I Have an Unfinished Building

I like this book very much... But not many people read it [crying] The plot logic is quite novel, but the author doesn't seem to be good at writing emotional dramas. Except for the emotional scene which is a bit stiff, everything else is very good! [Love] I can find it in Tomato Writing books no longer follows the same routine!

Really pretty! According to the direction of the story, the ending is more or less a family knife, but in the end, the author ended it with a kind of warmth that we can't imagine. And the administrators and town hall people mentioned in it are very new characters. Lao Bai said that administrators and town hall guards are teammates who fight side by side. But at the same time, the administrator must exist, because he is the town hall person, the "anchor" in the human world. Most of the emotional lines in the whole text can be seen in Xiaoye's eyes or some actions, showing his love for Xiaolin. But in the extra chapter, Xiao Lin's initiative really surprised me... This book is really good. Some of the golden sentences in it show the author's profound writing style... (I don't know how to praise it anymore) OK! May they live a safe, happy and free life in another world!

It's good to read, I like it very much so far, but I would like to ask the author if this is the main story, is the protagonist Lin x Ye, Meow Meow Meow?

Lin Yinshen accidentally inherited a strange unfinished building, but found himself involved in a world full of suspense and supernatural phenomena. The seemingly ordinary property department is actually the "Foreign Object Business Management Department". The weird attitude of the drama manager Ye Ze, the strange changes in the residents' traits, and the shocking truth hidden in the unfinished building, let us follow the protagonist to explore [Explore]

It's very beautiful. I think this one is very beautiful. The emotions are implicit and not so obvious. You have to taste it yourself. Then I think the horror part is well written, it's really scary, and some of the scenes where the protagonist is showing off are really cool. There are a lot of things to eat in Shuangjie. I like it very much and hope the author will make more horror ones.

Oops, at the end, I thought it was about a family knife, but it turned out to be a responsibility knife. I don't know how sorry I am. The pace of the whole text is good, and the writing style and plot are also very good, but it is too short and I feel like I could write a lot more. In addition, the emotional line is a bit vague, when did they get together [what], but for me who pays more attention to the plot line, it is already well written!

The author's writing style is really good. There are many things in it that I didn't expect. I hope the author can write more! [Eat melon]

Overall, it looks good, the setting is relatively novel, and the storyline is quite interesting. It's just that the plot is not rich enough. I feel that this is a longer and longer story, so I still have some unfinished thoughts after reading it [Learned]

I like it very much, the writing is good

The setting is pretty good, as is the characterization. It's just that the plot is a bit bland and not that attractive. It would be better if the content were richer. There is almost no emotional line, just a little vague description

I really like it. The protagonist is so interesting and I love the subject matter. Hey, it would be nice if the interactions and emotional lines between Ye and Lin were more obvious. It's not cute enough at all. Also, it's a little short at over 90 chapters. [I'm full]

Come on, author, it's so beautiful

Look at the author of [top post] first, cheers💪 I've made some small changes, but I can't see any relationship between the main text and the attributes of the two protagonists of the copy (⩺_⩹) People who were attracted by the copy are a little disappointed. I won't comment on the rest for now, and I'll save them to read, after all, it's a new book! Come on, author~!

It's great to watch, but the ending is too hasty, which is a pity. All in all, I just didn't get enough of it.

The writing is very good, very logical, and the writing style is not novice. If you like watching micro-horror genre, you can read [][][][]

The content is very novel and interesting, and the main character is not that weak. The content is scary, but I like it very much hehe [laughs]

Nice! It feels a bit refreshing

I'm not good at it, I'm so good at writing, the writing is very good, the plot setting is very novel, it's quite interesting, it's not an old routine, and the story is also very interesting. I really like this kind of writing with shallow emotional lines. . The only bad thing is why it's so short! Not enough to watch at all. . Why are there so few people? .

The writing is really good, and the plot is online, but the number of words is a bit short, and I feel like I won't get enough of it afterward. The first two volumes are super good, but the later ones feel more and more incomprehensible. For me, it's a bit too high and low. Maybe it's because I didn't read it too seriously? Well, the story is running smoothly, and I feel like I can write another 1/4 of it. After reading it, I admit that my voice was a bit loud before. It is really beautiful. But after I put it together, it is still missing. I feel like I can write more.

It's the first time I've seen this type of thing, it's great

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can publish another one with a similar setting. [Sending my heart to you]

It's quite interesting, but it's not that plump overall, but it's still good. I haven't seen enough, haha

The content is very novel and very logical.

Delicious, delicious and nice to look at The logic is okay but the TVT is very short It's so delicious. The text didn't even express my feelings. I cried.

It's nice to read, but it's too short. However, the short story really leaves people with a feeling of unfinished learning. The horror atmosphere is created very well. I feel like the author could try writing a full-length horror novel.

It's beautiful, the setting is quite new, and the writing is great. I'm still unsatisfied after reading it, and I still want to read it.

Come on and update, the introduction is super interesting, look forward to it, is it unlimited streaming? [KISS][KISS][KISS]

The writing is really great!

It's okay. I didn't understand a little bit, but overall it's pretty good.

It was very interesting, I stayed up all night to read it. I just feel a little unaccustomed to the sudden ending [crazy] [crazy]