantasy.

It's very interesting to watch. The main character and the Holy Mother fight wonderfully. There are earth beasts, warcraft, mutant beasts, various environmental weather, making potions and weapons and equipment. The copy has main and branch lines (the earth earth world described by the author is very broad and rich)

The setting is interesting and the heroine is self-reliant. At least she is not the kind of person who relies on European emperors and salted fish to stay flat and then inexplicably become the number one. The apocalyptic novels just want to read about adventure and growth. This book gave me what I wanted to read, and the author's writing style is good, not a novice novel! ! Worth a look!

It's a little wordy in some places, but overall it's actually pretty good.

It looks good, not the kind that just follows the crowd and explodes all kinds of double supplies.

Yes, although the title is survival, it looks more like survival + unlimited streaming. Compared to the beginning, which felt like the author was getting smoother as he wrote, I am still looking forward to the follow-up. I can't give five stars to this serialized article at the moment, but it has great potential in serialization! The book's rating is lower than the quality, so I'll give it a thumbs up. I'll rate it again after it's finished and see how it goes. Update soon, I will recommend books to you.

It's good-looking, the pace is not sluggish, it has cheats but it's not a big deal, it's a solid post-apocalyptic upgrade story, and all the supporting characters so far are female.

🔥🔥🔥I can't believe the score is 7.6. It's a book with a score of 7.80% And 9 points. The upgrade is logical. All the data is worked out bit by bit by myself. It's not the kind of data flow that plug-ins are invincible and don't follow logic. It is quite special among many survival articles. So far, I think it has a score of 9.2/9.3, Which is okay. Why is it only 7.6? Got cheated? I am quite selective in reading articles. Many articles cannot stimulate my nerves. If I read them forcefully, I will feel sleepy and fall asleep. I don't like to listen to this article. I like to read it piece by piece. If you like reading survival articles, I highly recommend this one.

It's very beautiful and I'm excited beyond words! ! A very down-to-earth article, unlike Tomato's local haha. There are many and exciting battle scenes, almost all of which are female characters with different personalities and identities. As the plot progresses, it becomes more and more fascinating. The dungeon is also great. I prefer the heroine to enter the dungeon alone. It is super cool. I hope the author will update more, and I hope there will be a few more single-player copies. I haven't seen enough. [Love] [Love]