Being Insensitive, I Became a Succubus from the Time I Picked up a Lost Dog.

I would give it a 3.5. I can accept a work similar to Nikgaru's "too many loser heroines" where the heroine has a first love. However, what is different from the charm of Nikgaru Hakamada Kusuke is that the first love of the heroine in this work is too low/ladybug/NC. It seems that the hero will be cheap if he picks up a heroine who is dumped by a low-class male's first love. Secondly, the author is very confusing when he expresses many ideas (the writing power is not easy to retract and release). The boss Zhu Xun, who was described in dozens of chapters, is disappointing. The king he thought appeared on the stage only appeared in a dozen chapters, and he instantly lost his desire to pursue the book. (The male protagonist previously complained that the female protagonist and his first love were the scars of youth, but as a result, he and Zhu Xun directly became a river of sadness) Advantages: The male protagonist is excellent and perfect... Giving me the feeling of a combination of great teacher + Hayama. The heroines who were contrasted by the light looked mediocre. Sigh... I don't want to follow Zhu Xun's story because it was too slippery before and after. I'm looking forward to the author's next work (the male protagonist will be fine if he follows this template)

In fact, it is a sweet story with multiple female protagonists. I was deceived by malicious book reviews before and thought it was poisonous. The result is purely sweet and refreshing. The slow pace is similar to the unit type. The characters are quite three-dimensional. The relationship between the male and female protagonists slowly changes and is not so abrupt. The author is also very interesting.

Hmm~ It feels like a love interest. The male protagonist's personality is similar to that of a great teacher. He is cold on the outside and gentle on the inside. Although the female protagonists are all losers, they are not in the same routine. Each personality is very distinct. The author's writing style is also good. He does not use impetuous words to describe redundant scenes. The various memes embedded are also relatively reasonable. It is also a rare good grass among Tomato's campus life articles.

It's very interesting. I finished it in an hour on the train. It's very attractive. I hope there will be more. [Like][Like][Like] This heroine is a bit too much, I can't remember all her names now. I take back what I said before. The more I watch it, the less it tastes like before. Now I live broadcast it, shoot short videos, and engage in ambiguity. Well

You can't just look at the cover and title. The book is beautiful, really beautiful. It's a very natural and plain book about daily life on campus. The writing style is also really unremarkable. There are so many funny jokes that are quite natural in the content. It's very humorous and interesting. The ingredients are quite complicated and I'm very brave to write, such as some examples [laughing and crying] I like the male protagonist the most in the group. Xu Wangyan's character design is really unique in the group. Like Lu Xing's book, the portrayal is very good. The description and analysis of character, attitude, psychology, and behavior are detailed enough. It is much better than the other male protagonists. [Like] The contrast of being cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He has been hurt by love. He is soft-hearted and reliable. He is straight. He is very principled. He has a lot of skills. He can do everything, such as guitar, singing, etc., Especially games. He is good at all kinds of online and offline games. The author has a wide range of experience, so the male protagonist also uses a lot of memes and knows a lot of knowledge and principles [laughing and crying] You can say that he has central air conditioning. Objectively speaking, it is true, but his attitude feels really different. The description is too good and he is very charming. Xu Wangyan, Su Zhi, Tao Su, Zhao Zhaozhao, and Sun Ning all have the attribute of a defeated dog. Ruan Mian doesn't seem to [think] that the heroines have such a strong sense of little girls in love. They are very realistic and full of little girlfriend feelings. I like them all [admiration] Su Zhi, Internet celebrity sister in "The Best Quality" and "Pay Attention to Quality" are currently the meanest and most protective one. She can take secret photos, flirt, and feel happy [laughing and crying]; Tao Su is socially shy and has a sister-next-door feel. The most favored one. When drunk, she becomes a little bold and can attack fiercely. It contrasts with this area [admiration]; Zhao Zhaozhao, the bankrupt lady, is strong, confident, mature, and can be considered the second food protector. The plot where the male protagonist protects and gets rid of harassment feels like I am completely in love [blowing kiss]; Ruan Mian, Ba Dixuan comes from this person, and is a good fortune teller. I rate it as a god, a straight woman, and she is quite similar to the male protagonist in some aspects. She thinks that she is not as reliable as the male protagonist, and relies heavily on the male protagonist [sending her heart]; Sun Ning is not a member of the club at the moment. I don't know if he will join after taking the postgraduate entrance examination. Stupid beauty. They say Sister Ning is stupid. You Sister Ning is smart. It's equivalent to stealing the male protagonist's hometown. Everyone in the village thinks she is his girlfriend, and you, Sister Ning, are the hero who the hero has thought is beautiful and gentle since he was a child [Like] Bai Yueguang Zhu Xun was judged to be a bad fate by Teacher Da Ruan [laughing and crying] As long as she and the male protagonist do not escape before they completely let go, and one of them directly expresses their feelings and "likes", they can become. Identified as a t0 fantasy god in the internal beta, and reduced to a small branch NPC in the public beta [laughing] Tang Li (game master) and Ding Min (sister's best friend) have no role in these two roles. It should be that they forgot or were afraid that there would be more female protagonists, so they were changed. 😮‍💨Obviously looking forward to it The only drawback is that the transitions are so abrupt every time [laughing and crying] I have to watch a few more paragraphs before I can react. I really like this book. The female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist through the process of slowly accumulating affection. It feels good. It is not the kind of plot where they fall in love as soon as they are saved. The plot of the male protagonist getting along with the female protagonists is well handled. The daily description is natural and comfortable. It is true that it is ordinary and plain. It does not feel watery [like] I look forward to the hero's heart being magnificent. There is a little movement at the moment [laughing] Everyday, plain, and smooth. As a result, there is no Shura field and no conflicts between the protagonists. The harem is not mentioned clearly at the end. Finally, it is a bit of a running account and explains the current situation of the protagonists. If it continues to develop, there should be another one or two hundred chapters, such as the entrepreneurial process, Shura field, the attitude of the heroines towards the harem, etc. Maybe the data is not very good, and I don't want to delay it, so the author ends it. However, the heroines stay in the local area (for whom, it's so hard to guess [laughing] ) The male protagonist started a business with Sister Ning, and became the second generation of the demolition, with a house and money. This is equivalent to telling us that the harem is definitely coming. I don't know if there will be any extras in the future. I want to see what the official confession, the harem and Sun Yuan will be like. In Chapter 20 of the author's new book "The Yellow Hair System", it is directly stated that Wang Yan succeeded in starting a business, and at the age of 30, he was still modeling weird and collected them all ("The boss ladies are all beautiful" [laughing])

