Civil War: the Day I Lived with the Dragon Lady

Look what good stuff I got in Tomato Hey hey hey I really like this kind of imagination. Magical realism. It's really unbearable for a vampire to go to war and freeze to death in Russia (). The character creation is also very lovable. When I read it, I felt a sad mood, a feeling of dazzling sunshine, like the atmosphere of a war movie, but also mixed with modern technology. Although the story is fictional, the emotions are generally delicate and real.

I've been reading it for a long time, and I've only read half of it. Here's my humble opinion: Is this book good? My rating is that it looks great! At the same time, the subject matter is also very novel! Can be attractive. Asians + modern war themes + romance + single female protagonist is already a rare theme combination, and it is attractive enough. The author's literary skills are also very strong, and he has a strong sense of description of the atmosphere on the war front, making people feel depressed and desperate all the time. The fusion of themes is also very good. Based on the Civil War about black liberation, it created an Asian version of the Civil War and explored the almost unresolvable conflicts between different species. (There are also wonderful metaphors from the author, which can relieve the depressing atmosphere at any time) The author is also very strong in shaping various characters, and can quickly make each character deeply rooted in people's hearts. Since each character is very three-dimensional (anyway, it is basically difficult to forget these characters after a period of time after I read it), such as: Long Niang, who longs to return home and likes to eat Chinese food (and the protagonist), why is there such a huge contrast between her pre-war and post-war personalities? People can't help but want to get deeper into her; she attaches great importance to love and righteousness, values her subordinates, and just wants to lie down, but is forced to go to war by her family. (She is a single heroine anyway, and there is a dragon girl in the line, so I don't care, the little loli is my wife (want to eat shit)) This book may have other advantages, but I haven't discovered them yet, or I haven't thought of them for a while. I look forward to your additions. So, let's talk about the shortcomings of this book? Have! Of course, these views only represent my subjective opinions, which are very different from everyone's views. These shortcomings may also be caused by my problems. Slow! This was my first feeling when I was reading. I don't know if it's my personal reason, but I feel that the book's progress in each line is extremely slow, tiring, and complicated! When the author is telling one line, he will always bring along all the other lines (for example, when talking about the Taotie line, the author will advance multiple lines such as the vampire line, the dragon lady line, and the world line at the same time). Narrating multiple lines at the same time leads to the perception that each line is advanced, but it feels like there is no advancement. I feel tired just reading it! Miscellaneous! Slow! Lack of long term appeal! I usually read this book for a while, put it away for a while, read something else, and then come back to it. Because I feel that this book is difficult to attract me for a long time (of course I still like to read it). Any book will create one or more points that attract readers to continue reading. (For example: in love, you definitely want to read the story of the male and female protagonists and their sweet stories; war, the cruelty on the battlefield, many of them are looking forward to the final victory; and the subject of demi-humans is generally secondary, either bound to love, or bound to fantasy) And in the author's books , the current love line is like watching two people who are frigid (in terms of personality, not in terms of sex) interact, and the victory of the war is far away (really abstract Asian people always make me red and warm when I see them, but they are extremely consistent with the world view and setting). The atmosphere of the whole book almost makes me feel very depressed. What attracts me right now is that I want to see what other ruthless deeds those curious demi-humans can do in the Asian Liberation War (and my little loli), unlike the Black Liberation War. The fragmentation and vagueness of the worldview. Although the author occasionally mentions the setting of the worldview in the article, he never mentions it in detail or clearly. He always changes the topic while talking, which makes people like me who like new settings and worldviews very uncomfortable. The part I have seen so far does not clearly describe the history and world view of historical time. I hope that the subsequent content or the author can explain it. Note: These opinions only represent my subjective opinions, and there is a big difference between them and everyone's opinions. These shortcomings may also be caused by my problems. You still need to see them in person for the specific details. Suggestions: In addition to the above, please allow me to make a few private suggestions. Change the title. When I first saw it, I thought it was a cool article. After reading it quietly for a while, I realized that it was not a cool article. This is very important! It is easy for readers who like to read to give up the book directly based on the perception; and readers who like to read cool articles will give up the book if they find that they have been deceived after reading for a while, and they may even be criticized for the fact that the title does not match the content. Resulting in no foot traffic. Although I really don't want to, I still want to mention that the author's book is basically not suitable for tomatoes. At present, more than 99.9% (?) Of Tomato books are difficult to review. Shuangwen Liu basically occupies the mainstream, and brainless cool articles account for a large part of them (this view only applies to me personally, because everyone's Tomato recommendations are different). The author is basically not in line with the mainstream of tomatoes (Goutai's Tomatoes), and basically has no traffic at all. If the author's book is on other websites, it may develop better. Beyond that, there may be some shortcomings that I may have forgotten about or may not have read about yet. Overall, the author's book is a good book, but it needs improvement. I hope the author can see it and create a good book. ! ! ! ! Note: The above opinions are my humble opinion. There are 100 Hamlets in 100 people's hearts. Every book is different in everyone's eyes. I hope everyone can read it for themselves first and then form their own opinions instead of listening to others. This is my first time writing a long review, so I may make a lot of mistakes, and I hope you guys can correct me. (Finally, this is purely my personal idea. I hope the author can see that I want to be Divina's husband (I want to eat shit))

