A Scumbag Start: Chinese Card Maker Explodes in Another World

The plot is very good-looking. I can't say it is novel, I can only say it is good-looking. (If you delve into some plot details, it's a bit... Hard to tell.) It feels like a very ordinary passionate novel. But the writing style is a bit elementary, I hope it can be improved. I would like to make some small suggestions (please don't read it if it hits the target): get more weapons. I don't quite accept the character cards in the article. It feels a bit too young. After all, promote China. As for mythological characters, it is best to use characters from mythology to describe them. Nezha, the devil boy, is different from the description in the myth, so this book uses Nezha from the devil boy, which gives people the impression that he is very young (but I can't tell) (maybe it's because the special effects given are too sufficient, I feel that a very powerful Nezha will appear. But I didn't expect it to be the devil boy Nezha (in the form of a child), this feeling of gap) I would like to ask the author if this book can be completed in the future? There is no guarantee that it will not be unfinished, and I am afraid of discontinuing the update [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Warm reminder: This article is about two heroines, Lily. It does not mean that the two heroines each have their own emotional lines.

It's so cool. I don't know why the card masters in the female videos are all men. It's inexplicable! Seeing that it is really good so far, I suggest that the plot should be the main focus and the emotions should be supplemented. I hope it will be a long article, ε=(´ο｀*))) Unfortunately, it takes too long to develop the article, and I discovered it too early [awkward laugh]

Let me first state that I am a not picky reader. Even if there are many bad things, I will insist on reading a few more chapters and only divide them into good and average ones. My evaluation of this book is average. First of all, the author's writing is not bad, and the narrative is complete and picturesque. However, I can't stand it. From the few pictures so far, the story line is blunt and the emotional line is the same. Of course, it may be that I have read less. The complete version should be better, if I can stick to the premise. In terms of overall level, after looking at the author's homepage, the level of the first book is already very good. I will evaluate it after I finish reading this book. Finally, I wish the author a better next book. I believe you will make great progress.

It's super cool. The whole thing is flowing smoothly. From the early stage, it's a step-by-step plot. [Thinking] The heroine is usually very reliable, but she is relatively dull in front of Qin [laughing]. The deputy CP is also very cute [shy]. Every couple is very protective of their wives and jealous [making faces]. It feels very good-looking [laughing] and there are many famous scenes. Every moment, they slap people in the face and shock passers-by [cool]. It's so cool. And when I see the team members trusting the heroine very much, I feel warm in my heart. There is also a part that is almost like "How can the people of China be the same person"? I feel like I am being protected by my own family. No one can hurt the sense of déjà vu [heartfelt] The author must update frequently and not stop updating [almost crying] otherwise it will be really sad [crying]

It's beautiful, especially the card version, and it has two heroines. Don't give up, author. It's very beautiful. Come on, I'll tell you my thoughts after it's finished. It looks very good now. I like it very much. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I'm looking forward to it. It's rare for two heroines to post a post. I hope I won't be like other people who stop updating when they get to a wonderful point [please update]

The author's writing style is very good and novel, and he also has a lot of knowledge. The characters he writes are vivid. The only drawback is that the update is too slow. I have to wait a few weeks to update this little bit. The author, please update it quickly [cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful. I've always wanted to read this type of two-girl novel, but no one writes that my writing skills are not good and I can't produce my own food. But after reading the author's book, I stayed up late to read it. I really liked it. The author, please don't be influenced, please do more updates [like][like][please update]

Not bad. It's quite good. It's a novel with two female protagonists and a lot of outstanding female supporting characters.

Overall, it's not too bad, it's pretty good. I also understand the author's words. Zhao Kai is indeed a lily that everyone should be able to read [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]. This is a unique and good Lily

It's so good. I have to read it when I go to school. I'll read it when I come back. It's better to support the author. The author must not stop updating. The subject matter and content of this novel are quite good. Lily is still the eternal god. I feel that there are quite a few CPs. It's still very sweet to read so far. I hope the author won't be too harsh in the end. But this book is very good, why is it rated so low? [What]

There are some bad points in the early stage, so I recommend skipping it, but other than that, the rest is okay. The description of traditional Chinese culture is good and fascinating, plus the combination of the two heroine elements. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is worth reading. There are many foreshadowings. I look forward to recycling it. I give it five stars and the author will keep up the good work.

