Warhammer: Astartes

I would like to give a suggestion. When writing, let the plot of the story pause for a while to give readers some time to digest. The writing and plot are both very good, but (probably my problem) the amount of information input at once is a bit large, and the main plot line is very closely connected, which makes it a bit tiring to read. Moreover, I miss a lot of the main line without reacting (I don't like to accidentally write about it personally), but I should not say that the writing style is really good.

Why is it so beautiful that no one comments?