Fantasy: the Twelve Spells at the Beginning Kill the Female Channel

I am more resistant to poison. Well, this Master is the only one. Everything else can pass. It takes too long. As long as this Master comes out, the female judgment smell comes out all of a sudden. As long as the Master does not come out, everything is normal.

It's beautiful, the beginning is classic and the ending is surprising. I've finished reading it, the plot jumps too much

Overall, it's worth watching. The protagonist is never verbose. Some of the female characters in the early episodes, coupled with the decisiveness of the protagonist's killing, make it a bit more enjoyable. Later, a plot advancement similar to that of Shi Hao was added, which was also good. The turning points were written very smoothly, and the pace was fast, without dragging on. Let's talk about the protagonist's plot. If it were placed in some world where the force value is not very high, the combat power may exceed the standard and it may easily collapse and make it impossible to write. But in the world of immortality, I just feel that this plot is a bit weak. However, the author reasonably strengthened the plot, and it is not too abrupt, which is good. And this worldview is somewhat similar to the worldview of the perfect world, both of which are grander. But it's very good, it has content to write, a plot to write, and it's not too boring, so it's worth learning from. Come on, author, please don't interrupt or end the story. [Eat melon]

Average, but the writing is good, and the writing should be innovative. Don't always focus on the protagonist. The character needs to be foreshadowed. The other party should not always appear suddenly, or you have no idea what the other party is doing to you. The world view must also be foreshadowed. The plot should be slow when it is slow, and fast when it is fast. The character's emotions and personality cannot change suddenly. The middle process should be foreshadowed. If there is no foreshadowing, it will be carried out in one stroke.

The ancient pagoda trial is really amazing. They knew there was a conspiracy but just let it go [face covering] It looked okay at first, forget it

I don't eat beef at the beginning. If you think it's okay, remember to take screenshots of the book's title, otherwise you won't be able to find it when it is removed from the shelves.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, it's pretty good, nothing too bad.

Looks good, feels good, come on

I'm afraid you will be proud and complacent.

It's okay, but I almost feel like it later

It is recommended that you hold back until Chapter 16. It's good but the pace feels too jumpy.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

It's so cool. I haven't read a book so seriously in a long time.

I like to see this kind of decisive killing.

Good! There are bright spots and poisonous spots-----it can be said to be watchable.

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Good-looking, decisive in killing, the male protagonist doesn't have so much nonsense and explanations, strength determines everything, just raise a book

No problem. Give me 4 stars. Come on, keep working hard.