Genshin Impact************

As a love novel, the daily interactions are sweet and the characters are rich. But as a fanfic, I suggest the author pay attention to the details. As the "Water Goddess" chosen by Fukalos, Funina will not leave Fontaine at will just because she wants to eat from the male protagonist and likes him. The creation of fan fiction is based on games, rather than other fan fiction or secondary creations. Even if the characteristics of the characters can be made more distinctive, it will break away from the basic understanding of the game characters, which is a bit of a drama [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This ending of Fontaine should be regarded as the highest ending of a Genshin Impact novel I have ever read!

It feels like the author is missing a part between chapters 30 to 50. They are together. Yes, they live in the same house, yes, but what about the story before they got together? What happened when they moved into the house? I always feel like something is missing.

Overall it's pretty good, except that the first volume was written in a bit of a rush, but it's not a big problem.

Give yourself a five-star review [smile] [send heart]

Not bad, well written

(ꐦಥVanಥ)Assi! Feeling good and bad

It's interesting and interesting. Come on, author. I've watched a lot of Genshin Impact single-female protagonists, and many of them have been discontinued. You have to stick with it.

I want sugar, I want sugar, I want sugar

So pretty, so pretty

Nothing to say, well written Doesn't this guy have a fan base?

Sweet article, delicate writing style

A very sweet book

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Although the content is small, it is beautiful

Love to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Although there are some flaws, it is still rare

No reason, a truly good book does not need a reason

Morax is the patron of the protagonist. Tell the story of going to Fontaine to cook for Fufu

So far, pretty good, but could use a little sweetness

Update soon! It's so beautiful. It's so sweet. I like it so much [Adoration]

The writing is not bad, but there are still some flaws in the writing. Overall, it is mainly about daily life. The author should continue to work hard. I look forward to the next book being longer.