The More My Brother Dies, the Stronger I Become. I Will Be Promoted to the Human Emperor by Making Games.

Overall, it's fine, but you should use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, you know what I mean. The subject matter you wrote in this game is novel and the content is substantial, so why insist on writing those old-fashioned slap-in-the-face plots? I think the content outside the game should be a protagonist who makes people love and hate. Rather than pretending to be a slap in the face, the old plot will be more attractive. Simply play the game. There are many things that can be extended by playing the game. The pace is not so fast and there are actually more things that can be written in detail. I believe that interspersing warm daily life between the games will be more interesting than the brainless villain (personal opinion, for reference [understood])

The game is a cliché, but it's the first time I've seen someone incorporate the worldview of cultivating immortals. Brilliant idea Disadvantages: The protagonist's show-off and slap-in-the-face plot is very vulgar. But the most important part of the game is pretty good. Considering the overall impression and future prospects, 5 stars are given

I think it looks great, especially the game content. But there are also shortcomings. The first one is the senior sister. Due to my dislike of goddess harem stories, I feel disgusted when the author writes female characters. Currently, the senior sister has developed a competitive spirit and curiosity about the protagonist. This is tentative. I hope she doesn't fall in love with the protagonist. After all, I can't fall in love with the game producer just because I love playing games. The second one is quite repetitive. I wonder if there will be a slap-in-the-face plot later on. In the beginning, the elder made a bet, and then the disciple Dabi made a bet with the elder. Of course, the two are good friends and have similar personalities. But if the plot is repeated once or twice, it won't feel very good. After all, there are only a few updates in total, and the dialogue will take up a lot of words, which is quite boring. After all, the mainstream is to watch disciples suffer, and the protagonist slaps in the face and pretends to be serious. Why don't I just go read a novel like Dou Po [face covering] [face covering]

I think it was fun to write. If you copy pvz, you will get five stars. After reading the author's previous book, it was very conventional. This book is quite new. Don't copy those conventional games. Just copy small games like Temple Run PVZ and I Wanna, which are very good. I like them both. The author should write more and try to update it four times a day. It's good and I love reading it. By the way, don't make too many pretentious plots, it's a bit too embarrassing. It's good to just make games w, but it would be better if it is without cp, don't write about female pairings and male protagonists having emotional lines, and the author has worked hard to make screenshots of i wanna. Don't be tired, but don't rest either... It's not easy to find a good game production seedling, don't be fooled! ! !

Following up. Currently five stars. The male protagonist is not a loser, and he has never seen a woman unable to walk. It's purely funny without punching, and can be read by both men and women. The writing style is above average and the ideas are very good. It is considered a good book by Tomato. I hope it won't be unfinished. Later, when I saw the game around 260, I felt very uninvolved. The people chatting no longer seemed to be ancient immortal cultivators, but smelled like modern hanging silk. I retract my original evaluation. Not recommended now.

The game design is very good, but there are often ridicules and slaps in the face. It would be better if there were less of these. The plot is still very good and worth watching.

5 Stars, the familiar game and the world of cultivating immortals are well integrated, at least the integration is not abrupt. It continues the slap in the face of the previous work, I like it. I hope that the game and immortality can be better integrated in the future, and I look forward to it.

I think it's well written. It's funny and humorous, but the premise is that you have to abandon your brain. If you discuss the issue too seriously, you won't be able to read any novels.

It's okay, the subject matter is quite new, the main character is a demon, and he makes a game to make the righteous path go to waste and practice (although I don't know why I actually played it, and everyone broke through, and the protagonist is not like a demon, the righteous path is more demonic than the demonic path)

When are you going to write a game? This pet-catching game is too long. The mini-game part written by the author feels more interesting [crying]. And because the setting requires breaking defenses or the death of a monk to accumulate magic points, it feels like it limits the subject matter. The protagonist is doing the game to cultivate something, not just for fun. It feels a bit like watching the protagonist work just because it is fun. I hope the system can reward the protagonist in this regard so that the protagonist can let go. The author's writing is actually very interesting, and there are no strange emotional lines. I think it's okay with the senior sister. It would also be good if they end up together. At the moment, it seems a bit ambiguous. Zhong Yi feels that there are actually many scenes that hide the male lead and it's very funny. The main character settings are very vivid and interesting. It would be nice to improve the fantasy settings. I might as well create a network. Only the forum feels so retro.

