The Fallen Heroine Has Become a Yandere, I Just Want to Go Home

A masterpiece, with delicate characterization, do you know? Almost all the books on Tomato have a common problem, that is, you can clearly feel that the protagonist has no emotions, or is very silly, but it is purely for the sake of being silly, as if to emphasize the character of the protagonist. But this book is different. As I read it, I can always feel that the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person. It is really well written.

The book is still very interesting, and the character of the male protagonist is also improving. Recalling the title of the previous book, I think it was called: Before She Became a Bus

Five stars. I have read 160 chapters. I can only say that the writing is very interesting, the story is complete, the plot is touching, and the characterization is nothing to say. Also, when a passerby revealed that he approached the heroine because of her divine sin magic, he just said "Are you disappointed?" Watch more of the interaction between the male protagonist BOOS and Nie Shuran. I feel that these two are very close to each other. Also, the Demon King is shaped like a chaotic neutral, without that particularly evil feeling. I hope there will be a good ending. As well as the three conditions of the red dragon section, I feel like I have learned how to do nesting dolls. An event can be broken down into many small things, small steps, and then done step by step. In the end, the magic power of the male protagonist's body was blindly guessed to be the [thinking] of the future female protagonist, and the Demon King revealed that it was related to time, which may also have something to do with the male protagonist's return. I feel that there are many highlights that attract me, including the male protagonist's proactive response, the female protagonist's obedience, the cuteness and liveliness of the black cat, the laziness of the sleeping earl, the perfection of earl Lingmei (it feels very cool), the image of the devil as a fun-loving person, the persistence of the princess and Momo as a demon. There can still be love. The image of the red dragon feels as funny as the devil, and there is also the temptation of the puppet heart. To be honest, I should have accepted it a long time ago. I lamented how powerful the male protagonist is and how much information the male protagonist knows about the world. However, since the male protagonist has completed the game in CG, it makes sense. Of course, the most important thing is that the emotional line is very well written. I didn't fall in love with him all at once like other novels. The male protagonist has always wanted to go home. I find it very interesting and look forward to the follow-up development. What kind of reaction will the female protagonist have when the male protagonist returns home? However, I feel that the ending must be that the male and female protagonists are together. Whether they succeed or fail to go home, [Thinking] All the goals of the male protagonist revolve around going home, and going home requires the omniscient and omnipotent book, which in turn requires the female protagonist to master the magic of divine sin. Then the male protagonist changes from big goals to small goals. He first trains the female protagonist to master the magic of divine sin, then finds the book of omniscient and omnipotent, asks the heroine, and then asks for the way home, and then goes home. This is probably the main thread that runs through the whole story, but the heroine is still being cultivated. It is estimated that after the heroine becomes stronger, it will be difficult for the hero to leave. After all, she is very dependent on the hero, so the hero also thought of this. It was foreshadowed that there will be a small backstab. I don't know where it is. I haven't seen the backstab yet [Thinking]. It seems that it should be after getting the book of omniscience and omnipotence. After all, there is no need to worry about it, but I feel that the foreshadowing is a bit too long, so maybe before getting omniscience and omnipotence, it should be after the heroine has strong strength, I should appropriately reduce her favorability, so that she will not be too sad after leaving, and then the heroine is not happy, and then the echo of love and nostalgia begins [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. 👌🏻I have finished expressing my feelings. I feel that it has given me a good experience. The author needs to update more. It is not enough. [Shy]

This book is suitable for those bookworms with a little more experience. It is not suitable for people who are particularly concerned about the purity of the heroine. And if you can accept the above, it is indeed interesting. The protagonist is more like a human being than the protagonists of most tomato novels.

Yes, I'm not going to get into it, but the plot and ideas are quite good. Well, it's more of a daily novel. The author's writing style is still a bit immature, but it's much better than Xiaobai's novels. Come on author! ! ! There is no great player, because he has the power of retracement. Except for the fact that the protagonist was careless in the early stage and was attacked (it is equivalent to not being censored after retracement), there is no great player.

