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It's very Pokémon-like. The darkness in the introduction only refers to the ferocity of the villain. There is no alliance or aristocratic rule for the sake of darkness, and there are no messy levels or modifiers. It's a good book.

I didn't have time to finish reading it, but I was worried that the author wouldn't be able to continue writing, so I will share my feelings after reading it first. Frankly speaking, it is definitely among the top Pokémon-themed novels I have read. 1 Has his own thinking and tells the story of Pokémon as he understands it. The worldview is not particularly fairy tale, but it is not deliberately dark and cruel either. It feels appealing to reveal a little bit of hope 2Although there are slight character changes, I think this is the charm of fan fiction, and the soul of the character is still there. For example, in the battle with Xiao Mao, the portrayal of Xiao Mao (having his own pride and not accepting the excuses made by others for his failure) Xiaomao and Xiaozhi grew up together, how could their relationship be so different? Therefore, the other characters are not flattened like some other fans, which makes me look forward to the author's portrayal of other characters. 3. The perspective is no longer limited to characters, and a lot of descriptions from the perspective of Pokémon have been added. I think this is also the charm of the Pokémon world. The most touching thing is the trust in each other wholeheartedly, and the bond is enough to span life and death. Pokémon are more than just fighting tools and showy decorations 4. The plot is foreshadowed and narrated with foreshadowing and recycling, and the whole story is linked one by one. I saw that the author mentioned that there is an outline, and I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot. In short, I really hope the author can continue writing it and will definitely finish it. I also hope that latecomers will give it a try after reading the book review. I can't say it's perfect, but it's definitely worth a try.

There are relatively few original Tomato Xiaozhi now, please support me. The more than 6,000 words in each page are worth reading without procrastinating. I hope I can conquer the Crystal Rock Snake in the future, and I look forward to [learning it].

So far it seems to be very good, the three updates a day are very good, the writing is okay, and Xiaozhi's character has not changed significantly. Although in my opinion there are some flaws in the details, it is still a good book. Don't stop updating! ! !

To be honest, the beginning of this book especially made me feel like I wanted to continue reading. If the author keeps updating more than 500 chapters, I will continue reading.

Very good. I think it is the best Pokémon fanfic besides Shinji [Love] I hope the author will come up with more original plots in the future and just maintain the level of the current plots [Sending my heart]

I have seen the author's original plot of Xiaozhi and Semei's first encounter and the end of the summer camp. Based on the writing style of this paragraph, this book can reach a rating of 8.5 To 9.0 (Of course, the number of readers must be increased first), and it will be difficult to go higher. The characters are well drawn, at least there are no repetitions of character settings. It's just that the scene descriptions and details are not detailed enough. It seems like the first revision was made based on the outline.

Not bad, feels like Xiaozhi

It's very well written, keep up the good work! So far, I feel pretty good after watching it. The slight dark wind has slightly changed Xiaozhi's character, but not much, which makes me feel very comfortable. Come on! ! !

Come on, come on, come on [send heart]

Look good, look, look, look

Very good this book made my brain spin

I want to know why Xiaozhi has to be written as a muscular man [laughing and crying]

Come on, there are so few good-looking original ones. The original plot is exciting and unconventional. In addition, I saw it on the recommendation list on the homepage. The popularity is also improving, and I hope the author can stick to it.

Nowadays, there are too few people writing about the original Ash Ketchum. The writing is pretty good. Come on, author!

A good novel. At a time when the system trend is so popular, there is a relatively pure novel that can be considered a masterpiece.

This book is considered an unpopular and excellent Pokémon novel, and he also changed some of the not-so-good things in the original book. I only have one wish, the heroine is Serena

It's pretty, has its own style

It's pretty good. Although it's a bit dark, it's moderate. It's not traditional, but it's quite novel to travel alone.

Very nice fanfic. I have read many fanfics that are not as good as this one. I hope this book won't be discontinued or out of stock and I will continue to support it.

Very well written, a very interesting fanfic! Work hard to update! [Like][Like][Like]

The original plot is exciting and unconventional, I hope the author can persist

Come on, author, no one writes about Pokémon these days.

Xiaozhi was very successful in shaping

Brothers, believe me it's worth watching!

Great book, why doesn't anyone read it?

The few good-looking original Ash Ketchum

Okay, it's the original Xiaozhi [give a heart]

It's not long yet, but the original wisdom has good reviews.

The writing is okay, it has bonds, has Ash's characteristics, and is in line with the world view of Pokémon. It is indeed a little dark, but I have seen that kind of darkness, indiscriminate attacks, attacking the trainer first, just like the plot in Black and White.