It's pretty good, the writing is smooth and there are a lot of laughs, but some of the flatulent plots could be reduced, and it doesn't have to be this kind of plot to advance the plot. Readers who like this kind of funny writing probably don't like things like suppressing first and then rising up, or beating the young and then the old.

Fantasy world × game production, a very novel combination. The author is an experienced player at first glance. He has dabbled in all kinds of games. Some chapters even have game screenshots, which is really hard to hold on to. This is how I understand some of the complaints. The first one is the episode in the Law Enforcement Hall. Many people felt aggrieved, but in the end the hall leader died in society and then looked at the wall and thought about it. It feels aggrieved to complain that the protagonist contributes to the sect, but isn't the protagonist just using the sect to become stronger? All subsequent developments require money and magic weapons, which are more like what everyone needs than making a contribution. The second one is that game production accounts for a larger proportion than cultivating immortals. This is true. The content of this book is more of a "everyone plays games together" plot than cultivating immortals. You can read it according to your preference. By the way, the opening paragraph of the review has a unique flavor. You can see that many senior players of the game often come up with a bunch of tactics and terms that young players today will never understand (

It's nice to look at. It's obvious that a lot of effort was put into adapting the game to the local version of Cultivation Realm. The design of Cultivation Realm to limit the size of the game is also very ingenious. The most important thing is that the game text downplays the protagonist and strengthens the reaction of the group of characters when playing the game. It has a good balance. It feels refreshing and immersive. If you continue writing at this momentum, the future is endless. Come on [Blow kiss]

I feel like this book could use less slap in the face. Conflict, I think, can be placed in a more outrageous place, similar to Thunder, which must be unexpected in terms of language and art like Blue Sea. Of course, complaining is also a must-try part. I think more abstract places can also be added to the game. Speaking of organizations like the Blue Sea, the Scum Group and the FFF Group, I think the entire plot of the author is oriented towards or a development-based game. It should be easy for the author to add this kind of organization, or the author can bury easter eggs in the game, leading players to discover the movies, animations or videos that created this kind of organization. In the later plot, you can also add some memes other than Internet memes, such as Jojo memes and blue memes. This book already has a funny foundation, and I feel that the author has a talent in this area, so the author can slowly turn slaps in the face into funny, and can add more funny content and parts that torture players later. This is my personal advice. I believe the author can write better and better. I hope the author can update more, preferably to more than 1,000 pictures. I hope I can see this scene when I open my eyes tomorrow morning (laughs)

The writing is clever and concise, with no nonsense or sloppiness, and it is readable. I found a good book, but the disadvantage is that it is too thin.

The reviews are very good. I also like to read the previous novel he wrote. I think this kind of novel about cultivating immortals and making games is very good. Xiaojie's novels are basically very good, and he writes about cultivating immortals. I think it is actually quite acceptable, and so far it is Well, he doesn't have a female protagonist, just like the previous book, basically there is no female protagonist. Most of them are pretentious and slap in the face, writing games. It is a type of cool writing, logic and other things are very good, and as long as the writing style of the current writing is maintained, there is no problem with 9 points or above. [Shy][shy]

Dead Cells Dead Cells [smile][smile], fast-paced, refreshing, fighting skills, multiple deaths, simply perfect. Immortal cultivators also like to go against the will of heaven and go to extremes, and there must be a bunch of curse blade players, who are really cool [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's really good-looking. Each game is described in detail, especially the War of War and the King. It's really good-looking\(//∇//)\It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it and the update speed is okay╮(￣▽￣)╭

It's pretty cool. I feel like I could add a big battlefield mode, which would make people feel the same all the time. But it's fun to play and earn magic points. There are options like Talisman, Sword, and more, as well as mounts like flying boats. It's best to delete the Sani Tower, so you can earn more.

This is truly the best game I've ever seen. Basically there are no poisonous points, oh, just clear it yourself, and the content is also very rich and interesting! Hey, Broken Tomato, why can't your score go up?

