You Have Become an Immortal After Ten Years of Cultivation and I Only Established the Foundation?

It feels pretty good, but the pace is too tight. There are no less than ten villains in just 30 chapters, and the plot is also written very concisely. I feel like if I read less than a hundred words, I will jump to nowhere.

It is a very good and high-quality novel. It is a bit rough at the beginning, but then it is very good. The golden finger is also very powerful. The core competitiveness is very strong. It is equivalent to using the resources of the current environment to reach the peak saturation of the current environment. As long as the environment becomes stronger, the protagonist can follow the environment to become infinitely stronger. The main line is very clear, which is to improve the strength, and then the strength will feed back wealth and power. The reputation and plot are also very good. I don't know why the score is so low. Well, I feel that it is at least 8 points or above. (I just watched one with a score of 9.3. It is really very abstract. Damn it. The protagonist has a lot of inner drama, which makes people anxious. The setting is also quite complicated. It feels like the whole world is targeting him. The author did arrange it that way. In fact, everyone in the comment area is talking about the score of buying)

"Cultivation of Immortality: A One-Click Introduction to My Kung Fu" by Wenjiu Confucian Ke builds a fantasy world of cultivating immortals, allowing readers to immerse themselves in it. The protagonist Lin Yunming obtained the Chain Technique Diagram after traveling through time. He can learn the techniques with just one click. The setting is novel and very refreshing. The conflicts between him and Qingwen and Lin Muxue in the early stage are compact and fully demonstrate his character, adding a lot of interest to the story. Enter the plot of training in Hazy Moon Lake, and describe the training details and resource acquisition in detail. In terms of characterization, the supporting characters are a bit thin, and most of them are tools to promote the growth of the protagonist. Overall, this is an enjoyable book to read in your spare time. The author has built a complete system of cultivating immortals, and the protagonist's upgrade path is smooth, allowing readers to have a pleasant reading experience. I hope that the author can work more on plot polishing and character creation in the future to make the story more exciting.

Into a woman's den? Why is it that one of them is a woman? The subject matter is good, but the writing is not very good. In a mere Jindan sect, there are actually many people who are in their twenties and have established foundations. Based on this, it is possible for these people to form elixirs. This is not in line with common sense, and it is not a Nascent Soul sect.

The ultimate cool article, the front realm may be a bit slow, but the combat power is not inferior to the back. Well, although it is slow compared to his combat power improvement, it is already very fast. From start to finish, it was very enjoyable and decisive.

It's a really cool story, but every conflict is a bit too mindless. No matter who sees the protagonist, it's because he has a secret, and then he wants to fuck him. His cultivation level can't keep up with his combat power. When his combat power reaches the foundation building level, he's just in the middle of Qi training, and there are always a bunch of people targeting him, but it's really cool, and he's basically invincible.

In fact, Lin Yunming is just a small game anchor on Douyin. Every night in the live broadcast room, we can see the anchor Lin Yunming with a tired face and dark circles in his eyes just to make time to be on the list and get a few hundred yuan. This world is just a small game of cultivating immortals. If you have a Dharma conference or become the best in the Nine Provinces, it is just an arena. As for the star chain, physical fitness, etc., They are just star-level unlocking skills, gathering bonds, and buying titles. There is also Shang Qingyu, the one-click hang-up of the game. This world is just a fantasy of ordinary little anchors. [Sinister smile]

I see someone in the comment area saying that this is always targeted. How can I put it? This novel handles it well. Everyone in the world is seeking profit. Well, no matter it is real society or anything, it is all about fighting for power and profit. Why can't you live in peace? Why do others insist on robbing you? To put it bluntly, it's just your nature. Not to mention far, let's just say that in the Republic of China, when the landlords were annexing, there was no way for the farmers to survive. They had to do everything possible to force you to sell your things to them. Recently, there were TV dramas to beautify it. You are so talented.

Pure and refreshing, no pressure at all, push it all the way

Love to watch! There is no heroine in the decisive killing! Don't be aggrieved, take revenge if you have any revenge! Nice! What satisfies me the most is having others call you senior brother. This is very good. I hate most novels where people always call people senior brother or something based on their seniority. If you are awesome, you should be called senior brother by others. This is a very good thing about the author.

Well, at first, they were all women, and I thought it was a harem story, but I didn't expect that they were all left to the protagonist to kill. The whole plot is to join the sect, and I will kill whoever messes with me. It doesn't matter whether you are a man or a woman, what is your background, and the protagonist is very lucky. Every time he goes to a sect, the people in the sect have online IQs.

(18) Blue++, 34.75/50 Sense of immersion + follow-up reading: 3+3 Writing style + imagination: 3+3 Plug-in + background: 3+2 Rhythm + plot: 3+2 Character + Logic: 2+3 Extra: Blue Three 1×7=7 Feelings: A relatively ordinary cultivation novel, with vague combat power and a slap in the face with its brainless pretentiousness. Calculation: 6×2.75+15×0.75=27.75+7=34.75

How to say it? A very classic protagonist of justice. He is usually a good person. Once someone messes with him, he will attack without mercy. As long as the relatives and friends nearby are not affected and die, they can basically follow the chickens and dogs to heaven.

It doesn't look like a newcomer, the writing is distinctive. The pace is quite fast.

Very good, very good, and the rhythm is good! ! The writing is not stiff and the plot is reasonable. So far, there have been no disturbing episodes. Very good, tomatoes are rare, highly recommended Around Chapter 80, maybe I stopped for a long time and it didn't feel as good as before.

Almost like chicken breast Tasty at first bite The more I chew on it, the more uncomfortable it becomes😣

I feel that his interface should be in a state of body refining.

In the front, I feel like my cultivation level was suppressed, but in the back, I read and wrote quite well, the fighting was good, and I was crushed all the way, not bad.

Yes, it's worth a look. I personally think it's pretty good.

A very good work, not boring, and the main character is very enjoyable to watch. Very cool, very nice personality

I feel that this book is quite in line with my taste. It is a fast upgrade, a classic and refreshing article, and it is not overwhelming. It is quite good, but it is too little and not enough to read! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It's a pity that it was finished hastily, so it's considered unfinished. I originally hoped that the author would write more than ten million words, about ascending to the fairy world, the divine world, the holy world and even transcendence. It's a pity. Tomato is one of my favorite novels [crying] [crying] [crying]! ! !

I suspect that those who gave five stars are not good people.

The scoring mechanism of Tomato is very uncomfortable. Nice.

Is there a female protagonist? Author

Good, good, no words to express

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Good looking and not slowing down the pace

Why is the rating so low? I feel like it's very exciting later on, and the protagonist is not too pushy. Whoever comes and who dies?

Does the tool girl count as a heroine? How about adding some ambiguous scenes?

Not bad to see here. I hope it will be this wonderful in the future