Reverse Transmigration: Why Did Dieci Show Up in My Bathroom?

First of all, this is not a completely objective evaluation, just enjoy it. As a fanfic, my impression is good. The first is the character's personality. The gentleness of the protagonist and Xiaodie's shyness and human-machine sense are all very well reflected. There is no OOC (except for the male protagonist's big heart and the fact that he won't run away when he sees a scythe), which perfectly fits the image of Xiadie who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. The progress of the plot is not delayed. Although the main character is only a sophomore in high school when I first clicked on it, I originally thought there would be no interesting events. However, the author only focused on the second semester of the second semester and the first semester of the senior year. The various activities with Xia Die that happened in the daily life of a student are also very sweet. Now that I'm in college, I don't even have the daily routine of studying anymore. All that's left is posting with Xia Die (the author must have posted, right) That's all I have to say, the rest is for you to taste for yourself. (Courtesy submission: If you don't agree with me, I stayed up late the day before the mid-term exam and played with my tablet. When I was writing the essay, I thought of a lot of Internet jokes and blamed them on the author's confession 🙂 🙂 🙂 ) (Note: It's a joke, but I really can only think of Internet jokes during the mid-term exam)

Well... First of all, as a Xiadie chef, I think the creation of Xiadie in this fanfic is relatively restored, and there is no OOC. It is the best Xiadie fanfic I have ever read. Then, the subject matter of the book is not too novel, but the plot develops at a very good speed, which does not make people feel too slow or too jumpy. Moreover, although the writing style of this book is not very good and the language is very plain, it has a more life-like atmosphere, which is my preferred style. But you, in some places, it may be that the author does not know the plot well enough (I don't think this is the reason, after all, I am here to write fan fiction) or that I was not clear-headed at the time, and there are some obvious mistakes, such as "can't even feel the destiny" in the first chapter. As mentioned later in the book, the plot happened before the train crew arrived in Ompharos, so Xia Die could not have known the concept of destiny at that time. This is a relatively obvious mistake. All in all, this fanfic is still very well written. I hope the author can keep up the good work and update more, so come on! 💕

Give yourself a thumbs up. This book has been planned for a long time, but due to its strength, it still has some shortcomings in terms of perception and writing. Chapters 20 to 40 of this book have been drastically revised (no different from rewriting). I thought it was a bit silly before. In short, it is not easy to get this book to this day. I will continue to write more, because there is no outline, I just write whatever comes to mind. Thank you readers for your support [Chigua]

In the upper middle, it is mainly about emotional resonance. Author Aite, I will send you a fresh photo of Xiaodie and change the cover.

So embarrassing, so embarrassing!!! Author's quick updates ❥(ゝω✿ฺ)

The reading time is 4000 plus Laodeng's proof. The writing is very good. I am a sand gold cook and I want to smoke butterflies. Let's put it this way, it is very life-like. The writing style is considered high among the Bengtie fanfics. Keep up the good work 💕

My friend, the writing style of your book is a bit like deepseek. It's not that you are an AI, but I personally prefer deepseek when reading or listening (in terms of words and sentences).

It's really good-looking, but the quality is not popular, it's a pity

Hey hey hey, Zuo Ai is so good 🥰🥰🥰

Really pretty and sweet