There Are Too Many Loser Heroines!

It is precisely because of Wen Shui and Yanami's immature status as high school students that their relationship is so awkward and pulled back and forth. Campus youth romantic comedy is about the step-by-step shaping of the concept of love, the step-by-step growth of the protagonist, and the young and bold love story.

How to say it. As a fan of Win8 Party, it should be the novel closest to the original work. After reading the eighth volume, I knew that Lao Ba's victory was determined. However, even Wen Shui, who is a fool, didn't know how many volumes later he would be able to confirm his relationship with Lao Ba. You probably won't be able to see their sweet daily life until you graduate from high school (judging from Yusen's update frequency). The author's writing is really super sweet, and it's not super out-of-character sweetness (I've been ridiculed before when I wrote a fanfic because it was too out-of-character, so I feel the author is really strong). It's a semi-twisting state between two people. All in all, it's very beautiful. It's really beautiful.

So beautiful! This book is as the author said, a complete personal volume of Yana. As long as you like Onpachi, this book is probably the most complete Onpachi fanfic you can find on Tomato. More than 90% of the content is basically a play by the Wen Eight, which can be said to be a must-see for the Wen Eight. The author really understands the plot details of the original work and the characters themselves, and the writing style is also good and has the feeling of restoring the original work. "When the defensive champion Banana can no longer defend and decides to take the initiative to attack, and when the legendary evasive Wang Wenshui faces up to his feelings and the feelings of his sweetheart, how will all this change and develop?" The 8th episode of the super-popular love comedy of sure defeat (fan)---boiled apricots in warm water begins! Another thing that I think is very good is the intermissions (itms) and special bonuses written by the author! Not only does it have the same flavor as the original, but it's even longer than the original. I love it! It unfolds from the perspective of Hanami, what Onsui doesn't know from the main perspective, or what they know from the perspective of the supporting team behind them. Even if I already know the development of the story, it still makes me feel like it was originally like this. It fills in the holes and adds more details at the same time. I really like this narrative method that complements the storyline. It is very comfortable to watch. I can know what everyone is doing at the same time, and the story feels more real or sufficient. Well, although I haven't read Volume 8 yet, I don't know what the author is talking about about the changes in Wen Shui's character or behavior. What is the current state of Wen Shui in Yusen's novel, whether it has collapsed, what are his thoughts on Lao Ba, etc. Maybe we have to wait until Volume 9 to know the answer? I don't know, but at least this is what I think after reading the original work (up to volume 7). The author's writing of them feels very much like the original work. It's like the story of them who are already together or are about to be together but are just short of officially confessing to each other. Well, I know the author's original intention was not to be OOC, but even if the warm water is different from the current original work, it's okay. It was originally written for the eight people to be self-sufficient. We also came here to see Wenba sugar, so the author works hard and look forward to future updates. The sugar is very sweet and delicious, and the children will want to continue eating it in the future.

The author loves you the most. It's just that the sweet things are missing in the original work for us warm-blooded people. [Hold face] This book is satisfying and just makes up for it. It's very comfortable to read. [Sending my heart] It's time for the author to write the ninth volume (forcing the truth). And my friends also went to read the original work because of this book. I wish the author better and better [blowing kiss] 7.3 Work hard and get eight points [blowing kiss]

