Archmage of the Elements at Hogwarts

This book is also called "I traveled through Xiao Nanniang and became a succubus in the magical world"

After reading a lot of Harry Potter books, I think this one is very good-looking and exciting. I don't know if the protagonist will have cp in the end. In the article, Dumbledore activated ghosts and portraits to fully monitor whether the protagonist was a bit too much. Even when Voldemort was in school, Dumbledore was not so defensive. The protagonist is so famous in the wizarding world. I wonder if Professor Dumbledore McGonagall and the Professor of Dark Arts who appear in the article are blocked or something. Voldemort actually didn't bother the protagonist, and even wanted to recruit the male protagonist. But there is a scene that is quite fun to think about. Voldemort, who is nearly middle-aged and has no disfigurement, is suddenly fascinated when he sees the male protagonist.

Nice! It's great ~ except that sometimes the profiling of the protagonist's beauty makes me a little embarrassed.

I like your setting. The poor sense of immersion in the article is actually not a big problem. The problem is that a large number of readers need a sense of immersion, so the poor sense of immersion becomes your problem. As a aside, most people confuse "sense of substitution" with "sense of introduction". The former means that the reader takes the place of a certain character, while the latter means that the reader is brought into the atmosphere of the article. Because the various inadvertent descriptions in this article are quite attractive to me, I think this article is engaging. Ps: Actually, I don't like "substitution" very much, including the word itself and the impact it brings. I think... I think "substitution" is a kind of sadness of the times. Maybe human civilization cannot develop to an era where the entire society does not need a "sense of substitution"…

The author writes well, but there is one flaw. That is, many descriptions in Fengzhong can be expressed through dialogue, but the author mostly uses a writing method similar to the narrator's perspective. It is recommended that the author write more dialogue and less description.

It feels pretty good, it doesn't feel that brainless, and I feel it has surpassed most of Tomato's HP fans.

It feels pretty good, the only drawback is that the pace is too fast [face covering] It feels like I'm reading an outline, and I don't see the usual bonds and friendships.

The writing is very good. The appearance and temperament of the protagonist are really good.

Looking at it optimistically, I would rate it at 7 to 8 points, but because there are too few dialogues, it would be too slow to score 8.5 Points.

This book is an instruction manual. I wish I could use half a chapter to explain it in one sentence.

The narration is hard to get a sense of involvement, but overall it's pretty good. It can alleviate the book shortage for a while, but I will start to eat books in the middle period. It is entirely possible to raise the threshold for simplification instead of lowering it to simplify the income.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is very likable and qualified~

Six, this one is really charming, the male channel and the female channel didn't notice it.

The topic is novel and interesting, and the writing style is also very good.

How do I put it? I don't know if I had the illusion of skipping during the period. Why do I feel that the protagonist was male in the early stage and changed to female in the later stage? ? It's all 'her' [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

This book has four stars in my heart. It's well written so far. Keep up the good work.

The strange priest in Chapter 43. Are you a little boy?

It's pretty cool, hehe [laughs] emmm, I finished reading the first volume, and I'm a little confused. I don't understand the use of this elemental magic at all. Currently, elemental magic can only rely on signing a contract with the protagonist and borrowing the protagonist's power. What's the difference between this and directly inducing the magic power between heaven and earth to release elemental magic? Instead, you put all your magic power on others. There is a magic network in the back catalog, but it doesn't explain at all what the disadvantages of modern magic are. Why should everyone abandon modern magic to specialize in your elemental magic [face covering] The protagonist has Dumbledore's strength, and he keeps participating in duels. It feels very disconnected [face-covering] The purpose is still money. If it is for money, which one can make more money than alchemy or potions? [Face-covering]

So what happened to that priest?

Very interesting, very exciting.

Um, maybe I didn't look too carefully, but the protagonist is male or female.

The protagonist will become a woman in Chapter 125, but it seems that she has never changed back. Those who can't accept it can leave. The protagonist has talked about her strength, and her gender is no longer important.

Thank you so much for the author~

The author writes very well

This novel is very well written

It's interesting that I'm partial to academics

Love it, but a little lacking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Everything needs to be explained.

Except for the water, everything else is pretty good