Turn in the Double Portal at the Beginning, and the Whole Country Invades the World of Cultivation

When cultivating immortality, why should we not focus on spiritual roots and special physical constitution and bloodline but on physical strength?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the writing style The youthfulness will be criticized. When you watch twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progress has been paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the dead end The number began to decline. When you update five times, readers' support will spontaneously form and praise you The voice became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates were deafening and tolerant. The attitude is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will be a part of the bookworm's memories Even in a long life, your name will remain A dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but 90% of them The problems above all come from insufficient updates.

I want to know whether it is the golden elixir or the Nascent Soul after the foundation is established [smile]

It's pretty good for a junior high school student, but there are errors in writing and logic, the combat power system is wrong, and the economic logic is a bit wrong. Other themes that are not faulty are also good. I hope the author can see progress if he continues his work.

Wonderful and clear logic, the author keeps working hard

Give it 4 stars first. It's too short. Just entered the state and disappeared

It's toxic, but watchable. I just hope there won't be a drag queen in the future. It's best if there is no heroine [eating melon]

It looks good, but it's already showing signs of collapse╮()╭I hope it can come back to full shape [awkward laugh]

It's okay. At present, I feel that it's not broken. It's just that the system of cultivating immortals is different from that of other mortals. I haven't seen the setting of spiritual roots yet. Overall, it's still ok and can be read. I hope the author will update more eunuchs.

It's pretty good, but the rating is so low [Thinking]

This kind of novel is really interesting and makes people want to read it.

It's good to watch. 8 Out of 10 male videos are for harems. It seems that if you don't have a woman, you will die. This one doesn't, so it's pretty good.

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low?

Very interesting. I like this book very much.

Relatively fresh ideas

It's pretty good, you can check it out

Very well written, keep up the good work

Not bad, very pretty

Come on, the subject matter is great

Not bad, not bad, you can take a look

A little too big! Can you update it soon? I finished reading it in one noon -.-

The theme and ideas are quite fresh and interesting.

I have read similar books before, but not as good as this one [lick screen][lick screen]

The subject matter is novel, but the writing style... After all, I am used to tomato novels [laughing] The double time travel story has almost become a fairy tale. The content of the two worlds is seriously imbalanced. Lin Xiuxiu's supporting role does have a lot of roles. There is also a test of immortality to test your strength. The combat power system is unbearable. The timeline of the end of the earth is extremely unreasonable... But then again, although there are many poisonous points, it does not affect the viewing. It is recommended to add a "brain storage" in the first chapter [laughter]

It's really good to watch. Don't miss it. Please support me and don't be a eunuch.

The writing is very good, keep writing and don't finish it badly.

Different from traditional time travel stories, this one is good-looking

Why is the score so low?

Good book, worth reading

It looks so good. I want to sleep after watching it.