I highly recommend that people who like Hanami read this book "Hanami Anana's Personal Volume". Hanami's happy smile is really what fascinates me the most about this work. Even if you have just finished reading the first defeat, you can still feel the author's extreme intentions. First of all, this is the Lost Dog fanfic that is most consistent with the original work in terms of writing format. Whether it is the various symbols or the usage of words, it all feels like a Japanese light novel. I have always felt that an excellent fan work should restore the original work in all aspects, and the writing format is the most easily overlooked point. The second is the control of personality. The author did not completely stick to the original Wenba's existing mode of getting along with each other, but further expanded it, and slowly transitioned to Wenba's mode of getting along with them when they go further in the future. However, this does not deviate from the life of the original work at all, which is really commendable. Just like Wen Shui became a straight ball because of Yoshiki's assist, and Yanami was caught off guard by this sudden change and became shy, but he soon teased Wen Shui in turn. While there were changes, it was consistent with the original work, which proves that the author really has a deep research on the original work. Finally, there is the plot. The biggest difference from the original work is that it is logical. As we all know, the original work often fails to follow logic in order to promote the plot. This cannot be seen here. The things that seem weird when you read them for the first time will be answered and filled in later. The comedy scenes are not unreasonable persecution of the characters. This really shows the author's tenderness towards the characters in his works. As it stands, the story follows Volume 7, which is another possibility for Volume 8. For people like me who were quite disappointed with Volume 8, it is really a redemption. Such delicate and sweet Wenba's daily life was what we originally expected to see in the eighth volume...

The delicate daily life of Wen Ba and the unique plot description are the advantages of this book. I was also a person who felt very disappointed after reading the eighth volume of the original work. How could the male protagonist not clarify his emotional line in eight volumes and make no progress at all? Not to mention that Hanami's scenes are getting less and less, and only readers are still deducting candy. Speaking of this fanfic, I just regret why I didn't discover it sooner. As for the "Yusen Trumpet", I won't talk about it, but after you read it carefully, you will be moved by all the details in it, especially the psychological description of the characters and the control of the atmosphere. I feel that the word "growth" is used throughout the book. From the beginning of the story, there may be awkwardness and passivity. After the first defeat, Wen Shui is able to confirm his emotions. Xingcai, who likes to tease Wen Shui, also shows his panic, shyness, gentleness and sincerity to Wen Shui from the "Flower of the High Mountain". After reading it, I believe that many people will be like me, filled with a sense of satisfaction and the excitement of youth. I think this is why it attracts and touches people. This kind of "realism" cannot be experienced in the original work, but in the fanfic written by Asami, you can perfectly capture the most precious moments of youthful love - from the ambiguity between two people to the critical point of mutual confirmation of their feelings. Wen Shui's inner monologue is a transformation from "complaining about trouble" to "willingly getting into trouble". It is a portrayal of the nature of love. Just like Wen Shui and Xingcai, liking someone means liking everything about them, including but not limited to "trouble", so you are in this book We can see many ways of transforming Wen Shui's love for Xingcai into extremely life-like, yet full of pampering behaviors; Xingcai in this book can definitely be summed up with words such as "tsundere" or "sweet girl". I think she is more like a sun named "Trouble" On the surface, she would often play tricks on Wen Shui, make some willful demands, and like to see Wen Shui at a loss. But when you carefully read the subsequent plot and cut open the shell of "trouble", you will find that Xingcai is actually a gentle and sincere girl at heart. Some "troublesome" behaviors ultimately point to the goal of Wen Shui. It is Xingcai who illuminates Wen Shui's gray world "unreasonably" and pulls Wen Shui out of that closed world. Xingcai is the truly active party in the relationship and the initiator of change. Neither Wen Shui nor Xing Cai is a static character in this book. They are both growing up dynamically. "The implicit beauty of running in both directions" is my humble opinion on the theme of this book. Both people have become braver and more complete people because of each other. Wen Shui has learned Xing Cai's "initiative", and Xing Cai has found "stability" in Wen Shui. This is also the reason why I like Asami's Onpachi novel. In Asami's writing, both Onsui and Xingna have jumped out of the "novel characters", like ordinary people who are brave and cowardly when facing the person they like in reality. This kind of tenderness hidden in the details is much sweeter than the straightforward confessions in other campus romance novels. Whether it is using small scenes to outline pictures and emotions, or using delicate language to let readers feel the growth between two people, or describing tacit and ambiguous moments in life, I think it all goes beyond the sweetness of ordinary love stories. This fanfic by Asami is not a "candy" like an assembly line production, nor is it a light novel that consumes the value of the characters and makes people feel like they are having fun reading it like the original work. The author really puts his heart into making Wen Shui and Xing Cai grow, making Wen Shui worthy of Xing Cai, and letting both parties illuminate each other's world. Asami's fandom not only complements Onpachi's emotional line, but also shows the greatest respect and love for the character itself. It answers the reader's inner desire and emotional sustenance for Onpachi. In a sense, Asami's fans responded well to the regret that the characters in the original work did not grow well, so I think this is not a "what if" story, but Asami's most sincere blessing for Anami Anami based on her love for her. Maybe what Asami writes is not the best, but I think it must be the most true, so I thank Asami for allowing readers to see such a story, and I hope that more people who like Anami Anami can read this fanfic.

