[Transmigration into a Book x Rebirth, Two Powerful Leads, 1v1]
Ye Chi transmigrated into a book.
Unfortunately, luck wasn't on his side. Other people who transmigrated into books used their advantage to face-slap their enemies and put scumbags in their place in the world of the original novel. But he ended up as a beggar in a cultivation novel, surviving on grass roots and sleeping rough. It was a miserable existence.
With the male lead about to appear in the original story and join a sect as an apprentice, Ye Chi decided to sneak in among the disciples hoping to be accepted. Even if he couldn't become a disciple, he figured, being a servant would be nice enough.
Unexpectedly, the original novel's main villain took a liking to him at first sight and accepted him as a personal disciple, forcing him onto the main storyline.
Ye Chi fell silent. He really just wanted to stay alive.
Ya Feiyu had devoted his life to the sword and was a peerless genius in the art. But just as he was rising to the top and on the verge of ascending to immortality, someone dearest to him stabbed him in the back. His spiritual root was ripped out, and all his cultivation was destroyed.
Reduced to a cripple, Ya Feiyu refused to give in to despair. Relying on his sheer strength, he forced his way into the demonic path as a mortal, then took revenge on the cultivation world, unleashing a bloody storm.
After making waves for years, he was stabbed in the back once more one night.
Only after his death did Ya Feiyu learn that his tumultuous life had been nothing more than a few casually written words by some author.
He opened his eyes, seething with resentment, only to discover that he had been reborn.
[A straight guy who only wants to keep his head down x a beautiful, unhinged powerhouse with the highest combat strength]
At first:
Ye Chi: The main villain? Back off! Back off! Back off!
Later:
Ye Chi: Wife, come cuddle! Wife, give me a kiss! Wife, hug me! QAQ
Ya Feiyu: ...
Ye Chi: Wife, kiss me! TwT
Ya Feiyu (dead serious): A kiss, then.
#This story is told from the gong's perspective. The couple are each other's only partners. The shizun is secretly adored by everyone. The gong is slow to catch on at first, but once he does, he'll spoil his wife rotten~ (And get very jealous, too.)
#Happy ending, sweet and angst-free. Plenty of chapters already written. Come give it a try!
# [Update every night at 8 PM sharp!]
[This novel is complete. My new novel is now out, a modern esports story. If you're interested, visit my author page!]
Well, after reading about twenty chapters, the writing is okay. I didn't say it was awkward at all. I was actually quite interested in reading the text, so I gave it four stars. The disadvantage is that the protagonist Gong can't see his charm and shining points. After reading twenty chapters, I can't tell whether the protagonist Gong has the same level of cultivation (or maybe I was too careless and didn't look carefully). Instead, he behaves like a passerby, senior brother A. The relationship with the master is also very strange. Inexplicably, he starts to get close and connected. It's not natural. I'm also fascinated by the master's heartthrob aura. It's not exciting at all. It's just that I'm inexplicably difficult to deal with rotten peach blossoms. As an attacker and controller, I can't stand it. The original protagonist disappears from time to time. I feel that such an important role in the plot should have more proportions. More growth of the protagonist attacker and more of his shining points. This book may be more amazing. The other parts of the plot are boring to fight monsters. I don't know why. There is nothing else. Overall it's okay!! Four points recommended!
To evaluate, the overall plot is not too uncomfortable, and the journey is fairly smooth. However, the only thing that feels aggrieved is that the protagonist's attack is too weak, and there is not much plot to upgrade in practice. It has remained the same. After watching the early stage, it is probably another protagonist. The character has been injured all the time. He is narrating the stories of other supporting characters and the past. Every time it ends with the master being injured, there is nothing exciting about it. The enemies are not dead, but the world is quite complete. If the protagonist's attack strength can be higher and he can help others. I thought this article would be better, but now I actually feel like the main character is useless.
The master is not completely defending his disciples. He can't tell the difference between green tea. Maybe he can tell the difference. He just finds it troublesome and difficult to deal with. Everything was fine in the past. But when I see the master defending others and blaming his disciples, I am a bit speechless 🙂. It may also be that I haven't watched the subsequent plot and there is any change, but I can't stand it anymore. But this is just my own thunder and lightning. If you don't care, it is still worth watching. The writing is okay ❤️
What can I say about this book? Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the master was tortured a bit miserably. The protagonist's attack was not as powerful as the master, so I missed a lot of key battles because I didn't participate in it. I felt sorry for the master. Overall, it's worth watching.
After reading it, rate it. Overall, the plot is pretty smooth and there are no major problems. It's just that there's some confusion in some places, some grammatical problems, some inconsistencies. And there are some holes that have not yet been filled. As a result, after the final completion, I always felt like something was missing. The protagonist's relationship with the master is really miserable, and the apprentice is too weak, and there always seems to be some processes that are omitted in some places, which makes the pace overall feel very abrupt even though it is fast. One thing that is slightly comforting is that basically most of the characters have brains. There are no brainless people, and the final twist is relatively natural. 🤔🤭
I like it. Looking at the front, I feel so sorry for my master.
It feels very similar to Erha and his white cat master
Nice!!! It made me cry a little bit at the end😭 but overall it was good! Four stars, one less would make you too proud.
Very beautiful, the author's writing style is very good
It's really good to read. The author's writing style is great. I highly recommend it. Some people like it and some don't (personal opinion).