It's an absolute masterpiece. It's the kind of male protagonist I want to see. The female protagonist's character is also very distinct, and there is no template. The kind of imperfect perfection is the most perfect. The writing is smooth, the transition of content is very smooth, and the story nodes do not feel abrupt. The emotional lines are buried deep, and the characters' emotions and emotional changes are very natural. There is no uncomfortable plot (for example, there is someone you like, and you have eyes for the male protagonist). It all changes slowly in the contact between the two parties. Finally, my XP is Tao Su. Can you please write more plots about the cute Tao Su? Please, I can do everything QAQ

Yes, the character of the protagonist is really good. He has a Taoist mentality, is rational and mature, and follows his heart. The writing is also good, but there are too few updates. After all, the main line of daily writing is already slow to advance, and there are so few, which makes it impossible for people to progress their emotions. After all, what makes Tomato 🍅's books popular is that they constantly provide enough emotions, making people want to read more. Oh, and those people in the comment area who talk about stock trading single female protagonists, I would like to ask, whether it is a harem or stock trading, the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist must be described, right? Now that no relationship has developed, how do you conclude that it is a single female protagonist? Just a figment of imagination? Or is it too sensitive to read too many stock trading articles?

It looks so good, hahaha. I hope I can collect them all. Can you tell me more about Master Ruan? Master Ruan's lines are too few, and Master doesn't even have the elements of a defeated dog. I feel that the character design is very unique, maverick, and unhurried. I like it so much.

I personally think it's very good-looking. Although there are more daily routines, well, it doesn't have to be written without words. Each stage has a purpose, and the plot is relatively compact. Each heroine has a distinct personality, and two of them have very lively personalities. One likes to be a bad "stalker" and the other likes to be a "stalker" but can't let go? In addition, there is an obedient, innocent elementary school bully and a little tsundere who can tell fortunes. It's a bit quick to finish, but considering the title, it would be off topic if I wrote it later. Well, college is supposed to go by quickly. The most important thing is that the protagonist is really charming, stable and reliable, and mature in making important decisions.

It's a daily novel, but it's quite enjoyable to read. If you don't like Bai Yueguang when you see it in the front, you can check out the so-called Bai Yueguang in the back. It's just a roadside. It's the kind of person who would rather believe that the protagonist will be with his brother than with his Bai Yueguang.