It's so beautiful, my family 😍😍😍😍😍 I can't stop reading it 😍😍😍😍😍😍 It's a perfect example of the type of novels I like. It's fun and enjoyable to read. The author will update more quickly! ! ! It's a pity that you are not the finished article [cry][cry][cry]

It's so beautiful. The subject matter is very novel. The two protagonists are currently in an ambiguous period. I hope they won't be cruel in the future.

It's super good-looking, and there are many sub-CPs, which are very sweet. The one that struck me the most was "People of Chinese blood should not walk alone in this foreign world..." I really want such protection [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It is a really good book. The subject matter is very novel (I have never read this subject before). It is considered to be the best written book among foreign persimmons. It is predicted that it will get 9 points in the end. It focuses on Shuang Jie, growth, and focuses on essays (once in a century). I love reading [Blow Kiss]

It's okay, okay, I give five stars purely because the subject matter is very novel, but personally I feel it's a bit grinding, and it makes me a little anxious. I hope the author can improve it more, but I like reading it. I hope the author can update it more [love] [love] [love] [blowing kiss]

I think it's okay. The description of the two heroines is very delicate. At the same time, the description of the card world is pretty good even if I have read it. Most novels of this type tend to have imbalances in the description of these two aspects. This book does not have it at all.

The tonic is broken [crying][crying] There are too few cards with two heroines, it's so beautiful [crying]

I don't know how to describe this book. It wasn't too good at all, until I showed it to me, it felt so good. It was so good that I was so scared at home that I couldn't hold it in anymore and twisted into maggots on the bed. If possible, I hope the rating will be higher

The writing is good. I can't say much about the book. It's a good read, but some of the plots are a bit off-putting. I can't accept it. I'll retreat now [Sending my heart] If some of the sisters' emotions are easily brought into the novel, it would be better to skip chapters 25 to 30 [Salute] I'm curious that in addition to anti-hypertensive medicine, Bao Zi in chapter 30 can also prepare some things to vent his anger on [Sending my heart] More than thirty chapters, it is easier to be red-tempered between 27 and 30

This book is really super good-looking. The two heroines have perfect characters, and their career and emotional lines are very good. Especially the ten-person team at the back immediately became ignited, and when the two heroines confessed their feelings, it was really amazing.

It's a good-looking card, a rare card with two heroines. The plot is okay, the setting is good, the battle descriptions are very good, and the emotional scenes are also great. There is a process and a reason, but I just inexplicably like it right away. Although it can't escape the fixed kidnapping and murder to add emotional plot, but overall it is very good! Keep up the good work, author!

This book is very interesting (๑•.•๑). It mainly uses Chinese historical figures as cards. The heroine has a slightly high IQ but nothing outstanding. The other one is a school beauty from Bingshan. Well, she also has teammates to compete with.

Big cheers for the author, it's very good-looking, but is the CP Bai Qin or Qin Bai?

The content is not bad. I just can't accept Baihewen. I prefer the non-CP type. So, 886!

At the beginning of this book, the plot was okay and relatively novel. But I feel that the golden finger given to the heroine by the author is too powerful. After all, it is understandable that she is a daughter. However, because it is too strong, it seems very abrupt when they arrive in the underworld. It is like saying that the "word" they obtained has a bonus that is too high, making their level too high. It feels like their progress is too fast. Moreover, quoting Chinese culture should be done step by step. The author may be a little eager to achieve success, and the span is too large, and then the golden finger is too strong, which will make it easy to get stuck later, but there is no intention of disapproval. What the author wrote is also acceptable. I also hope that the author can produce more exciting articles.

I've only read the first part now. The subject matter is very interesting. And it's also very good-looking and classy. However, I feel that the development of the two of them is a bit too fast, and I have no feelings for Qin Zhiyao. I feel that it is impossible for an iceberg lady like her to get so close to the protagonist all of a sudden (compared to others). But I'm already over it, I'll continue chasing until the end

It's nice to watch. The first-level competition in the front is a bit scary, but don't be scared away. If you can't stand it, you can jump for a while, because it is easy to make people red and warm. The latter part is actually quite exciting. Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I really like it. Each character has his own unique style and personality. Not only the protagonist is growing up, but each character has his own growth. And it feels suspenseful. The plot is very novel and unique. There are so many fascinating points that you can't help but want to guess, you know? It's really great, but the author is too slow to update, and it's not enough to read. I finished reading it in two days. The author is so quick to update.