With ****

Let's talk about the problem of character OOC. The most important person here is Lao Luo. Would a guy who has lived for 400 years and been a lord not understand the ways of the world? It's not like Beatrice, who has been sedentary for 400 years. So what is certain is that Lao Luo is either pretending to be crazy or really crazy. I wrote that I was pretending to be crazy, that's all.

It is very delicate, and this kind of delicateness permeates all kinds of descriptions, whether it is the psychological portrayal of the characters, the description of the environment, the scenery, or the details of various weapons and equipment and the description of large scenes (such as the nuclear explosion of the white whale), as well as the level of witnessing (Chapter 28). In addition to the delicate descriptions, the plot logic and pretentiousness are also very good. The author authentication key is high [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] Take a look and cherish it! What a fool, this kind of writing can be eaten with a knife [face covering]

Writing out important supporting characters is a road rarely taken, and I wish the author good luck in taking it. I used to want to write a novel with a lot of supporting characters, but unfortunately I was too lazy and didn't have enough knowledge, so I didn't write it. The idea of ​​my novel is that the environment is frequently war-torn, and the exit method of the supporting characters can be based on the various people in history who died before leaving the battlefield. Such as bandit robbery, seasickness and falling into the water, friendly fire, car accidents, air crashes, diseases, assassinations, air raids, etc.

The author is very similar to a book I read called "Developing a Dimensional World"

The author's views are very correct. But it's a pity that I have never watched the animations of these worlds, whether from 0 or Spirit Cage, and I still feel a little uncomfortable.

Since the author has a Chinese comic world, can he add Under One Person? I want to see the collision between the real world and the alien system under One Person, and see what kind of sparks can be created [sneaky laugh]

A lunatic state of mind.

5 Stars. After reading dozens of chapters so far, it can be seen that the author intends to develop it seriously. The most important thing is that it has a high-level layout and looks better than similar works that only have fun [laughing]

You are safe and sound, and finally Wei Guangguang

Very good, I don't know how good it is

Be careful, I'm afraid it's gone, I'm here to fulfill my promise

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It's a pretty good book in handing in/bringing national flow.

Such a good book and such a good person, brothers ^0^ five stars to go.

Overall, it's okay, except that minor flaws caused by the protagonist's immature personality pop up from time to time.

The most realistic novel about traveling between two worlds that I have seen so far.

Are you serious about this cover?

It's very beautiful. Why don't many people see it? Is it because there are too few?

Pretty good novel

Very interesting, good luck to the author

OK OK A bit interesting

Good, good, good

I feel like I can [laughing evilly] Long live Emilia [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

All I can say is that it's very well written. (Straightforward, to the point)

Alas, there is no substitute in Tomato

The description of the novel is very powerful. The characters or the environment are very delicate and give people a good feeling.

It's a very nice book, not bad

The two-dimensional novel is beautiful.

Will you go to Cyberpunk 2077? What about Gundam World? What about the world of unlocking machines?

Two-dimensional, I haven't read a similar book for a long time, so good