It's my first time to write something. Mainly because I'm short of books and can't find the genre I like, so I try to write something. So the writing is not very good. Please forgive me. Thank you all.
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That's it
It's okay, but the protagonist has basically no involvement; it can be said to be a hodgepodge of plots and characters from different American dramas and movies. If it continues to be unsupervised, I will add five stars in the future.
It's very well written. Two points are deducted. The first is that it's a bit literate, and the second is that each paragraph is too long. It hurts my eyes to read. When writing online novels, you have to learn to use the carriage return as a period.
That's it
It's okay, but the protagonist has basically no involvement; it can be said to be a hodgepodge of plots and characters from different American dramas and movies. If it continues to be unsupervised, I will add five stars in the future.
It's very well written. Two points are deducted. The first is that it's a bit literate, and the second is that each paragraph is too long. It hurts my eyes to read. When writing online novels, you have to learn to use the carriage return as a period.
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