Awakening After Being Doomed to Die Early in the Apocalypse

After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist was Gou Dao. Later, the identity of the protagonist was revealed. The team members looked okay. Later, there was a slight problem because the guy named Gu was too attractive. Could it be that the guy named Gu was the male protagonist? In fact, I don't really want him to be the male protagonist. It's my personal opinion. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

It can be seen at first glance that the details still need to be polished, and it is a bit too straightforward.

It looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The author is very grateful 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript]

Not bad, but there are few emotional lines

It's pretty good, it's unconstrained and has a beginning and an end, but the dialogue and connection are still lacking a bit.

Good, very good. The plot is very compact and a very enjoyable book.

So far they are all pretty good, the theme of fighting monsters has been upgraded, there is nothing super, the writing is very good, and the plot is compact.