God-Killing*****

I feel that the teacher's writing style does not have an OOC feel at all, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. It is a rare undercover story, and there is no boring feeling like other protagonists who always play cheats. Now that I see the birthday banquet, the writing is really good! ! ! There are not too many emotional lines and there are no vulgar side plots (who knows that the key to the despair of reading a certain novel and discovering that the protagonist starts to have a harem has no label?) The life and background of the protagonist are also well written. I feel that the protagonist's three views are very positive. In addition to a sense of healing, the whole novel also has a kind of warmth and lightness. The light sad feeling is particularly in line with the identity and background of the protagonist, especially the emotion of the protagonist being an undercover agent. It does not have that passionate feeling, but the gentle feeling of the protagonist in the dark. The protagonist's forbidden ruins also fit well with the writing style of the whole article (really, my thinking ability is not very good, I really can't think of words to praise, please come on, teacher)

The author's writing is beautiful, the writing style is beautiful, the content is interlocking, and the subject matter is eye-catching and bright. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] The only fly in the ointment is that when the author stopped updating last time, I saved a lot of chapters but didn't read them. Later, my mobile phone was scrapped and I searched for this story for a long time. After finally finding it, the author seemed to have started over again, and the progress was different. I still have a few chapters that I haven't read [crying] (The author's writing is really beautiful, but the biggest fly in the ointment is that I couldn't get the first place [laughing])

I came from the previous book. After waiting for a long time, it is finally published. The writing is very good and the storyline is very good. I am really looking forward to Brother Drag discovering He Yi's identity later. Compared with the previous book, He Yi's identity has also been supplemented. The pace is a little slower than the previous book. I highly recommend everyone to read it. After all, there are not many such good books [laughing]

The author wrote this article. I feel that the subject matter is very novel, because most of the articles are not growth-oriented, but are directly cheating, which will cause his subsequent articles to be discontinued or written to collapse because he does not know how to write. But the author's descriptions are very good, and if there are some knives, he will cleverly bring them back, and he will not forget some of the purposes of his time travel just because he is growing up. What's more, it's the author's writing style. The author may have just finished the high school entrance examination, so some of his descriptions still feel like writing essays. However, I feel that some of his descriptions can be included in essays (I believe there are many comrades who write essays), and the author's writing is getting better and better. Then the plot is very exciting and there are some jokes interspersed in it, which is quite humorous. Then, there are some plot transitions that are a bit inadequate, but they can be ignored. Of course, if you want that kind of perfect writing, then don't come here. As for the weird points, I don't think there are any big ones. Most of them are small details that usually appear when we read novels, but they can be ignored. After all, who reads novels with brains [laughs]. In addition, the logic is good, there is a certain degree of coherence, and the plot is not procrastinating (10 points recommended, everyone should watch it)

Fly bravely, and tomatoes will always be with you! The writing style is really super and invincible (I think so). The writing style is very graphic and beautiful. I can really feel the vitality of these young people. Woohoo, I feel so bad for He Yi o(╥╥)o Being a double undercover agent, it must be very painful to be told that by my former teammates [I'm about to cry] He Yi, you are just a piece of fragrant, soft, sweet, soft and glutinous, cute, personable, energetic, sunny and cheerful blueberry cake ~ I really like it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Your Majesty, you are a beautiful woman who is in love with the country, you are the fish and the wild goose, the moon is shy of the flowers, the beauty of the country is fragrant, the beauty is natural, the face of the moon is beautiful, the eyes are white, the beauty is delicious, you are graceful and charming, the ice muscles are jade bones, the peerless beauty, the eyebrows are clear and the eyes are beautiful, the grace is beautiful, the heart is orchid, the smile is beautiful, the eyebrows are beautiful, the world is extremely beautiful, charming and beautiful, Graceful and graceful, a natural beauty, as gorgeous as peaches and plums, graceful in style, eyebrows as painted in black, eyes like autumn water, skin as creamy, lips red and teeth white, looking forward to radiance, fairy-like appearance, elegant and refined, delicate and charming, beautiful and intelligent, with a smile that will captivate the city. A girl who smiles all over the country, has a graceful appearance, white teeth and eyebrows, orchid heart, curling and graceful, beautiful and beautiful, with beautiful face, red lips and white teeth, graceful and graceful, bright eyes and good vision, natural beauty, moon face and beautiful face! It's more interesting when written in big letters, and the plot develops quickly. The previous writing was a bit like a composition, but now it has been changed a lot, and it is more comfortable to watch. Although some small details were not handled well in the past, it is overall very good ~ I highly recommend everyone to read it ~ ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhx them. I thought I had read so many god-killing novels that I was numb, but I didn't expect such a genuine product to exist. Great support for the author＾0＾~