It is a novel with a very novel setting, a bit like re0, but the male protagonist is more decisive than 486. However, the male protagonist currently does not have many tricks, and the female protagonist does not interact with the male protagonist enough. However, I am still looking forward to the yandere plot of the female protagonist chasing the male protagonist. I am very optimistic about this book [Blow a kiss] [Read carefully]

Dream ending. It's not particularly good visually, but it's a really great piece of work. The memory section at the end made me think deeply. If a person has an almost immersive memory of being bullied, but has not been bullied, does that mean he has not been bullied? I always feel that a broken mirror cannot be put back together. This is a bit of a plot that I find intolerable. But in fact, this work had this kind of tendency from the beginning. I kind of doubt that the author has thought too much in this regard. No, the ending part still feels too poisonous. So awesome. What's the difference between having a memory and being bullied?

I envy people who can write stories, who can give life to their words and touch the readers' heartstrings. This book has a small world view, but it has no complicated framework or settings and is very clean. The changes and growth of the male protagonist and female protagonist are shown in an epic Western fantasy adventure so subtly. Maybe the author originally wanted to write about a yandere, but I think maybe the author has his own new perspective on the discussion of "love" as the story develops. Perhaps, compared to morbid obsession and compromise, the trust and support cultivated by companionship can give people more reliance and salvation.

After finishing coding the main story, everyone started to give it good reviews! It costs 100 yuan to swipe one. Although it is not much, it is not real either. Hh...... Guilt and evil have always been judged by the emotions of love and hate. This is the curse and blessing everyone is born with. Everyone, after reading this article, do you feel that this is a hearty reading? If so, that would be great. And finally... With this sentence, I would like to wish you and me a happy morning and dream together. Then a ray of breeze appeared, See you in the next wonderful story.

I came in because of the mysterious title when I was a kid, but apart from the beginning, it was almost a scam. I still think about the humiliation the female protagonist suffered while the male protagonist tried his best to find the only HE world line among all the world lines. However, the birth point that is refreshed at zero o'clock every day does not support this imagination. Only the first chapter of the story has a humiliating plot. Starting from the second chapter of the story, it is a wonderful and otherworldly epic. The witch who locked the pinnacle of the Tower of Destiny, the last princess of the withered kingdom, the lonely red dragon looking for the legend, the witch with a puppet heart. The fantasy color is strong, with a touch of secondary sense, and it depicts a wonderful fantasy story. The style and story are superb.

The writing is very good, and it gives me the feeling that I am really watching the male protagonist redeem every tragic person on the way home, and the female protagonist is also growing up, from the initial rejection of ignorance and timidity like a quail? To the latest plot, full of vigilance towards strange things, and can even play back dozens of times with the protagonist. As for the male protagonist, going home has become his obsession. The pain, helplessness, loneliness and numbness on the way home can hardly affect the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is also being redeemed by the female protagonist, just like the female protagonist reveals a heartfelt smile to the male protagonist for the first time, and goes downstairs with the female protagonist to cover the male protagonist with a blanket in the middle of the night. What moved me deeply was probably the passage where the male protagonist gave the female protagonist a birthday gift, "This is a CG that has never happened before." Perhaps the tragic fate of the female protagonist has really been changed by the male protagonist, and she can welcome her own happiness. And the male protagonist spent Disk's recent life with him, witnessing the end of the legend. Even if he didn't get the information he wanted, he didn't choose to go back and start over, because it's enough to go through the things that are hard to remember. As for the heroine's being treated and turned back, benevolent people have different opinions. I think this is not a too big poisonous point. After all, it was raised at the beginning of the article. All in all, this is a story about mutual salvation, mutual help, and mutual growth. I hope the author can write for a lifetime🤓🤓🤓