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, Tiancan Tudou sighed at himself, and Chen Dong was silent after reading it... This must be one of the four great masterpieces, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu almost lacks literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naiyan, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Du, Su Xin, Qin Emperor, Han Wu, Tang Zong, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness - ah, such a good novel, what should I do if I can never read it again in the future? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought that if others can't read such a good novel, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to dedicate this book review to the world for reading, and I want to keep reading this novel. Go up, go up! Until everyone sees it! As I walk between heaven and earth, with the scorching sun and bright moon in the sky, I have to ask, is this novel enough to read? Not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are surging and the water is rolling, I have to ask, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, among the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, and the immortals in the sea of clouds, I have to ask, is this novel updated quickly enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed content! Not even enough! Dear author, you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, and frowning makeup, like a water hibiscus, graceful and graceful, with natural beauty, fragrant, petite and exquisite, a peerless beauty, with picturesque features, delicate eyebrows, and beauty like a crown jade. , Beautiful face, delicate face, bright eyes and white teeth, thousands of beauties, allure of the city, perfect head and eyebrows, flower-like jade, eyes cut like water, graceful and graceful, immortal appearance, small family jasper, beautiful and wise, peach and plum in heaven, graceful and graceful, hands like soft jade, beautiful and shy of the moon. Water lotus, natural beauty, gentle and pleasant, beautiful, noble and cool, most gorgeous, delicate eyebrows, as beautiful as a fairy, ice and snow, smart, gentle and lovely, beautiful as a fairy, unparalleled elegance, natural beauty. So can you update?

I usually play a lot of games, so I love reading game-related books. Especially this one directly applies familiar games to the world of immortality, which is very interesting! The integration is not rigid, each monk player has his own personality, and there are many funny plots. It can be said to be very interesting and beautiful! I hope the author will persevere and don't give up even ten times a day [crying]

The front part is pretty troubling. If you think it doesn't look good, you can skip reading it. In fact, it won't have any impact. The author didn't dig any holes or anything. In fact, it is quite good as a mindless article that is very relaxing to read.

It looks very good. I originally thought that cultivating immortals would conflict with the game, but in the end, the relationship between reality and the game is very harmonious. The game changes are also very good, and the scenes of players playing are also very funny. That is, some games are not as difficult as possible, such as four-person traps and some buffs for digging for survival. On the contrary, it affects the look and feel. I feel that it is not necessary to be stuck at the difficulty level that is just right to pass the level to reflect the effect of players breaking the defense.

You must support our Laojie. The subject matter is quite novel and the writing is reassuring. There was a peak 9.5 Game article before Laojie, but the result is gone. I don't feel that there is any poisonous point at the moment. If you are here to read about games, then I definitely recommend it, but if you want to read Cultivation of Immortals, you'd better look elsewhere.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, I cried while watching it, come on, although the first part is a bit more interesting than the usual otherworld games, it's just about cultivating immortals, but as long as the plot is good, it's really good, and then I really like the part about cultivating the demons, the world, the humanities, the players, the changes! If it were me, I would not hesitate to practice all my skills to make that historian worse than shit. I really can't write a book in the style of a demonic practitioner. Come on, I want to read it. I basically don't comment on the book, but when I see the author doing this, I still encourage him, come on! ! !

Congratulations on your successful debut. The plot is not sluggish. It's all on the main line. It's still very interesting.

This novel is very beautiful, the writing is very delicate, the plot is very logical, and it is not aggrieved at all. It is a pure and refreshing novel. I highly recommend it to everyone, but I don't recommend it to myself.

It was pretty cool to watch, especially when Old Man Ding died. Then I discovered that there were a lot of bad reviews these days, saying that Cultivation of Immortals was poorly written. Boy, the introduction said that Cultivation of Immortals is a supplement, and it doesn't matter what the priority is. If you want to see Cultivation of Immortals, look for people who focus on Cultivation of Immortals. I just want to read about game design. Cultivation of Immortals just adds a little more fun. After all, other game designers write about horror games or unlimited streaming. How novel is this?

This is a good book, but the author is too easily swayed by emotions, which affects the reading. It can be seen that the protagonist is based on the author himself. The protagonist is a person who is easily moved by himself and feels good about himself. Just like the author is very confident in the story he has revised, some of the revisions are really good. To make a complaint, in the early stage, I entered the environment for cultivation, but in the later stage, I entered the environment just for fun.