Lightning protection: imaginative literature, fantasy, serious drama, emotional drama about 70%, the author's emotional line is too stretched, I'm sorry, I apologize.
Xie Ning is a heartthrob, and a male character will appear without any emotional basis.
This short review catches bugs, thank you all.
Concise copywriting:
Xie Ning's road to awakening.
Not very concise:
Xie Ning started from Xiaoshan Sect, with unknown origin and unknown sect.
Once she had reached the golden elixir, her journey to becoming a god finally began.
At that time, Xie Ning never knew that the price of becoming a god was death.
Love version copywriting:
Jiang Nianxue, the leader of Zhongzhou, had a good relationship with Xie Ning when she was young. Her determination when they separated made her always think of the girl with golden eyes in the long years. She saved herself from fire and water. "Aning, I regret it... Let's start over."
The Alchemy Saint once said, "I have a very good personal relationship with Aning, why can't we become a Taoist couple?"
The Yao Ling Divine Lord in the Divine Realm, she sat on the peach tree and looked at everyone, "A Ning and I are the perfect match."
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What is hidden in the Mountain of Illusion?
Will the collapsed mountains and the long-lost divine king return to the world?
I want to ascend to heaven, save all sentient beings, cut off love relationships, and live and die every day, so why should I be afraid of the human world?
Reader comments
It's very logical, the hidden lines are obvious, the language is fluent, and it's very comfortable to watch.
It was raining heavily outside, and I happened to see the cutting of my robe. It was a bit rushed, everyone was in a mess, she was stunned, he blew himself up, she was the next time every time... The war was in chaos (or it would be a lot of torture)
It is because of fortune telling that the encounter is judged as a doom. The doom will eventually come true. It is destined from the moment it is calculated. What if we knew in advance? If you can't predict the future, you will end up trapping yourself in a cocoon. Even if it can be calculated, the limited roads and fixed destinations are also boring.
The order of heaven is constant, and the Tao is natural. Let nature take its course.
It's very good-looking, and the author's settings in the article are very attentive. The secret realms have their own origins, and the treasures have their own origins.
The characters are very three-dimensional, and everyone has their own line to tell.
Although it is a novel about cultivating immortals, it has not been a smooth journey.
The author's writing style is also very good. I want to make a metaphor, but I don't know how to express it. In short, it is not flat and plain. The grandeur is brushed horizontally, the details are meticulously drawn, and the redundancy is brushed aside. I can write love scenes, I can write daily life, I can write fights.
At present, we see that Taotao and Xie Ning have decided to participate in the competition together. It's time to introduce the golden elixir.
I hope more people will read the author's book.
By the way, the author has a completed novel of 700,000 words, which should be able to write a long article. Book friends, please feel free to read it.
Follow-up comment 1: I read it and it is a quick passage. It cannot be considered a long article in the general sense, but I believe that the author can write a long article well. Come on.
It's nice but too short. Can the author add fifty chapters to make my eyes light up🤓👆
It's a more traditional theme, leaning towards the fairy tale style, and if you're interested in female protagonists, you can check it out.
At present, I think the author can still grasp the length of the novel, and his ideas are generally relatively traditional, and his writing is mainly clean and not messy. The writing of the first few chapters is quite tedious, and old bookworms will skip paragraphs by themselves. If you are just reading the novel, try to get through the first few chapters.
I don't want to give any suggestions. As long as the author doesn't rely on this to make a living, just follow his own hobbies.
Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking
Well done, I won my heart
It looks so good to my taste
The author is great. I hope you can collect them all.
Very good article, I like it
Good looking, good looking, good looking
It's nice to read, and the writing is very good [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Who is the other
No comment, lu la la lu la la
The author is great, is the emotional line he? [Eating melon]
It's very interesting. I hope the author can update more. But I feel that the author is very tired from writing so many works, so I'd better take my time.
It looks good, I love to read it, and read more, but it really doesn't work. Author, can you type as soon as you open your eyes every day? I want to see more updates!
The protagonist's temperament fits my strike zone so well, it's really fun to watch [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's very logical, the hidden lines are obvious, the language is fluent, and it's very comfortable to watch. It was raining heavily outside, and I happened to see the cutting of my robe. It was a bit rushed, everyone was in a mess, she was stunned, he blew himself up, she was the next time every time... The war was in chaos (or it would be a lot of torture) It is because of fortune telling that the encounter is judged as a doom. The doom will eventually come true. It is destined from the moment it is calculated. What if we knew in advance? If you can't predict the future, you will end up trapping yourself in a cocoon. Even if it can be calculated, the limited roads and fixed destinations are also boring. The order of heaven is constant, and the Tao is natural. Let nature take its course.
It's very good-looking, and the author's settings in the article are very attentive. The secret realms have their own origins, and the treasures have their own origins. The characters are very three-dimensional, and everyone has their own line to tell. Although it is a novel about cultivating immortals, it has not been a smooth journey. The author's writing style is also very good. I want to make a metaphor, but I don't know how to express it. In short, it is not flat and plain. The grandeur is brushed horizontally, the details are meticulously drawn, and the redundancy is brushed aside. I can write love scenes, I can write daily life, I can write fights. At present, we see that Taotao and Xie Ning have decided to participate in the competition together. It's time to introduce the golden elixir. I hope more people will read the author's book. By the way, the author has a completed novel of 700,000 words, which should be able to write a long article. Book friends, please feel free to read it. Follow-up comment 1: I read it and it is a quick passage. It cannot be considered a long article in the general sense, but I believe that the author can write a long article well. Come on.
It's nice but too short. Can the author add fifty chapters to make my eyes light up🤓👆
It's a more traditional theme, leaning towards the fairy tale style, and if you're interested in female protagonists, you can check it out. At present, I think the author can still grasp the length of the novel, and his ideas are generally relatively traditional, and his writing is mainly clean and not messy. The writing of the first few chapters is quite tedious, and old bookworms will skip paragraphs by themselves. If you are just reading the novel, try to get through the first few chapters. I don't want to give any suggestions. As long as the author doesn't rely on this to make a living, just follow his own hobbies.
Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking
Well done, I won my heart
It looks so good to my taste
The author is great. I hope you can collect them all.
Very good article, I like it
Good looking, good looking, good looking
It's nice to read, and the writing is very good [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Who is the other
No comment, lu la la lu la la
The author is great, is the emotional line he? [Eating melon]
It's very interesting. I hope the author can update more. But I feel that the author is very tired from writing so many works, so I'd better take my time.
It looks good, I love to read it, and read more, but it really doesn't work. Author, can you type as soon as you open your eyes every day? I want to see more updates!
The protagonist's temperament fits my strike zone so well, it's really fun to watch [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]