Come on, the author is great The author's writing style is very good, and the psychological description of each character is very delicate (in my opinion, the best chapter is the chapter in He Yi's autobiography). It is also very lively and interesting. He usually interacts with readers in the fan group or when the author has something to say. This book is very interesting. The protagonist He Yi is an undercover night watchman in the Church of Ancient God. He once participated in the recruit training camp with Lin Qiye, and also cleaned up the believers for the night watchman. He experienced a lot along the way, including being an undercover person in the Church of Ancient God. He was frightened, including his youthful wantonness when getting along with his friends, and his mischief in the boot camp... When the identity of the believer was exposed, he also faced the anger of his former teacher, his friends could not believe it, and the resentment of his teammates who fought side by side... He had also thought that if he was not an undercover agent, would he be able to fight side by side with Lin Qiye and the others? Would he be able to proudly say that he was the second best in the recruit training camp? Would he be able to become a quasi-member of the 006 team? Would he be able to work openly and honestly for Daxia, the people, and the Night Watch... Unfortunately, there is no such thing as an undercover agent is an undercover agent. His identity cannot be revealed to his mouth and can only be hidden in his heart. Once his identity is exposed, what will greet him will be torture worse than death from the whispers, causing the death of an important chess piece planted by the Night Watch in the Church of the Ancient God... His identity as a Night Watchman is of course much better than that of a believer. If he returns to the Night Watch, then what will greet him is a bright and brilliant future, time to fight side by side with his friends, and a future of being respected (but in fact, ordinary people do not know the existence of the Night Watch at all). But for Daxia, for the people He couldn't be exposed for the sake of the Night Watch. "If the dark night comes to an end, I will stand in front of tens of thousands of people, with my sword drawn across the abyss, and the sky stained with blood."

It's really beautiful! The author's writing is super good! The psychological description is vivid, the emotional portrayal is delicate, the scenery description is poetic, and the plot is coherent and not sloppy. The pace was a bit fast, and I was still laughing just before the knife came. The author Kavin is also very good at setting up suspense. In particular! The author is very active and often interacts with readers! The double-agent setting really touched my heart! The author is very imaginative, the characters have no OOC and no CP, it is simply the love letter of my dream! Can the author secretly give some spoilers? When will Xiaoyi become a god?

It's beautiful and beautiful. It's completely written in my heart. I will support the author greatly. (*σ´∀`)σ 🎉٩(๑•̀ ω •́ ๑)۶LOCK◟(..•ω‹..) /

From my personal point of view, I was a little surprised by the setting of this book (time travel, familiarity with the plot, etc.) But... When I read this book, I was in a period of book shortage. In desperation, I still read it. The more I read, the more I liked it, and the more I read, the more distressed I became! At the age of 16, a time when youth is full of youth, he unexpectedly came to this familiar and unfamiliar world, and with his youth and ignorance, he wanted to change the abuse points in the plot of "Slayer of Gods". Indeed no one can change it. This book not only has interesting points, but also a part that attracted me, that is, the "undercover" part. Luo Mu, Luo Mu, whose Luo Mu is it?

It's very interesting. I've been following the update since the last book was blocked. I must continue writing and don't stop updating! Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ

The fanfic written by the teacher is really beautiful! ! !