In the eighth volume of Yu Sen, Lao Ba is the designated heroine, but she falls into a quagmire of character creation in the eighth volume and even in the entire series. Judging from the development of the story, other female characters are constantly growing and transforming. For example, Lemon showed the process of falling in love with Wen Shui, which paved the way for the subsequent national competition and developed a "bad boy" side; Xiao Ju gradually fell in love with Wen Shui and gradually grew up from social fear, which also allowed us to see a different side of her in front of her family. But what about Lao Ba? She seems to have been frozen in the first volume. Apart from the characteristic of gluttony, it is difficult to see any other obvious changes and growth in her. Asami's book highlights Lao Ba's personality based on the characters established by Yumori. As a person who became a warm-hearted person after reading the eighth volume, Hai's book made me become the warm-hearted person again when I first read "The Lost Dog". Thank you very much

It really took me three days to finish this book [crying] [crying] [crying] This is simply a masterpiece! At the same time, it gave me a deeper and more thorough understanding of The Lost Dog. There are twists and turns, waves, heartbeats, and even more touching. This is the most authentic and true portrayal of youth. Everyone has their own ideas, and everyone seems to be a real existence. Everyone will not be a loser forever. Everyone deserves a very decent ending [crying] I already regard this book as original [crying] [crying] [crying] I hope old man Yusen just ctrl+c [crying] [crying] [crying] and then animate it! My favorite heroine deserves such a wonderful ending! At last! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] I want to say: I love you❤️Hanami Anena [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] I love you❤️The great Asami [cry][cry][cry]

This is the only imitation original that I admire. It's also the only book I've given a five-star review. I spent some time reading the original work. Author, please tell the truth. Is this your trumpet, Yusen?

After reading this book, write a more formal review. As "Too Many Lost Dog Heroines!" " Is a fan work. There is no doubt about the completion of this book. It can be clearly seen that the author loves and understands the original work. As a member of the Taiwanese translation team, I am also commendable in the restoration of brushstrokes. Teacher Asami said that this is an OOC work. So what is the defeated dog heroine in Yu Sen's novel like? I think it can be described like this: a group of sparkling actors performing on an unrefined stage. More than the plot itself, perhaps the character creation in The Lost Dog is an important factor in its popularity. (Although it was suspected of self-destruction in the later period) To quote a teacher's comment, Anami's defeat was clear and crisp, and Onmizu Kazuhiko, as a "female public enemy", has an almost adult maturity in controlling distance. The former is a representative of enthusiasm, vitality, purity and youth, while the latter has the calmness of an adult to a certain extent (it can even be said to be self-denial). So, back to the beginning. Is this book OOC? It may or may not be the case. Onmizu Kazuhiko is still the person who has a rational and unique control over the sense of distance, and is also slightly deliberate. He will still be dull, and he will still maintain an attitude that is close to central air conditioning when facing different women. But he also changes quickly. He will keep a distance from other people for the sake of Yana seeing Anina, and he will be aware of small thoughts that he would not be aware of before. At the same time, he still maintains the tough monologue with a sense of self-denial. In the words of Teacher Asami, this is the warmth of Kazuhiko in his heart. He may not have OOC, but this transformation is not presented in a way that is easy for people to perceive. After discussing the core OOC issues, there are some details. Teacher Asami has buried a lot of small ideas in the text. They are very easy to find and have a sense of youth unique to the student days. I just feel that many people are unable to get these, which is a small regret. In addition, the frequency of interaction between Mr. Asami and readers can be said to be quite high. It is this that makes me have the urge to write the next book review (laughs) It took me nearly a month to read this book intermittently, so I was not deeply affected by some of the previous chapters. Taking the recent fourth defeat and the ending as an example, some of the protagonist's language descriptions are suspected of "literature prevails over quality and history". But most of the time, the text can still be considered to be both literary and quality. It can be seen that Mr. Asami wants to restore Nikki's style and Japanese cultural background as much as possible (such as the little ingenious thoughts about "separation" in a certain chapter), but sometimes there is still a local Chinese atmosphere, which is a kind of characteristic. Zhang Dinghao mentioned in "Preparation for Criticism and Others" "Chesterton once distinguished in this regard that artistic quality is a disease that afflicts art lovers. It arises from people who do not have sufficient expressive power to express the artistic element in themselves and get rid of it... Artistic quality brings many real misfortunes-vanity, violence, fear, but the greatest misfortune of artistic quality is that it cannot create any art." I myself, perhaps, am just such a person who "sings and sighs like a fever" and is unable to produce anything. After any idea becomes a text, there are countless theories and standards to deconstruct and criticize it. And those critics and their comments are just parasites attached to these works. So, thank you Mr. Asami for bringing you such works. My humble opinion, light spray.

