Mortal*************

It looks good, and it feels like the main character is well-constructed, and it's not the kind of game that starts out useless and relies solely on cheats. It's just that there are too few at the moment, and we will continue to update. Chapter 63. . . This man surnamed Wang kissed the protagonist for no apparent reason. [What] it poisoned me.

After reading Chapter 45, there is nothing poisonous about it. The protagonist is not wandering around under the guise of Gou, he is very cautious. The supporting characters are not brainless and arrogant villains, and there are no problems with the character creation so far. It's not the main character's accidental physique, nor the benefits are all obtained by the main character, the writing and plot are both good.

There needs to be no heroine, old man.

Reading the comments, some people said it was relatively bland, but I still think the protagonist is not strict enough [face covering]

I feel that Goldfinger is not very smart. It stands to reason that there should be a prompt for every choice. However, the protagonist's prompt only appears once in a long time, and it does not appear every time a choice is made.

It's pretty, but too short. From the background, it can be seen that this aristocratic family in the world of immortality has too many resources. [Sneaky smile] Will Huang Chao be possessed later? [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

To be honest, it seems very bland at first, but it gets better later on, and you still have to see the back. Everyone, please be more patient₍˄·͈༝·*₎◞ ̑̑

It's okay, but it's a pity it's hung on the wall

The writing is good, maybe it's a vest, I look forward to the follow-up

There are no bad points, the writing is sophisticated, the protagonist has a normal IQ, and he can grow up immediately even if he makes some small mistakes occasionally. It's pretty good.

It's very interesting, not just a piece of writing, it's quite in-depth and the logic is very smooth.

It's a pretty good novel about cultivating immortals. The plot should be original. It's worth recommending.

Gou Daoliu, it's okay.

Three correct views, well written! [Praise]

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

Very nice, five stars.

Great book, thumbs up! Five-star praise!

Good book, like 👍🏻, five-star review!

Overall, it's okay.

A book worth reading

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The plot is reasonable and the language is elegant

One of the best novels, Cultivation to Immortality

It's not bad, the flaws don't hide the good points, the author just needs to write well.

Very nice, I like this series of books

Very pretty The writing is good and the plot flows smoothly without being overwhelming.

The fat intestines are good-looking, and the supporting characters have their own characteristics without flat facial makeup, so good-looking!

It's good, there's nothing poisonous about it, the writing is okay, and the plot is relatively novel.