It's great to watch. The uncomfortable part related to H only grows in the early stage. As long as the psychological barrier in the early stage is overcome, there will be no problems later. The subsequent rollbacks are not due to the problems in the early stage. The setting is more like a taunt, allowing people to choose the contestants who are racing against the lion at once. The characters, emotions, plot and detailed descriptions are very good. The main line is clear, there is no water, and the rhythm is very clear. Character growth and changes are normal. The character narration is profound, the emotional lines are not complicated, the story is very good, the inner conflicts of the characters are well expressed, and some common settings are reasonably explained from some unique angles (for example: Why does the dragon like glittering wealth? Because wealth can attract people, and the arrival of people can relieve the dragon's loneliness.)

The most charming thing about this book is the male protagonist, whose desire to go home exceeds his adventure in another world. The male protagonist is an ordinary person, so he will also collapse. For example, Chapter 418 writes the male protagonist's collapse in the most vivid way. The author has good control over the creation of the male protagonist and is successful. This book is a late-stage effort. You can compare it with the previous article and find that the author's writing style has improved linearly in the later period. The author has worked hard. Of course the female protagonist is also good, but slightly inferior to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is quite handsome in some chapters, such as the scene where Long Yishan turns into a black man. It is a qualified review document and is recommended to be read.

Five stars because I felt that the writing was very to my liking and because it was a confession. I actually subconsciously felt very regretful and confessed because the male and female protagonists were in pure love and could not accept other harems. The portrayal of the male protagonist is very interesting, and it meets my requirements for a decisive and decisive character. The small daily redemption and warmth also make me want to eat sweets. This is Asasi's decisive and decisive character, with clear goals, and a pure love. His pretentious words and deeds meet my requirements for a refreshing male protagonist. Heroine, you are a sweet, fragrant and soft little cake. You are not arrogant but coquettish. After being shy, you express your feelings. You are so pure that you love me to death. The setting is very lovable. The supporting characters are well portrayed and some are very impressive. All in all, it's a top-notch movie. The male and female protagonists are extremely likable, and the pretentious plot is reasonable and reasonable. I occasionally regret that I can't have a harem.

27 Have been read, more than 90% of the books have a logic score of 9 or more on Tomato. The male protagonist is cautious and decisive in killing, and seeks perfection in the possible. His personality is my preferred type, 90% is chaotic neutral, plus 10% is chaotic good. I personally prefer protagonists who are more than 30% chaotic and good. I have finished reading. I am a more "rational" person when reading novels, so I am noncommittal about the beginning of the novel. Rather than reincarnating the protagonist into Shet, a dragon, or a gate, I care more about whether he can carry out his own will and how he will act to achieve his goals. Of course, I also have a certain amount of mental mysophobia. I don't like things that are too evil, such as a certain helicopter dragon, and I don't like those that are too stupid. The protagonist of this book is okay. He is smart, decisive, has a perseverance that can only be found in novels, and is very naughty.

The language is a bit bland, but you can read it. The plot is basically the same and you can watch it. As for the protagonist, it's a little less three-dimensional now, maybe due to length, but it can be seen that it has obvious growth. (If it can be written to the very end, the daily life of the male/female protagonist is also possible)

The author's writing style is quite good. The setting of this article is clearly stated at the beginning. It is really good that there is no misunderstanding. The author is very good at describing details, the writing style is very delicate, and he is also good at shaping characters. He can create the basic character in a few words. At first glance I don't feel anything yet, but after reading too much, I can't stop. It's not a simple cool article template. You can really read it with your brain and feel it with your heart. Some places are still very immersive. It's regretful and touching. It's very down-to-earth. I hope it gets better and better, and there will be more updates!

In fact, everyone just wants to watch something sweet. I think Novice Village is the best-written. The emotional interaction between the two is well written, which highlights the Lu side. After leaving the village, the clear goal is to go home. The plot is mostly various adventure stories, which highlights Fan's side, and the emotional interaction is less. After going through ups and downs, facing the heroine's sincere confession, the hero still can't face his feelings, and he has to lie to the heroine and hide it, go back to avoid problems, and separate the plots. Doesn't the ending have to be happy? In fact, everyone just wants to watch something sweet, really.