It's really beautiful, especially the psychological description and some details

For me who is Win8, this book can really resolve my dissatisfaction with the eighth volume. If the author's work is adapted into animation, I believe that a large number of people will read the original work because of this. All in all, this book is very suitable for people who like losing dogs and win8.

I started reading it in April this year, and spent a summer waiting for it to be finished. I recently finished reading it and continued reading it from the second volume. The best level among all the defeated dog fanfics I have read so far. I feel like I'm on par with other post bar bosses like Katakana Guy and Yamada Anana. Advantages: The writing is delicate, many small details are well done, and there is sufficient foreshadowing for the advancement of the plot. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is well done, and the changes are not abrupt. This is something that many fanfics fail to achieve. Disadvantages: Too short. There may indeed be other shortcomings, but there are very few fanfics about Lost Dogs, and the ones that are out there are pretty good to read, not to mention that they are considered top-notch in this kind of fanfics. To make a digression, The Lost Dog will release volume 8.5 In January next year. The old thief Yumori will start to slow down the rhythm again. I can only say that it is too typical. By the way, will Asami join the Chinese group this time? Besides, Asami still loves you [blowing kiss]

Win 8 is right, this book is invincible, okay, I finished the ninth volume of the original work [crying] [crying], a lot of gods and men did not say anything, and the party disputes started to carry water, I declare that the author's book is the most perfect ninth volume [like] [like] [love] [love]

So cool! What I want to see is this mouth tooth! In the original book, if Lao Ba had half of this offensive ability, he would have been ruined long ago. Knock, knock, knock, I'll hit the horse and explode The author's writing style is very good, and it is the only fan work I have read so far that has the youthful flavor of the original work! Very powerful

Wen8's daily interactions are super sweet [blowing kisses], very Riqing style, this is the daily life of youth love that we should have. In the fourth defeat, wen8's emotional upsurge and two-way running are also great. The beautiful apricot depicted is top-notch. It is the best defeated dog fanfic I have ever seen [send heart]. It surpasses the original work, okay [sending my heart]. Unlike the abstract Sakurai triangle in Volume 9, the characters are OOC, party fights and love affairs are still watered down [face covering] Very delicious 😋

The author's writing is very close to the original work, and the emotions are also very delicate, which is super beautiful [Love] Teacher, I will follow you for the rest of my life [crying] It's so good and there are few books that I insist on following, but I really like this one [crying] [love] Teacher, come on, more and more [crying]

I'm almost finished reading it, it's really well written, and it also allowed me to see part of the true face of the defeated dog. Wen Shui made the core clear from the beginning. Maybe this is just Wen Shui and Yu Sen's original fantasy, as follows It is said that 70% of high school couples break up within a year. If you include them after graduation, they are almost wiped out. However, everyone is still involved in the toss of love, sometimes crying, sometimes laughing. I don't expect my heart to be shaken by such short-term things, but sometimes I also think, if I had that kind of youth, if there was a heroine who would shed tears for me, if I were the male protagonist of a light novel, how would I feel at that time?

