[Through the book x rebirth, double strength 1v1]
Ye Chi is a book wearer.
But he was not very lucky. Others wore the book and relied on the advantages of the book wearer to slap him in the face and abuse him in the world of the original book. But in the book about cultivating immortals, he became a beggar, living on the street with grass to feed his hunger. It was so miserable.
Seeing that the male protagonist in the plot of the original book was about to appear and enter the sect to become a disciple, he decided to sneak in among the apprentice disciples, thinking that even if he couldn't become a disciple, it would be good to be a handyman.
Unexpectedly, he was spotted by the villain in the original book at a glance, and was accepted as his personal disciple, forcing him to embark on the main plot.
Ye Chi was silent: He really just wanted to survive.
…
Ya Feiyu held a sword all his life and was an unparalleled genius in swordsmanship. However, when he was on the verge of ascending to immortality, he was stabbed in the back by his close relative. His spiritual roots were dug out and his cultivation was completely ruined.
Being reduced to a useless person, Ya Feiyu was not depressed. With his hard power, he fell into the devil's way as a mortal and launched revenge on the world of cultivation, causing a bloody storm.
He had been making trouble for many years, but one night he was stabbed in the back again.
It was only after Ya Feiyu died that he learned that the ups and downs in his life were just an understatement written by a certain author.
When he opened his eyes full of resentment, he found that he had been reborn.
[A straight man who only wants to be sexually obsessed with sex attacks a beautiful woman whose strength is as high as the ceiling]
At the beginning:
Ye Chi: The villain? Retreat! Retreat! Retreat!
Later:
Ye Chi: Wife sticks to wife, kisses wife, hugs QAQ
Ya Feiyu:...
Ye Chi: Kiss my wife TwT
Ya Feiyu (seriously): Kiss.
#This article focuses on Shuangjie, the master is a hidden heartthrob, Gong Jun is not enlightened in the early stage, but once he is enlightened, he will be very fond of his wife~ (of course he will also be very jealous)
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Reader comments
Well, after reading about twenty chapters, the writing is okay. I didn't say it was awkward at all. I was actually quite interested in reading the text, so I gave it four stars. The disadvantage is that the protagonist Gong can't see his charm and shining points. After reading twenty chapters, I can't tell whether the protagonist Gong has the same level of cultivation (or maybe I was too careless and didn't look carefully). Instead, he behaves like a passerby, senior brother A. The relationship with the master is also very strange. Inexplicably, he starts to get close and connected. It's not natural. I'm also fascinated by the master's heartthrob aura. It's not exciting at all. It's just that I'm inexplicably difficult to deal with rotten peach blossoms. As an attacker and controller, I can't stand it. The original protagonist disappears from time to time. I feel that such an important role in the plot should have more proportions. More growth of the protagonist attacker and more of his shining points. This book may be more amazing. The other parts of the plot are boring to fight monsters. I don't know why. There is nothing else. Overall it's okay!! Four points recommended!
To evaluate, the overall plot is not too uncomfortable, and the journey is fairly smooth. However, the only thing that feels aggrieved is that the protagonist's attack is too weak, and there is not much plot to upgrade in practice. It has remained the same. After watching the early stage, it is probably another protagonist. The character has been injured all the time. He is narrating the stories of other supporting characters and the past. Every time it ends with the master being injured, there is nothing exciting about it. The enemies are not dead, but the world is quite complete. If the protagonist's attack strength can be higher and he can help others. I thought this article would be better, but now I actually feel like the main character is useless.
The master is not completely defending his disciples. He can't tell the difference between green tea. Maybe he can tell the difference. He just finds it troublesome and difficult to deal with. Everything was fine in the past. But when I see the master defending others and blaming his disciples, I am a bit speechless [smile]. It may also be that I haven't watched the subsequent plot and there is any change, but I can't stand it anymore. But this is just my own thunder and lightning. If you don't care, it is still worth watching. The writing is okay [love]
What can I say about this book? Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the master was tortured a bit miserably. The protagonist's attack was not as powerful as the master, so I missed a lot of key battles because I didn't participate in it. I felt sorry for the master. Overall, it's worth watching.