The writing is quite good, except for the unclear background at the beginning, which may cause confusion. The character creation and rhythm control are very good. You can see the protagonist's mobility and powerlessness in the background, and you can also feel the heroine's unique character. The advancement and connection of the plot are very natural and interesting, with the expected sense of expectation and twists. To be honest, it is a rare excellent work on this platform. It is a pity that not many people are willing to read it patiently. But this is not a problem with the writing, it is just the trend of the platform. Good luck, author.

The writing is quite nice, but the writing style is not like online writing. Writing a book on Tomato is quite a waste. The look and feel is quite similar to the physical books I used to read. It feels like the author has read quite a few books, and there are many references to famous works or events in them. I rarely read books and can't tell the source of the quote, but I feel that the author quoted it quite clearly.

The plot of the story is written in depth and organized smoothly. It wraps the oppression of reality in a fantasy style. It is a very content story so far, but the plot development that can be seen at a glance is not attractive and the readers lack a sense of gain. Personally, I feel that the plot and character creation of "The Long Goodbye" are very suitable for the author's story. In the face of the depressing reality, the characters' extraordinary actions and wisdom can attract everyone's attention, and more people will like this book.

This is the best war-themed book I have read so far. Even with my meager experience in movies and animations, it is one of the few that made me so emotional. The description of the characters is a complex and contradictory collection. It is very realistic, real and beautiful. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

To be honest, the pacing of this book is quite good, perhaps because the current plot involves relatively heavy themes, but the experience and shock it brings when reading are very good. But the problem also lies in the subject matter. The subject of war is inherently very sensitive. It is easy to fail to show the cruelty of war and the relationship between the male and female protagonists perfectly. The author's writing style is very good, but the worldview structure and many settings are not expressed, which makes some plots confusing or abrupt. I hope the author can pay attention to this in subsequent writing. Overall, the flaws don't hide the flaws, and it's very good.

Different from the shock brought by other novels, this one gave me a deep sense of immersion. The protagonist is in a war and is unable to change the situation. He has experienced many things and finally longs to return to his roots. Dee's loyalty to the country and the importance he attaches to his soldiers... The conflict between orcs and humans is similar to the conflict between slave owners and world wars, but with the addition of fantasy features (birds and the like), it is different from reality and adds a little philosophy (?). In addition, there are many places in the article that made me feel numb, such as the gluttonous specimens in the art museum, the residual servility of some orcs (let's put it this way), Jiang Yi's mother's preference for boys over girls, and some officers who did not regard orcs as human beings (the winged orcs were killed by bird-repelling instruments)... The whole thing reminded me of the history of human development (). In addition, because I felt strange, I looked up the name of the heroine. It probably means the spring of fertility. In the Book of Songs "Spring Water", there is also a record of "I miss Feiquan" (Feiquan is the river of Weiguo). This poem uses the fictional return journey to reflect the helplessness of reality. The individual is restricted by etiquette and cannot return to his hometown and sublimates the sorrow of the times. Is this not true for the heroine and even this novel? It's late at night, so I'm just going to express my humble opinion. I hope this novel can stick to the ending (it will keep getting better), and I can just compliment the author on how good it is.

