There is no time travel, no system, no spiritual roots, no grandpa with you, no decisive killing and planning for eternity. There is only an ordinary scholar who likes to have a little temper. Because he was mistakenly seduced by a ghost, he stepped into the path of immortality. From angrily scolding the dragon king to holding a sword to kill Kunlun, he used "humane innovation" to fight against the "eternal destiny", broke the destiny of immortals and gods, used his own choice to reshape the rules of heaven and earth, showed the counterattack of mortals, forged his body into a diamond carving, and I will protect humanity as it moves forward! (Friends who are interested in this book or who dislike the insufficient content of this book, if you want to understand the background and world view of this book, you can read the author's other work "The Invisible Road to Online Games")
Reader comments
The protagonist has an open and upright character. From the beginning when he scolds the Dragon King, his aura of righteousness runs throughout. This is the hallmark of a good work. The language style is undoubtedly the greatest feature of this book. The author strives to imitate the language and narrative methods of storytelling scripts throughout the entire story. Even the story structure and plot development have obvious traces of storytelling. As a novel, it may still feel a bit immature, but as a love letter to traditional story-telling literature, it is already moving enough. The writing quality is definitely higher than the average level of Tomato, but from time to time some basic common sense writing errors are exposed, which is a pity of this novel.
Not much to say, so far, a rare good book, a traditional fairy tale!
Looking at this article, the writing style is refreshing and elegant, and has some of the writing style of "The Fairy Sword and Love" by Guan Pingchao. Come on, author!
Very good
The protagonist has the temperament that his age should have. The senior masters have their own characteristics. Although it is more common to appear in similar movies, what is commendable is that the protagonist rarely has a violent temper and has the unique temperament of a scholar.
The look and feel of this book is quite good. It has the charm of old novels. I hope the author can add some of his own creative settings. Although the writing style is good, in this era, I am afraid that the audience for traditional immortality writings is not too large. Even if the general framework of [face-covering] has been finalized, the details can be newly created. Readers still need some freshness, and the author can try to make a breakthrough [Salute].
The fairy tales in the cloak of cultivation are more heroic than immortals.
The writing is good, the story structure is compact, and it has the shadow of a chapter novel. In the story, there are not only the elegant emergence of immortals, but also the slaying of demons and demons for the country and the people, punishing evil and promoting good.
Suitable for readers who like to watch heroes doing justice.
A well-written masterpiece.
The battles, adventures, and friendships are wonderfully written.
The meditation insights are also very well written, but these insights do not attract me. The low rating may be related to the fact that there are too many meditation insights.
The classical fairy tales have a flavor that I heard from the novels from a few years ago. I prefer this kind of novels that are heart-warming and heroic. This is the kind of fairy tales I like. But I personally feel that some places can still be a little more advanced with the times. There is no need to repeat the introduction of the origin and function of some used moves. It's very friendly to new readers, but for old bookworms like us, it's actually a bit torture and a test of patience. Of course, I only listen to the book, not read it, so my opinion may be different, but I have only listened to more than 40 episodes, so it may be different in the future.
This is what you need to watch for fairy tales, with solid writing and a fairy-like air.
The writing is very good and the story has a fairy tale feel.
Authentic classical literature, sir, a great talent!
There was a bit of procrastination in doing things, but although he had the character of a monk, he was a little less decisive in killing people.
Plain language is as quiet as water moistening things
The writing is fresh and smooth, and it feels like watching The Legend of Shushan Swordsman
It was a great pleasure to read, such a great book!
Very good, worth a look
Classical novels, this is the flavor of Xianxia
It looks good, and the writing and narration have the style of a gentleman.
The writing is good and the concept is clever. The author has a deep background in literature! I love so much!
The writing is very good, very fairy-like style
A good book. A serious article about cultivating immortals. The plot is reasonable and the story is wonderful.
Very nice, very beautiful.
A very nice book, an authentic fairy tale, with a low score.
A very good book, with delicate writing and fascinating plot. It is not a fast-food online article, suitable for old bookworms!
Such carefully crafted words, simple and natural plots, and characters with clear thoughts are really rare in online articles nowadays. Please read it and cherish it. It's just that sometimes the description text is a little too much.
The writing is good, but there are relatively few Taoist books. I hope it will continue with a few more chapters.
The writing style of this book is very to my liking. However, some of the plots and characterizations are not in line with my reading. However, I highly recommend this book. It is one of the rare writing styles with a classical flavor.
A rare masterpiece of traditional immortality cultivation in recent years. I read it in one sitting and got 5 stars.
It's good to read. This is what cultivating immortals is. A sect has the meaning of a sect. It's not like other novels about cultivating immortals where you fight and kill to earn this and earn that. There is absolutely no cultivation of the mind. It is highly recommended [laughs]
Classical Xianxia, practicing both technique and mind, elegant diction, ancient style and charm, in the end: this is the Xianxia in my heart!