After reading it, rate it. Overall, the plot is pretty smooth and there are no major problems. It's just that there's some confusion in some places, some grammatical problems, some inconsistencies. And there are some holes that have not yet been filled. As a result, after the final completion, I always felt like something was missing. The protagonist's relationship with the master is really miserable, and the apprentice is too weak, and there always seems to be some processes that are omitted in some places, which makes the pace overall feel very abrupt even though it is fast. One thing that is slightly comforting is that basically most of the characters have brains. There are no brainless people, and the final twist is relatively natural. [Thinking][Laughing]
I like it. Looking at the front, I feel so sorry for my master.
Nice! ! ! It made me cry a little bit at the end😭 but overall it was good! Four stars, one less would make you too proud.
It feels very similar to Erha and his white cat master
Very good, almost killed me without a knife [smile]
Ah ah ah ah what are you doing? It's good to be back in the end, but I always feel like there are a few chapters missing in the middle and it's a bit confusing.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
Personally I think it's really nice! The author writes well! The book is beautiful! The plot is not awkward and very smooth!
Very beautiful, the author's writing style is very good
It's really good to read. The author's writing style is great. I highly recommend it. Some people like it and some don't (personal opinion).
Well, after reading about twenty chapters, the writing is okay. I didn't say it was awkward at all. I was actually quite interested in reading the text, so I gave it four stars. The disadvantage is that the protagonist Gong can't see his charm and shining points. After reading twenty chapters, I can't tell whether the protagonist Gong has the same level of cultivation (or maybe I was too careless and didn't look carefully). Instead, he behaves like a passerby, senior brother A. The relationship with the master is also very strange. Inexplicably, he starts to get close and connected. It's not natural. I'm also fascinated by the master's heartthrob aura. It's not exciting at all. It's just that I'm inexplicably difficult to deal with rotten peach blossoms. As an attacker and controller, I can't stand it. The original protagonist disappears from time to time. I feel that such an important role in the plot should have more proportions. More growth of the protagonist attacker and more of his shining points. This book may be more amazing. The other parts of the plot are boring to fight monsters. I don't know why. There is nothing else. Overall it's okay!! Four points recommended!
To evaluate, the overall plot is not too uncomfortable, and the journey is fairly smooth. However, the only thing that feels aggrieved is that the protagonist's attack is too weak, and there is not much plot to upgrade in practice. It has remained the same. After watching the early stage, it is probably another protagonist. The character has been injured all the time. He is narrating the stories of other supporting characters and the past. Every time it ends with the master being injured, there is nothing exciting about it. The enemies are not dead, but the world is quite complete. If the protagonist's attack strength can be higher and he can help others. I thought this article would be better, but now I actually feel like the main character is useless.
The master is not completely defending his disciples. He can't tell the difference between green tea. Maybe he can tell the difference. He just finds it troublesome and difficult to deal with. Everything was fine in the past. But when I see the master defending others and blaming his disciples, I am a bit speechless [smile]. It may also be that I haven't watched the subsequent plot and there is any change, but I can't stand it anymore. But this is just my own thunder and lightning. If you don't care, it is still worth watching. The writing is okay [love]
What can I say about this book? Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the master was tortured a bit miserably. The protagonist's attack was not as powerful as the master, so I missed a lot of key battles because I didn't participate in it. I felt sorry for the master. Overall, it's worth watching.
After reading it, rate it. Overall, the plot is pretty smooth and there are no major problems. It's just that there's some confusion in some places, some grammatical problems, some inconsistencies. And there are some holes that have not yet been filled. As a result, after the final completion, I always felt like something was missing. The protagonist's relationship with the master is really miserable, and the apprentice is too weak, and there always seems to be some processes that are omitted in some places, which makes the pace overall feel very abrupt even though it is fast. One thing that is slightly comforting is that basically most of the characters have brains. There are no brainless people, and the final twist is relatively natural. [Thinking][Laughing]
I like it. Looking at the front, I feel so sorry for my master.
Nice! ! ! It made me cry a little bit at the end😭 but overall it was good! Four stars, one less would make you too proud.
It feels very similar to Erha and his white cat master
Very good, almost killed me without a knife [smile]
Ah ah ah ah what are you doing? It's good to be back in the end, but I always feel like there are a few chapters missing in the middle and it's a bit confusing.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
Personally I think it's really nice! The author writes well! The book is beautiful! The plot is not awkward and very smooth!
Very beautiful, the author's writing style is very good
It's really good to read. The author's writing style is great. I highly recommend it. Some people like it and some don't (personal opinion).