What can I say about this book? It is plain and simple, with a hint of vicissitudes of immortality that runs through the whole book. It seems that the story should develop like this, as if an old immortal who has experienced everything is telling you his story slowly. When I finally saw the ending, I was thinking, ah, it's finally over. In fact, it should have been over long ago; but at the same time, I felt a little reluctant. But the story should indeed end. The war is over, and they have lived their ideal ordinary life. It seems that there is nothing more to write about, so let it end like this. The author's writing style wasn't the most brilliant, the plot wasn't the most engaging, and I wasn't glued to the book and couldn't put it down, but I ended up reading it in a very short time. This is a really well-written book. The ending is not perfect, but it is also rare.

A very innovative novel. The narrative is straight from the beginning, which is very eye-catching. The characterizations of the characters are relatively profound, and they all have stories, but the stories are hidden, like the tip of the iceberg. In short, I believe the author filled in the holes and wrote really well [laughs] [like]

It's really hard to get over for a long time. The author has created a world with fresh flesh and blood. The characters are not stereotypes, but have a profound portrayal of the complexity of human beings. The contradictions and conflicts, changes and adaptations. The male and female protagonists love each other in their own way, but they inadvertently hurt each other due to their different perspectives and age concepts. Harmful, they change themselves and adapt to each other, like a hot knife cutting butter, but everything comes naturally. This is a story about two people with huge differences exploring their love for each other. It really takes a long time to calm down. I hope the author will succeed in his studies in the new year and continue to write this story with all kinds of flavors😘

The elderly and children all love to eat it. First of all, the subject matter is relatively new, and I haven't found anything similar. But it's really good (howl eat) The author's description of the environment is very good, and he unfolds the characters' inner feelings very delicately. It can be seen that the literary skills are profound and amazing. The overall plot has ups and downs. There are both daily peace and sudden climaxes. This is a constant reminder: this is wartime. The unpredictable next second all reveals the cruelty of war. It also reflects the world of different characters during the war. (Gives me an anti-war feeling) The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is even more delicate. Through the interweaving of contradictions and accidents, the development of the emotional line is promoted. (Also, the speed of this car is explosive. At first I thought I entered the wrong software.) In the end, this is a really good piece of work. I rarely post book reviews, but this book took away my first long review. (No one noticed that the author likes to use dashes?)

It's a pretty good novel. Whether it's the rhythm of the writing or the outbreak of conflicts, it's fascinating to read. However, as other reviews have said, the setting is incomplete. But it's understandable, but you still need to find a way to complete the settings. This will be a big disadvantage. It's obviously a good novel.

I felt very comfortable after reading the whole volume in one go. The author's writing is unexpectedly solid, the plot is smooth and compact, and mature like a published book. The war background is also very natural. The various conflicts between the protagonist, demihumans and immortal species are explained very naturally. One point is deducted for the background of the big world. It seems a bit too fragmented at present. We can only see some corners from the communication with the heroine. From the perspective of the main characters and military settings, the author has a set of detailed settings. I look forward to the author developing a vivid and detailed world in the future. OK, the latest chapter of the domestic setting has also been partially revealed, looking forward to the local plot (⭐️Added later

Dragon Girl, Modern Warfare, and a single female protagonist (plus a vampire loli) are elements that appeal to me very much. The author's writing style is good, but not as straightforward as many online articles. Putting aside some ACG elements, it feels like reading a classic literary novel, with multi-line plots, both bright and dark lines advancing at the same time. Some of the rhetoric is quite crude. All in all it looks very comfortable. Ps: Divina is cute

After reading it for the second time, I understood a lot of things. In fact, this book is a yandere article with a pure love for skin (but it is really different). There is even a small amount of partisanship mixed in. Of course, this book does contain a lot of depressing realistic elements, analyzing the relationship between humans and demi-humans. However, it needs to be pointed out that in the book, no one's views are correct, and all are wrong. There is no situation where everyone is right, not even Long Niang and Lao He. But overall, it's a very good book and worth reading (Fox is cute, the author, I want Yukio for the next book!!!)