Very fresh! Very delicious! Can't sleep at night! Can't sleep at night!

The writing is really great, the writing style is very close to the original work, and it can be seen that the author really put a lot of thought into it. It is a pity that the old thief Yusen stopped being a human being from the beginning of Volume 678, which is sad.

The best loser fanfic, long live win Eight Party ≧▽≦, just by watching the clip of Lao Ba crying on the rooftop, I fell in love with this girl who loves to eat. After all, being able to eat is a blessing, in short, long live Lao Ba [laughs]

The author's writing is really good. You are the second Yusen in my heart [flying kiss][flying kiss] Teacher, please don't finish it. Are you considering other works in the future? You are truly the most authoritative author of light novels and fanfics that I have ever seen. I hope to see more of your works [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I would like to call it a masterpiece of Lost Dog. The emotional portrayal is delicate without losing the true meaning. The psychological activities are natural and logical. The growth of the characters is also very impressive. The quiet and peaceful atmosphere makes people want to stop. The various small plots with clever writing are sweet and loving. There is no taste of industrial saccharin at all. It is like what is happening in another parallel world. It is endless aftertaste and cannot be stopped. The psychological description is also delicate and profound, completely depicting the sweetness of youthful love. The feeling of pure love is beyond words and penetrates people's hearts, giving people healing like holy light. It is a complete representative of brightness and beauty. It heals your and my souls, gentles your and my lives, and composes a magnificent song that inspires oneself.

Come on, my thoughts are the same as yours, the writing is very good😄＼(`Δ')／

Personally, I think that the characters described by the author are all very close to the original work, including some detailed language descriptions, and there is no strong sense of dissonance in the second creation. Friends who like "The Lost Dog Heroine" can come and taste it [Top post][Top post][Please update][Please update]

I will always like Yanami! I hope that the second volume will have more of the natural daily life of an old couple, and that some of the daily routines will be less reminiscent of the original work. I would also like it more if this part is left blank.

(It's not why I swallowed the previous long review) All in all, it looks great! Thank you so much to the author! (I'll try a long review) I just finished reading the first volume and I feel like I have a lot of thoughts⋯ Thanks to the author for bringing us such a perfect work, which makes me, a win8 party, satisfy the plot that cannot be seen in the original work. It's a coincidence that I got into it from the animation. From clicking the play button of the first episode on Ab, to quickly starting to read the book, and then to finding this novel non-stop after reading the entire book, it only took a few weeks. To be honest, this "fan" by the author should be more like the original work in my opinion. At least I want to treat it as the original work. Why? Maybe my own experience can also bring some resonance. Of course, I have no modeling or numerical values. I am just lucky or unlucky that I happened to have a "such and such" story at this time.

Very good, very sweet fanfic, it made me roll around on the bed

Although this book has been finished for a long time, I will still read it again and again. This is the first time I write a book review. After the 6th volume of the original work, I felt that the taste has changed. As a chef, the original work made me feel great discomfort. I feel that Lao Ba must have been greatly wronged [almost crying]. This fanfic brought me back to the first time I read The Lost Dog. In my heart, this is the best Lost Dog (Old thief Yu Sen will definitely not write such a good one [eat melon]) Thank you to the author for being my mouthpiece and writing out the best Wen Ba in my heart. Maybe in the future, when I think of the defeated dog, the first reaction is not the plot of the original work, but the author's Kazuhiko and Xingcai. Thank you to the author. I hope that Lao Ba will always be happy in that time and space, and will not feel wronged by Yu Sen's Wen Shui anymore [I'm about to cry]

Even though I don't read novels, I also came here for The Lost Girl. I sincerely recommend it. It's really good.