It's super good to watch, okay [Adoration] The main thing is that the protagonist's family was destroyed by the believers, so he joined the believers and decided to take revenge. It is an undercover article [Blow a kiss] Not to mention the parts that should be sad, it is also really sad [Cry] The author's writing is very good, I highly recommend it [Blow a kiss]

Super, super, super, super good. This is the first undercover fanfic I've read. It's very well written, but it's just too little. Please keep updating it!!!!!!! Don't stop updating!

It's so beautiful, thank you so much to the author.

Good, enterprising, foreshadowing, smart

Well, I liked this one very much from the previous one——! ! ! The writing style of the boss is very good. It's the kind that makes teachers' eyes look like stars. I can't think of any other adjectives to describe it... Gentle, gentle and very beautiful (I don't know what I'm talking about). If Bookstore hadn't pushed it to me again, I really thought I would never see it again in this life (sad). When it was taken off the shelves, I was stunned for a long time before deleting it. I was so sorry at the time. I didn't expect to find it again——! I have a small suggestion. You can divide the long paragraph into one minute. Otherwise, friends who write in large fonts will look uncomfortable. Although I use small fonts, it won't have any impact (whisper) I really like Xiao Yi Nie. He is a good boy and makes my head spin () Don't let it be unfinished... The two books I liked before ended up being unfinished. I felt uncomfortable for a long time. I hope I can accompany Huang Wan and Xiaoyi all the way. Don't give up halfway... Also, cheer up your teeth at dusk——! ! I hope to get good results again in the college entrance examination. Although it is still far away (whisper) I am also about to take the high school entrance examination. The thought of studying late at night makes me sad (whisper) Well, come on——! ! Wow, it's so long and seems like a short essay ()

It's nice to read, the writing is very good, the characters are fleshed out, and the plot is vivid, but it's a bit sadistic, but the protagonist also has to grow up in hardships, so I can accept it. Personally I think it's very nice, not enough to watch, big, hungry, rice

The article written by the author is very creative. I like it very much. It is a very novel idea. The protagonists of other people are all golden fingers and super powerful gods. The article written by the author is very realistic, beautiful and rich in content. I hope the author can write more good-looking novels. I love you and kiss the author.

The author's emoticons are very cute and beautiful. [Blowing kiss]

Wow, the writing is so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡[Adoration][Adoration]

This is the first god-killing book I've read. Among so many books, this book by Dusk🌆 can be ranked in the top three. The protagonist is a double agent. The setting is very novel, and the writing is also good. I really like it. I just hope the author can read more and love to read (●♡∀♡)

Yeah, awesome, interesting storyline✪ω✪

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The author greatly appreciates the update. This book is really, really good to read. He Yi's Double Agent is so exciting! Come on, author!

Nice! It feels like the progress this time is faster than the last one. The writing style is beautiful and the undercover plot is refreshingＯ(≧∇≦)O Really! I really want to fall in love with the author's writing style (°∀°)b!

It's just that the wording is a bit too fancy and feels a bit redundant. But overall the writing is still good.

The author's writing is very good, and the swordsmanship is not very sharp, but it reminds me of the regret of the original work accidentally, and I was stabbed by the way. The OC is great, and it is not OOC. It is the best among the Zhanshen fics I have ever read. The plot in the early stages of this article will jump very quickly, eliminating a lot of the original plot and focusing on the important ones. For example, there is basically no plot in the Gods' Mental Hospital. The author prefers to use environmental descriptions and metaphors, and there are many descriptive and rhetorical techniques that can be learned and used in writing. That's all. Come on, the author, I will continue to follow up and update more, and don't forget about your studies (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

The author's writing is very nice \(//∇//)\. For people like me who love new books but hate old ones, and after reading the content for a while, if it is boring, I will abandon it and leave it to gather dust in the corner of the bookshelf. I hope the author can maintain the interest of this kind of writing (in addition, the author's writing style is very good, and the written paragraphs can be used as fragments of the article to round up the number of words (๑＞ڡ＜)☆)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Although the protagonist is a private character, he is handsome! ! ! ! Alas, I have already read Chapter 200 without realizing it. Many characters were added in the later stages of this book, which looks quite novel and creative.

It's beautiful, super beautiful, I won't lie. Please continue to work hard and update [Sending Hearts]