It's well written, with a bit of 86 flavor in it, but it's not as depressing as 86. However, the most important thing about the whole book is the author's own style, which has nothing to do with the traditional Japanese-style Western fantasy beast-eared mother-in-law stickers.

The main text (he) has been completed. How can I put it? The writing is exquisite, and the plot is in line with the depressive theme of war. Lao He and Fei Quan meet across the ocean and fall in love amidst the flames of war. Chaos and war are the foundation of this book, and homesickness and returning home are the core of this book. When the sky turned white, they boarded the plane back home. This heavy and solid love also came to an end. They were each other's anchor and their attachment to a foreign country. The vampire is portrayed vividly, and her calmness is her highlight. She is full of arrogance and strength. She is a qualified soldier and a qualified elder. When Don Quixote's spear pierces her chest, will she think of the wine cellar in the manor, the third-place Olympic medal, regret for herself, or whether her soldiers will survive... …(This book is a book about demi-humans and humans. The fusion of war themes and demi-humans also has a unique flavor. The characters are very vivid, with almost no poisonous points, and the emotional scenes are also well written [OK]. The foreshadowing is well buried and filled. I give it 8.6 Out of 10. I read 1.4 [Smile] The extra is too sharp [cry][cry][cry])

First of all, the five stars for this masterpiece are still low. The most eye-catching thing about this book is the description of the war. The writing mainly focuses on the society in the rear and some people related to the war. It does not directly describe the war, but it gives people a sense of depression and the impact of the war is everywhere. The second is the characteristics of the immortal species. The author simply brought the immortal species to life, as if he had actually seen it. Immortals are not special, they are just mortals who live a long time, but because they have experienced a lot, they can understand the world and people. Whether it is the future direction or the person in front of him, the Immortal Seed can see clearly. But time has also given them calmness, allowing them to move towards their own endings calmly. Moreover, the times have left a distinct mark on them. They are like ancients who have adapted to modern life. They still belong to their own era in essence, so they are very nostalgic. And they are always very persistent about certain things, which is their sustenance for the long years... You can really read the weight of history from these immortal species. Finally, there are the male and female protagonists. Zi Feiquan and He Zhixing are very easy to beat. This book is truly "lascivious but not lewd", which is a very unique feature of this book. I feel like this can be published as a physical book.

It's so good, I haven't been able to read it in one sitting for a long time. Even though the author replied in the comments that he will not die, I still feel that the ending will be unexpected. After all, the author did not say who will not die, and there are many things more terrible than death [smile][smile][smile][smile] (Update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)

I have never imagined that the tone of this book is so heavy and the author's writing is so real. The whole book, especially the writing style at the beginning, is similar to Szpilman's memoir "The Pianist". It is full of despair and helplessness that the war has been so cruel, but life has to go on. All major events, life and death, are brushed aside in a single stroke, and even used as talk about taking pleasure in suffering, as if these are not big events. The emotional bond between the characters was made dense and sincere by the war. Definitely a rare masterpiece

This book. It's good to take your time. A rare masterpiece. This is my current state. I don't really want to read a book whose world view seems a bit heavy. If you eat too much sugar in the future, maybe it will come back to relieve your tiredness.

The author is very delicate when describing the relationship between the male and female protagonists, allowing readers to inadvertently imagine their appearance, tone of voice and body movements, and wander in their own fantasies. I like the male protagonist's responsibility, calmness and rationality; but I prefer Zi Feiquan's strong and deep preference for the male protagonist. Maybe it's my own fault. I have no resistance to this special feeling. I also imagined that the male protagonist would be enveloped in such love, and then take a nap in Zi Feiquan's arms, sinking forever. Thanks to the author! For writing characters that I love so much, your mind is filled with wonderful stories and the characters come to life in your writing! But it would be nice if the updates were faster [Love]

