
Hand It over to the Supermarket System, and I Will Become the Best Friend of the Motherland!
上交超市系统,我成祖国亲闺闺!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 213k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Quick Transmigration
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
91Reads
101Chapters
24Listens
16.2kReads · all time




Overall, it's okay. Although there are some areas that can be improved in many details. It can be seen that the rhythm in the front is slow, and the rhythm in the back will be relatively tight. However, there are indeed a few ideas that are very good. Then there is the system mall, whose points rules are not so clear. There is room for improvement in this aspect.
Not specifically for trading. The story seems to be one piece at a time. It feels a bit like bringing a little bit to help someone wear a short section quickly. Most of it talks about how customers feel. Help with auxiliary tasks. Marked. 111111
It's very interesting. The plot of the first world is not too slow and very interesting. However, the pace of each subsequent world is a bit fast and I feel like I can't get enough of it. Moreover, the whole text is female-friendly. Come on, the author, you write it well!
It's very beautiful and the storyline is also attractive.
In fact, the writing is quite good. The male-female ratio is also normal at 1.1. There is no situation where men are the majority and women are the minority. Also, it is more comfortable to read if it is written in detail. And no sentence is repeated over and over in a chapter. For example, some of the writing I have a system for repeating n times in one chapter is annoying.
Very beautiful, I like the heroine very much
A book that is friendly to women (◦˙▽˙◦)
The novel is good, but the ending is too hasty. Everything else is good.