It's beautiful. I haven't seen such a wonderful work in a long time.
What a great book. The author's writing skills are not inferior to those of great masters. Come on, author, don't cut up the book. It's hard to find food and grass these days [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]
The protagonist has an open and upright character. From the beginning when he scolds the Dragon King, his aura of righteousness runs throughout. This is the hallmark of a good work. The language style is undoubtedly the greatest feature of this book. The author strives to imitate the language and narrative methods of storytelling scripts throughout the entire story. Even the story structure and plot development have obvious traces of storytelling. As a novel, it may still feel a bit immature, but as a love letter to traditional story-telling literature, it is already moving enough. The writing quality is definitely higher than the average level of Tomato, but from time to time some basic common sense writing errors are exposed, which is a pity of this novel.
Not much to say, so far, a rare good book, a traditional fairy tale!
Looking at this article, the writing style is refreshing and elegant, and has some of the writing style of "The Fairy Sword and Love" by Guan Pingchao. Come on, author!
Very good The protagonist has the temperament that his age should have. The senior masters have their own characteristics. Although it is more common to appear in similar movies, what is commendable is that the protagonist rarely has a violent temper and has the unique temperament of a scholar.
The look and feel of this book is quite good. It has the charm of old novels. I hope the author can add some of his own creative settings. Although the writing style is good, in this era, I am afraid that the audience for traditional immortality writings is not too large. Even if the general framework of [face-covering] has been finalized, the details can be newly created. Readers still need some freshness, and the author can try to make a breakthrough [Salute].
The fairy tales in the cloak of cultivation are more heroic than immortals. The writing is good, the story structure is compact, and it has the shadow of a chapter novel. In the story, there are not only the elegant emergence of immortals, but also the slaying of demons and demons for the country and the people, punishing evil and promoting good. Suitable for readers who like to watch heroes doing justice.
A well-written masterpiece. The battles, adventures, and friendships are wonderfully written. The meditation insights are also very well written, but these insights do not attract me. The low rating may be related to the fact that there are too many meditation insights.
The classical fairy tales have a flavor that I heard from the novels from a few years ago. I prefer this kind of novels that are heart-warming and heroic. This is the kind of fairy tales I like. But I personally feel that some places can still be a little more advanced with the times. There is no need to repeat the introduction of the origin and function of some used moves. It's very friendly to new readers, but for old bookworms like us, it's actually a bit torture and a test of patience. Of course, I only listen to the book, not read it, so my opinion may be different, but I have only listened to more than 40 episodes, so it may be different in the future.
This is what you need to watch for fairy tales, with solid writing and a fairy-like air.
The writing is very good and the story has a fairy tale feel.
Authentic classical literature, sir, a great talent! There was a bit of procrastination in doing things, but although he had the character of a monk, he was a little less decisive in killing people.
Plain language is as quiet as water moistening things
The writing is fresh and smooth, and it feels like watching The Legend of Shushan Swordsman
It was a great pleasure to read, such a great book!
Very good, worth a look
Classical novels, this is the flavor of Xianxia
It looks good, and the writing and narration have the style of a gentleman.
The writing is good and the concept is clever. The author has a deep background in literature! I love so much!
The writing is very good, very fairy-like style
A good book. A serious article about cultivating immortals. The plot is reasonable and the story is wonderful.
Very nice, very beautiful. A very nice book, an authentic fairy tale, with a low score.
A very good book, with delicate writing and fascinating plot. It is not a fast-food online article, suitable for old bookworms!
Such carefully crafted words, simple and natural plots, and characters with clear thoughts are really rare in online articles nowadays. Please read it and cherish it. It's just that sometimes the description text is a little too much.
The writing is good, but there are relatively few Taoist books. I hope it will continue with a few more chapters.
The writing style of this book is very to my liking. However, some of the plots and characterizations are not in line with my reading. However, I highly recommend this book. It is one of the rare writing styles with a classical flavor.
A rare masterpiece of traditional immortality cultivation in recent years. I read it in one sitting and got 5 stars.
It's good to read. This is what cultivating immortals is. A sect has the meaning of a sect. It's not like other novels about cultivating immortals where you fight and kill to earn this and earn that. There is absolutely no cultivation of the mind. It is highly recommended [laughs]
Classical Xianxia, practicing both technique and mind, elegant diction, ancient style and charm, in the end: this is the Xianxia in my heart!
It's beautiful. I haven't seen such a wonderful work in a long time.
What a great book. The author's writing skills are not inferior to those of great masters. Come on, author, don't cut up the book. It's hard to find food and grass these days [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]