The writing style is quite resonant. It has a feeling of youth literature. The scars of youth are the selling point of this book. However, I feel that the interaction with the heroine is a bit bland and the routines are a bit same. The heroine falls in love with a bad guy, and then awakens to herself and discovers the charm of the male protagonist. The basic favorability is very high, the emotional line is easy difficulty in terms of strategy and senses, and the heroine is not perfect in terms of character building, but has many flaws, which makes it feel real after reading it, but also lacks some desire to conquer and attract. This book will be very attractive to certain groups, but to me it feels a bit lackluster, and it will lose points for me if it is too bland.

It is considered a very good campus romance (harem?) Story on Tomato, and the male protagonist is very brilliant. Nagisa's appearance and treatment are rather disappointing. I always thought he would be a very important role, but I didn't expect him to end immediately.

It's a book worth reading. Although it doesn't have an ending, it's just like life. You don't know what will happen until you get to the end. The characters of the protagonist and heroines are very well created. In the end, I still want to ask if there can be a sequel [I almost cried]

It sounds good, there are many female protagonists, all of them are rich women, and currently there are only 5 of them who are close to the male protagonist. The five male protagonists are already very busy. Daily writing, some funny and cool writing. I feel that Sun Ning's online dating is quite awkward and it lowers her worth. If she casually falls in love with her online, it won't be justified in college. Anyway, I feel it's quite awkward.

The writing is quite delicate, a slightly sweet campus novel, but it's not sugary all the time, and there aren't too many twists and turns. So far, it's quite good, and it's pretty good among 🍅's campus emotional novels.

After watching it slowly for a long time, it can be regarded as one of the few tomatoes with satisfying redemption (love?) And redemption of the heroine. Unfortunately, it only left an open ending in the end. I guess the appearance of Chu may be because the author wants to leave his own story, otherwise the insertion is a bit abrupt, but it is still a good work with not many tomatoes.

I have read the latest chapter. I think this book should be relatively good. I have been reading it. After reading the latest chapter, I felt a sense of depression. I thought about the thunder "Zhu Xun" exploding between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, big or small, but I never expected that it would explode between the roommates. I also thought that the male protagonist's white moonlight would continue forever. It lasted until she met the male protagonist or died, but she suddenly appeared as the roommate's romantic partner, and the roommate's image in the article was not a negative image. I don't know how the male protagonist should face his roommate and Zhu Xun later. They didn't do anything wrong, but I still felt that it shouldn't be like this, so I was a little depressed. These are my feelings. I don't know what everyone thinks, and I don't know how the author should write it down. I hope the author can write this work well. If you can, please share your thoughts on the latest chapter. As of now, the relationship between Zhu Xun and his roommate is still unclear. He has neither made it clear to the male protagonist nor made it clear to the readers. Is this really a good idea? Also, I thought Zhu Xun would be T0 or T1, but she turned out to be T10086. Other heroines: I don't know, she just cuts herself when she comes up. In the end, I don't know how the author will write this character later so that readers will have a good impression of her or challenge her. For now, I think this character actually does not have much charm, is gentle and has no sense of boundaries. After making the male protagonist's heart beat, he directly escapes because he can't figure out his own feelings. After college, he still runs away when he meets the male protagonist. How to do "you run away, he chases, and it's hard to fly" right? Look forward to the author's performance later! Let everyone see the charm of Zhu Xun! I don't want the male protagonist Bai Yueguang to look like this!

It fits all my fantasies about youth. Compared with spending several years in a university dormitory, having a sneak peek into Xu Wangyan's life satisfies my imagination of love. A group of several losers (including Yanzi who was defeated by Laozhu). To be honest, the label of not having many female protagonists will really be avoided. The theme of party struggle is too painful (praise for a certain twenty-year-old landlady). Although the plot is indeed very slow-burning, and I am also looking forward to seeing Yanzi start a harem, but there is no way. The plot still revolves around the daily pull of several female protagonists. Teacher Daruan really fits the role of Tomo in the technical secondary school girl band. Su Zhi, Internet celebrity sister, legendary master of defense, the first person to sneak away, pay attention to quality Tao Yao, the drunken inflammation knight, the first person to open the biochemical map, the first beginning Zhao Zhaozhao, the down-and-out aristocratic girl and Yan Yanzi have a private date in the tavern? Hakisaku, you guy. Sun Ning, the idiot sister's imagination is also deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Qingmei may be defeated miserably by Tianxiang, but Sun Ning won't, so how should Qingmei Tianxiang be defeated. As for the deleted e-sports girl and her sister's best friend, it's probably because there are too many female protagonists and it's difficult to control. The current number is just right and the characters are well created. I'm really looking forward to seeing the end of the story. If possible, I really don't want the story to end.