I reached chapter 352 in two days and wrote this review. Due to the background setting, many readers who have not read in depth this is a cuckold novel, but I personally regard the original work and the current world as two parallel world lines. I am a person who only watched Pure Love in JM and have not seen this kind of poisonous points (personal opinion, refute your opinion) What I feel about this book so far is that the author's writing and storytelling are very, very high. The logical chain of everyone's actions is very clear and consistent with the characters. The basic points of everyone's characters have not changed from the beginning to the present. The lines of events have been clarified in many retrospectives. There are no information errors that appear in ordinary retrospectives. There are also strong connections between each chapter. What makes me more emotional is that even if it is just a very small episode, it also injects very appropriate ideas and reversals (such as the cursed box). Many places can make people's eyes shine, which is also an important reason why I can read more than 300 chapters in two days. In terms of character creation, there is no need to say much. As long as you read on, you will be able to appreciate the exquisiteness in this aspect (such as the Demon King Dragon and the Witch) If this book can be completed smoothly, it can definitely be called a masterpiece.

There are only a few good books, so read and cherish them. Just as there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers, I think Tomato is a good book. If you want to read a cool, fast-paced, invincible novel, you can quit it and don't read it. It's so beautiful. Not to mention the narrative style that's comparable to Fulian's, the author's plot is also trying to follow a similar path.

I should be one of the earliest book friends. I started reading it when it was tens of thousands words long and the title of the book was "Bus". Before I knew it, it had been a year. At first I was attracted by the title when I opened this book, because Tomato really has no interest in reading anymore and wanted to read something "heavy". Unexpectedly, this novel turned out to be exceptionally fresh and refined. It can be seen that the author wanted to use his own understanding to write a different story, and he did it, which is great. Overall, this is a novel with a very comfortable pace, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not very tumultuous. It is the kind of plain but full of ups and downs that I expected. To be honest, I especially love this type of travelogue with a magical background and sweet pure love! The author must work hard! [Blow kiss]

Chapter 182 Leave a claw on both sides. It's a very novel theme, with pure love and bullishness coexisting, and a swinging start. You need some mental preparation and drug resistance to watch it. The rhythm of the first part is much tighter. The pure love party may be watching it with fear. It feels like everyone is an enemy, and everyone is an enemy. They are afraid that if they are not careful, the heroine will be doomed. Although the writing is better after the second part, and many of the short stories are really exciting and exciting, it is a pity that the other female characters are the most exciting, and the plot between the male and female protagonists actually has no ups and downs. The plot even moves towards a rhythm where the male protagonist is ready to start a harem when he meets someone else. There are a lot of incidents where he flirts with others if he doesn't like them. Therefore, the comments section is basically dominated by the home party and the harem party, and those who criticize the male and female protagonists have basically disappeared. As a person who doesn't like to watch stomachache plots or Shura fields, I took a sneak peek at the end of the fifth chapter, and it seems that the single female protagonist still wins? I hope the author can stick to his original intention and love pure to the end. Give it five points and wait until the ending to watch it. Hope you don't get slapped in the face. [Cover face]

In fact, I was dissuaded by the plot at the beginning because I couldn't read some of it, but when I had the patience to read the previous plot, I realized how good this book is. The character creation is still successful, the characters are flesh and blood, the male protagonist saves Mu Qianqian in flashbacks, and grows from a slightly middle-aged boy to a "melancholy noble son" [laughs] [OK], including the final reversal. I think it is a very good plot. It not only fills the pit, but also makes Bai Mu regain the hope and feelings that have been extinguished for a long time, making her a lovable person. Even with the dark and desperate past, Bai Mu gets his wish. Summary: It has been pushed to the extreme, I highly recommend it. [Laughs][OK]

