Swordsman: the Beginning of Yan Nantian's Journey Through Lin Zhennan

It has to be said that martial arts in Tomato are dead. It is estimated that the books written by the four families of Jin, Gu, Huang and Wen now also have a lot of criticism, just because the concepts have changed with time. As a martial arts novel, this book is already well written. It should be a work of practice for the author, and there is plenty of room for improvement. However, readers who have been trained in online novels will feel that there are many poisonous points. The most controversial one is to eliminate all evil and only punish the first culprit. Both of them have their own logic and are limited by the times. But martial arts is an era where law has collapsed, so the law of the jungle is more appropriate. In addition, the author's suggestion is that there is no need to follow the original plot. Tian Boguang will definitely become a must-have, and Linghu will definitely make friends with gangsters and betray his master. This is completely unnecessary. There are too many private goods in Zha-style narratives and they should be abandoned to hide bad values.

Come on. This book is very Jin Yong style, and the fighting descriptions are very exciting. As a Xiaoao fan, the author's world view is still acceptable, with a few expansions and not all original works. But the author will have a proper plot review. Although [] is used to express inner thoughts, some sentences still sound awkward to read. You can write a few more sentences and simplify them. In this novel, Yan Nantian is not a good knight like "Xiao Feng", but a "mad knight" with clear grievances. And worthy of being the Hero of the South, in this novel, there are evenly matched opponents and no defeats. Readers only know the general plots of "Swordsman" and "Jue Dai". My impression of Nan Tian is just very strong. There is also some comic plot about inviting Yue and Nan Tian to have an affair. I feel that "The Magical Art of Wedding Clothes" and "The Magic of Attracting Stars" are very joyful. In recent chapters, the place names have been changed a lot, and the timeline is a bit complicated, which is a bit difficult for people who don't understand and don't pay close attention. It just feels like you are in the south for a while, and you are in the north for a while.

The author's writing is great! I have accumulated experience, and after adding my own plot, it still follows the same direction as the original work. It is amazing. It completes the plot of Guan Gong and Qin Qiong that I have always been thinking about. I have been thinking about the status of Yao Yue and Yan Nantian in Jin Yong, and now I can realize my dream.

Those who write seriously can only say A little bit unsatisfied

The writing is really good, I like this kind of narrative. I started watching it in the evening and watched it all night long.

This book has a very correct understanding of Swordsman. Especially the character description of Yue Bu is almost a replica of the original work. I don't want those Yue Buqun to wash away their white papers.

It's like adding cologne hops to Jin Yong's brewing vat, and brewing a pure and beautiful wine with an unusual flavor. The author must have had a deep study of martial arts to write at such a high level. Come on, author -! Since I can't finish it, I'll write a side story for everyone! I will definitely continue to support it.

The writing is good and the narration does not drag on. A rare book among online articles The writing is good and the story is good, but the ending is too rushed.

Good looking, really good really good

Yan Nanzhen is really a real hero.

Good book. . . . Not many people know about it

I really like the character Yan Nantian.

It's okay, not too ruthless, the protagonist also let go of those who helped the evildoer,

Okay, la la la

It's okay, I can keep it a little longer.

One of the few good martial arts books

The flavor of Lao Hong Kong slices, with a punch to the meat

Seeing it so far, it's not bad

Not bad, pretty good

To be honest, the story is quite good, but there are too many default rules of the world! Too many twists and turns!

Yes, it's a bit exciting. It's just that there's less emotional drama

The writing is good, why are the book reviews so miserable [face covering]