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1: There are no big flaws in the daily rhythm and character control, but to change to a more classic problem, it is that my psychological transformation process and the environment are not properly rendered. Of course, the new author is understandable and has handled it very well. 2: It seems that the daily pace is relatively slow, but in fact the pace is too fast, and it is easy to deviate from the readers' expectations. However, the narrative skills are excellent, but you can consider using interludes to introduce the background or daily memories in the first part to avoid the structure being too simple. I'll look at the additions later

Wow, rare to see In fact, the author reviewed it, which is amazing

The part about the young boy pursuing the heroine is a little childish, but everything else is pretty good. Overall, it looks pretty sweet. Come on [blow kisses]

Did the author refer to the writing method of my sister's life, but the handling of the emotional line feels much better

Not bad, not bad. It's a rare, high-quality novel about pampering a girl. The male protagonist also has a very good personality and looks like a convincing older brother!

This is a magical book. It's a divine book in Tomato. It's not the kind of assembly line writing. My sister is so cute. To be honest, the author could have written it as real brother and sister. I would be satisfied if we were not together. My sister is so cute.

Can I also give myself a five-star review [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

What the protagonist's parents say is for review [Like]

I usually put this kind of book on my bookshelf to read [Blow a kiss], lest it suddenly disappear from the historical records one day [Send a heartfelt message]

A very nice daily novel, the writing style is also very good. Compared with Tomato's other daily novels, I personally think it is a good product, and the first person is also very good [Thoughts]

Good looking, love watching, be careful of being blocked

'Author, have you reviewed it?

The author's description of the environment is very good, and the depiction of the dual characters' mentality is also very good, but his grasp of time is not very good. Three years passed by in an instant, which was very abrupt. The entanglement between relationships is relatively less described. Overall, it is a book worth recommending [Like] [Like] [Like] There are also many scenes that can be written that are not included, such as clubs or the richer student life in study books.

A very nice novel [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I still like this kind of sister

It's a treasure book. It's very beautiful and I like it.

A very wonderful book with a compact plot and delicate characterization. The more I read it, the more I like it.

Good looking, come on author [blowing kiss]

Come on, author, give me five stars

This is the sweet story I want to read.

How should I put it, there is a sense of déjà vu that the heroine is Yui [face covering]

Come on, meow, come on, meow

Give me a good review and cheers

I feel a bit like I'm destined to be empty.

Ah ah ah ah I want to watch the education and training

It's a beautiful book, I'm longing for the protagonist, and the pace progresses very quickly!

It's pretty good. The writing style is a bit immature, but you can tell that someone has carefully crafted the work.

Good reviews, recommended [like], except for the lack of plot due to Shen He, so far it is very good, I love my sister's story [adoration]

Brother, it's really good-looking, with dual perspectives, but there are too few new books to read, but don't worry, after all, it's a new author, it's good-looking, I like it, I like it Every chapter is so interesting to read carefully, but I downloaded it in advance and read it offline [laughing] I like it, I like it, the author updates it ten times a day or rubs the lithography machine by hand [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The writing is so good, how can I put it, the younger sister is described very much like a younger sister, or in other words, the character is very similar to an older brother.

I read in the comment that it was changed. What was changed?