It's a very good book. I read the main text in 15 days. This book depicts the depressing atmosphere of war. The overall feeling is a bit heavy, and the plot is a bit draggy. The first volume seems really boring at first, but the quality of the subsequent volumes is completely acceptable. There are many things that are resolved so peacefully? How to explain the matter of time travel, it felt a bit simple in the end (although it didn't seem to be peaceful [laughs]), but the two people quarreled over this matter and then reconciled, which felt a bit mediocre. I thought this would be a climax plot. Although I was happy to see the two of them quarreling, it was still a bit unremarkable. Secondly, it was He who became an immortal species and drank a cup of father-in-law's horn. It was a bit unexpected. I felt that such an important plot would be written in detail and then just brushed off? It's also too short. I feel like it's not enough to read. 600,000 Words is just too short. Overall, highly recommended to watch Kougua, how come it's only 21,000 when I read it, but when I read it, it was still 30,000 (sad)

The way this book describes love is very unique, and the writing is good and attractive. But the background is a bit blurry at the beginning, but it's really good. Very few authors write about street fighting nowadays. The more you look at it, the better it looks. After slowing down and looking back, the core of this book is undoubtedly excellent, but the plot is relatively average, the desire to read is low, and it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless.

Look! No matter what aspect, the world view is my favorite type. The way the male and female protagonists get along is very harmonious. It is also very smooth to drive. It feels unique hahaha. The sweetness of the male and female protagonists is just right. The redemption of each other is also very touching. MD, especially the stomachache unique to Chinese people, is so nb. It hurts so much. I can't give you that feeling. I feel that the author is very talented in this area (blade warning) Now that I'm watching the end, I feel that the pace is a bit fast and the atmosphere is a bit depressing. Is it almost the final chapter? The author feels that I still haven't seen enough. I still want to see the daily life of the male and female protagonists [crying] [crying] Do we have to go back to China together? Author, I really beg you [I'm about to cry] Update the author a lot, don't be lazy. There will be free gifts, milk, and bread. [Love] [Love] [Love]

This is a book that appeals to me very much. The subject matter may be a bit unpopular, but the content is really good. I like the character of the heroine very much, and the portrayal is very good. I just hope that the author can finish Farewell to the Eunuch [Blowing Kiss]

A very realistic novel with a very unique flavor. When I first read the synopsis and the beginning, I thought it was a light-hearted and slightly suspenseful genre. The more I watched, the more something was wrong. The more I watched, the more amazing it became. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very realistic, and the plot is also unique and even heavy, very deep, and endlessly memorable. To be honest, I think this book can really be made into reality, and I feel that the environment of the foreign persimmon is not suitable for this type. I think this is a divine book, with the most valuable 9.4 Points!

The writing is quite fluent, the storyline is quite in-depth, and the writing style is also good. It uses the cloak of fantasy to describe the cruel reality intertwined with the love between the male protagonist and the dragon lady. There are five problems: First, the worldview is not developed quickly, and a few narrations are not added later. The writing is only driven by the behavior of the male protagonist, and the rhythm is slow; second, in a novel with the male protagonist as the main perspective, the description of the female protagonist is actually more profound than the male protagonist [laughing awkwardly], why don't we change the protagonist. At the same time, the male protagonist himself does not have the characteristics that a story protagonist should have or does not display them; thirdly, the XP writing (?) The role of female Asians in the book is always relatively high, and other characters are not distinct. And generally speaking, it gave me the stereotype that the author is sapiosexual + likes Nian Shang + Free Control, and it feels like the character follows the xp; fourth, it is a bit emotionally restrained, and the grand scenes such as war and the hearts of the small characters are not fully exaggerated, which is almost meaningless; fifth, the dashes are used indiscriminately; that's about it. I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

Finished reading the first volume. The author's writing skills are strong enough, the words are very powerful, and the complexity of people and the exchange of spiritual thoughts can be seen. At least when I read this book, I could feel that I was understanding the perspectives and thoughts of the characters in the story. I could feel their worldview from them. It was very vivid and had a strong sense of immersion. It was really strong. I really hope the author can stick to it until the end. I don't care whether the ending is good or bad. I just want to know what the story of the male and female protagonists is like. Author, I have your back! [Crying] I have read the latest chapter. I feel that the core of this book is very good and exciting. The writing is good and the artistic conception is good. I like it. I really want to see the ending soon. Please update! [Blowing kiss]