Although there are many failures, the author's writing style is very good and saves this book. From a male perspective (in my opinion) it is better to write more female protagonists. It's just that I feel more comfortable. Hehehe, I won't tell you what's good about it. The fact that the male protagonist is not frivolous is my best impression of a story with multiple female protagonists (personal opinion)

I can say with such certainty that this is the most satisfying campus novel I have seen on Tomato so far. This book does not have many emotional struggles such as Shura Field, but the life scenes and distinctive characters described in it are what attracted me the most. I think life is like this, there are boredoms and gods, but happiness is always felt. The time span of the plot may jump a bit, but the lines are filled with the flavor of memories, with clarity mixed with ambiguity. My feeling from the beginning to the end of the book has not changed. What I feel is that this is another person's life. Finally, thank you for the pleasant reading experience this book brought me. Looking forward to the author's new works and extras, thank you!

This book is really good. I feel that each character is well-drawn and each person's personality is particularly detailed. The key is that the author really dares to write and keeps up with current events. And the contrast between the protagonist and those around him is really well written. In short, although this book is beautifully written and is a sweet story, it feels like it is written very realistically. But there are indeed a lot of poisonous points. For example, the female protagonist just fell out of love and then quickly developed a crush on the male protagonist. This is indeed a bit poisonous. If you can accept it, this novel is still very good.

Well-founded and good-looking. However, all youth romance novels with multiple female protagonists cannot escape one core issue, which is the male protagonist's final choice. Especially for an excellent love novel, the delicate emotions and vivid characterizations make the heroine in the novel more plump. The better you are, the harder it is to choose. Did the male protagonist finally choose one of them, ended their precious bond and went their separate ways? Or open a harem and change the hero's previous image? I'm quite curious. I read almost every word carefully. I saw the latest chapter. It's not finished yet. I'll show it like this first. I'll take a look when it's finished. The case is closed, and the finale is a dull ending. The male protagonist neither chooses anyone nor opens a harem. I thought this was a full-length novel, telling the final outcome of the male protagonist, but I didn't expect it to be a medium-sized light novel, only telling the story of the male protagonist's college career. This is purely a personal opinion, I hope my opinion will not dominate everyone, just take a look. Personally, I think this ending is a bit rushed and lacks the delicacy of the previous one. I hope the author doesn't do it for some reason. I've seen a lot of first-time writers have to end a novel for one reason or another. I wish the author all the best. Finally, let me talk about my feelings towards the female protagonist. The probability that the male protagonist will end up with Sun Ning is the highest. Far more than anyone else. But my favorite is actually "Ruan Cat Cat". Quirky and different.

It's a very good book. I like the slow but not procrastinating style of the plot.

This is the most comfortable article I have read so far. Each character has his own personality, each character is very "live", the male protagonist's personality is also quite likable, and the language is full of charm. The whole article feels like an autobiography, which is quite in line with daily life, but it is finished after only writing 1.2 Million words. I didn't read enough, and I didn't mention who I was with. But I think it is the best ending to not write about who I am with, because after being with one person, you will feel a sense of loss, because every girl is very good, and I want the male protagonist to be with all the girls, but writing this way makes the male protagonist become a stud, which is too ex, and it is good to end it like this with regrets. I'm looking forward to the author's extras and seeing if I can write two books together. I really haven't seen enough [crying]

I have been following the update and I think it is very interesting. It is the latest progress. How can I say it? It is a high-quality book. The emotional description is very good, very accurate and delicate, and the plot is also good. The characters of the male protagonist and several female protagonists are very likable and have no poisonous points. I personally want to read them all. The emotional entanglement between them Matoi is also very interesting. At present, it is basically a one-on-one emotional advancement between the male protagonist and several female protagonists. There is no Shura field (it feels like the girls can also feel that they all like Yan Yanzi). The conflicts and emotions may be more intense in the later period (Shura field). I look forward to the author's efforts! All in all, this book is great!