It's beautiful, I love it, I love this kind of indescribable and subtle love, it's much better than those grooved fast food love, it's so sweet. Hajifan who wants to go home and Hajilu who likes the heroine are both sweet and slightly sad. It's very addictive. I like the vivid characters in it, but I hate the grooved world background. Ah, I still want to see it. I'm probably sick and can only break away from the reality of the ditch for a short time to experience the beauty that exists in dreams. [Thinking] Sigh~ Having said that, Hajilu and Hajifan should be careful [Shy], the little black room is coming. It's over, alas, I feel so sad and inexplicably empty. I feel reluctant to leave the darkened heroine, but also reluctant to let the story end. Although I came here for the yandere, it seems that Pure Love is not bad. But I don't know why, I felt like crying after reading it.

4 Stars, because the whole story is gentle enough, and the performance and character of the heroine Mu Qianqian are touching. The male protagonist Fan Zhenjue, also known as Lu Renyi, is worthy of admiration for his calm, courageous, and persevering performance in the book. His sometimes fond of being cool in the middle school also creates vivid and interesting characteristics for his characters. The content of the entire book is indeed as delicate and graceful as autumn leaves, as gorgeous as summer flowers. It is a good road movie, but it lacks a lot of plots and plots that should be there, making the journey a bit hasty. The most important thing is that I felt lonely after reading it. The missing star was given to another Qian. (It's hard to calm down)

First of all, a reminder, there are cows in this work, there are cows! Although there is nothing after rewinding, thanks to the author's delicate writing style, the early cow plot is very suffocating and very stomach-churning. Secondly, the writing is delicate, the characters are well drawn, the world view is clean, the background is simple, and the rules are single. It is a typical light novel. In terms of character creation and foreshadowing details, it can be seen that this book has an outline. The foreshadowing is deep and suitable for second reading (as long as you can hold back the bullshit) Finally, the main theme of this work is the intertwining of hope and despair, which is suppressed first and then raised (that is, the suppression is really low). The text is full of pictures and has a movie-like texture. The word count is not that small, and it's a pleasure to read. Summary: Zero points for people who can't stand cows at all, don't try it, it's absolutely poisonous! I give it a 3-star recommendation to those who can tolerate a little bit. I recommend skipping to the later volumes, which will break away from the butter and get into the main text. For those who don't care about the awesome plot and even go for this, I still recommend it with three stars, because it is really suffocating and chokes every word. It is not recommended to watch any chapters with awesome plots.

A good book, definitely enough to pass the time, and quite interesting to read. The writing is unpretentious and reads just right. The plot develops step by step in an orderly manner But the shortcomings are also obvious. There is a lack of caution in logic, such as why the protagonist is so insistent and serious as an H player, and the pure love flaws caused by the background. Recommended but not highly recommended

It feels pretty good after staying up late to watch it, and there are some poisonous points, but in my opinion, it's nothing. It's the first time I've watched this kind of subject, and it feels surprisingly good (anyway, the male protagonist can backtrack, and he can directly change the mine card to a new one, so it's a bit uncomfortable to watch in the early stage) [smile]

It's good to read. Even a mysophobic person likes it. I accidentally read it no less than 5 times when I was looking for it. But I gave up because of the heroine. However, I still wanted to give it a try because of the subject matter, high scores, book reviews, etc. I have to say that it was really well written. I was looking forward to the plot below. Also, I watched it while disconnected from the Internet, so not counting the reading time. I watched it for 3 or 4 hours, I guess, from about 4 o'clock to 7 o'clock.

It's well written. At first glance, I thought the setting was a bit hard to accept, but I got into it without realizing it😳. The rhythm in the early stages is good, and the male protagonist has a three-dimensional image, but the female protagonist has a dispensable vase feeling. However, as the story develops, the female protagonist also shows her own charm. The only bad thing is, why is the male protagonist so naughty in the later stage? It's not good to confess to the female protagonist earlier, I want to watch sweet love😇