After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to come back and write a book review. It has great stamina. The last thing that gave me this stamina was the first reading of Fighting Through the Sky. The author is very good. The college life and the relationship between the characters and the shaping of the supporting characters make it feel like going to college again. Compared with other novels with female protagonists, this one does not have too many Shura field scenes, but reading it gives people a very refreshing feeling. The secret love between men and women in college is very sweet. The protagonist and each heroine have different stories, which can even be regarded as five single heroine lines, but they also know each other's existence, and when a certain heroine wants to sneak away, they will create a little trouble for her. And the emotional line is well shaped, but Teacher Daruan is a bit metaphysical? I don't know when I fell in love with the male protagonist, but it doesn't matter. As for reading other people's book reviews and saying that he is a cuckold, I can only say that he may not have even read the first chapter. He said that he is a loser. In fact, he just happened to meet a good person in high school and wanted to get close to him. But the author wrote it clearly and avoided the red flags. They didn't even hold hands. Do you think this is a cuckold? There is no talk about Bai Yueguang returning to China and abusing the protagonist. The author clearly writes the story at the beginning. He writes clearly the reason why the heroine is a loser, and then directly cuts off the connection with the male partner, cutting off the possibility of the rekindling of the old relationship. After that, it is a super sweet campus love story that revolves around the male protagonist, and the ending is also a blank ending.

After reading a lot of comments on Luanyun (I like to use fashionable items such as Jie Pan Xia), I will briefly talk about the "losing dog" of this book (no spoilers) First of all, in essence, it must be a certain degree of "unable to love" (although there are even forced situations such as being rejected for joining the society). In any case, this does not mean that you are inferior. I don't believe that every reader will think that his unrequited crush = he is dirty or trash. Secondly, losing dogs usually have a time limit, such as the person I liked in junior high school, etc. This does not mean that the other person is necessarily a good person or how mature my feelings are but failed. It emphasizes more on the point that "at that specific time, my feelings for the other person are true." A very inaccurate and extreme association is that I think that the losing dog is the kind in Japanese light novels where the other party is very good and my party failed. I will never forget it for the rest of my life. In fact, if you have some real-life experience, you will know that the person you once liked is probably not a good match, or even a person. In the end, after all, we are reading a novel, and it is natural to pursue a certain degree of purity. This is the most difficult part of "The Lost Dog", how to bid farewell to past emotions without being pretentious and true to one's heart, and move towards a new life. I think this book is very well done. If you are interested, you can read it [Salute] No, it's a bit sad to hear that it's going to end quickly. Personally, I think it's still at least 30% or more away from the true ending [crying] Forget it, it's actually quite good. Thank you to the author for sharing his experience.

Finished reading. It is one of the few books in recent times that can be read from beginning to end, and every character has flesh and blood. I really like this kind of book with witty sentences. At first I thought the ending would be that the male protagonist and the female protagonists are together, but when I read about 90% of the book, I found that none of them had confessed their love yet. This is a pity. I didn't like this kind of open ending, which left me feeling unfinished. Forget it, I'll give you two stars for a bad novel. Even if the content is good, why should it suck?

First of all, the label of multiple female protagonists is not very accurate because even after the ending, the relationship is not confirmed with anyone. The whole book is very interesting and the writing is very good and it looks interesting. The five female protagonists are all very well portrayed, with their own highlights and attractions, and the plot is warm and funny. Unfortunately, I haven't seen the extras yet, and the ending has not confirmed their relationship. It's really a pity, but all five are so good. It's really hard to choose. I can't write short stories about different choices in parallel worlds. It's really a pity, but I highly recommend this, it is definitely a masterpiece.

It is the type of light novel that I like to read. The three-dimensional description of the male protagonist's character and the female protagonist's personality and appearance bring an intuitive image to the readers. It is one of the most outstanding novels in this category that I have read. There are still flaws in the plot. (The previous Zhao and Su had an intersection with the male protagonist due to emotional factors, but they were too hasty and not polished well.) Emotions are often the most difficult to write, and there are so many female protagonists. I think the author can focus on the community aspect to promote the plot. (The club activities in the book are written too casually) The emotional development of individuals and teams, most of the books focus on the development of the male protagonist and a single female protagonist. In the future, I think the author can develop his emotions towards the community. The slow-paced life trivial matters in the later plot will not feel boring, and it is very life-like. Come on! The author greatly hopes that the book will be finished and not unfinished. (I can only watch the advertisement and give you a small gift to try my best)