Fate: a Miracle for You

Just a reminder, it's not the Miracle in Jojo for You, this is simply the title of the book [face covering]

This book is undoubtedly excellent, but I still want to share my personal opinion. ① First of all, there is a very obvious problem. The content description of each chapter of this book is too lengthy. There are too many descriptions of landscapes and details, and even clothing. This will undoubtedly lose some viewers. The long descriptions make people wonder what is being said, and it is difficult to understand what they read after reading a chapter. [Chigua] It is undeniable that some people will like this kind of exquisite description technique, but for the software Tomato, most readers prefer mindless white articles that do not need to be thought about, because that way the main line is fast and the rhythm is strong, and most people do not have the patience to do it. I understand the description of the environment, which is one of the reasons why I think the score of this book is not very high (large text descriptions, not divided into paragraphs, too slow advancement of the main line, etc. Are all factors that affect the score) ② Secondly, regarding the control of rhythm, I still have to mention the speed of the entire book. It's too slow. After reading many chapters, the main plot is very slow. It is undeniable that the author's description of daily aspects is very good. However, if you want a book to have good results, it depends on the overall trend of readers. Today's readers do not take too long to understand the daily content. They care more about the promotion of the main plot and the fighting content. To sum up, these are the main problems that I personally think exist in this book. I still hope that this book can have better results and that the author's hard work can be more recognized. This is one of the few good fate fans I have found. I sincerely hope that the author can perform better (´ ▽ `) Thank you

A very good Fate fanfic, even excellent. The descriptions are good in all aspects, but the protagonist's numerical value is lowered. There should be other opportunities later. The whole novel gave me a beauty that does not belong to tomatoes. Tomatoes are not worthy of it. Keep up the good work.

Give it 5 stars. First of all, there is nothing wrong with the writing, the characterization and the plot. It may even be excellent. However, reading this book made me very "tired" and tired, because there are really no subsections, and it was uncomfortable to read. Secondly, as a fanfic, it describes the known plots in too many words. This may make the characters more three-dimensional, but it is indeed very cumbersome and boring for those who already know the plot, because they already know it. Finally, and the most important thing One point is that the protagonist is almost invisible in this book. I don't know the background or what he is doing. There are too few descriptions, and the identity is only known later. It makes people feel that there is no smooth reading experience at all. The protagonist always appears intermittently, letting other characters take the spotlight. In short, it is a good work, but I hope it can be changed.

Judging from the end of the first volume, this is a cool article that does not follow the same path as now, or a chronicle article, but a process of meaning that takes on the role, and what kind of person will the protagonist become in the infinite growth? Will we grow in faith as we travel? And whether we will witness the deeds of heroes. As far as the current Internet literary circle is concerned, there are very few good works that can educate people with meaning in their hearts, and even fewer articles that describe the characteristics of the characters. This book has a good transition. Even after reading the first volume, there is very little description of the protagonist, but I am involved in it. Having said so much, I feel like I am talking a lot of nonsense, but recently I have really discovered that the animation novels in recent years are not as good-looking as before. They are all the same, either fast-paced and enjoyable, or there are no amazing works. The legends of the older generation take a break and do not bloom like before. Among the new generation of authors, I think the key to writing a book should be the connotation of the book and the meaning it will bring to people. I recently watched an old anime called High Intelligence Equation. I was very emotional. In today's situation where you have to double the speed to watch Douyin, I actually watched it completely. I left a sentence in the last episode. "Today I have no limits. Having said so many words, in the final analysis, there is still one sentence. The author's book is very well written, allowing me to see the amazing shadow of the past. Also, we can never go back to the past time. This life must continue, and wonderful things will continue to come. The final summary of my nonsense is: Punong's evaluation: Excellent I'm here to comment again. After reading the third volume in December, I began to sigh. This is a very good work. We are all human beings. We can't do things we can't do, but we can be wonderful enough. The journey and scenery on the road, as well as the memories we have experienced, are the most important pieces of the puzzle for us. The story must have its connotation, rather than the cool articles that are aired every second like the mainstream nowadays. This book is still very well written, and I have nothing more to say. Only silent support and thanks to the author allow us to see a different world and style. I hope the author can keep at it. Punong's evaluation: Excellent

I can't get enough of it. It's a rare book with exquisite writing style. But the biggest shortcoming is that there are too few chapters and I can't get enough of it! I feel like there are ants crawling on me when I can't see the subsequent plot development.

Very well written. In the plot of the next volume, will Xiao Du be summoned to join the war in fsn? Did you study with Tai Gongwang during this period or something? In the first volume, Xiao Du has a Qiu class foreshadowing. I wonder if it will be unfolded in the next volume. In the next volume, we can start to strengthen the male protagonist. Not to mention other excellent Noble Phantasm-level weapons for frontal combat. What will be the ending of Director Ken? It is written in the article that the two monarchs withstood the pressure to protect Sakura. Does that mean that Director Ken is not dead? If Director Ken had not died, the impact would have been too great.

It looks okay, but it's not a miracle for you

Come on author, this is a very good work of the Xingyue type that I have seen

The writing is very good, but it is not suitable for tomatoes. Nowadays, reading books is impetuous. In this fast-paced era, I can only read a book for two or three minutes occasionally to read interesting articles. There are not many such delicate descriptions (this is also one of the problems. After reading the last part, I forgot about the previous ones, and I had no intention to read the previous ones. As a result, all the foreshadowing and storyline were lost, and the more I read, the more confused I became. 😕)

Can Director Ken survive?

It's an extremely good-looking fate fanfic. The writing is very good and has its own ideas. I feel like it's not a book that can be found on 🍅

I just read the comment section after reading the first volume. To be honest, after reading the first volume, I feel that my stomachache for the original work has been relieved a lot, because the author further rationalized the original behavior of the characters in the original work and gave them different arcs. The comment section is full of perfect scores. I don't know why the score is only 6 points.

It's really an authentic Fate fanfic, the best one I've seen so far 🍅

It can be said that this kind of writing style is unlikely to appear in foreign persimmons. It is quite beautiful.

Tomato's Shape Moon fan fiction can be an excellent work and is worth reading.

The writing is very good. The writing is excellent among Chinese fan fictions, and the content setting is not OOC at all. The protagonist setting is unique in the Fate series. It does not start with a popular hero or an original character. You can see the unique growth of the protagonist in the world view and the interesting interactions with other characters.

It smells like the original work, but the quality of the work is not like that in Tomato

In a word, it is not like Tomato's book. Although the results are not very good for the time being, I hope the author can persevere. It is too difficult to find a book on Tomato that is not fast-paced and refreshing.

A very excellent fan work, it's straight up to the level of a rumored band.

As a rare masterpiece for a sexy chef, although there are relatively few depictions of the male protagonist in FZ, in fact, in the continuation mode in FZ, the character expressions are originally separate. The writing style is delicate and the original trajectory of each character is changed. I think it is very beautiful. I don't know why the rating is low. It's really rare to find this kind of delicate writing in the fast-food novel Tomato. I hope I can finish it [Punch Out]

Okay, is there a female protagonist?

Recommended, very nice

Good, good, excellent work, delicious

Nice type moon fanfic

Good-looking, good-looking, really good

The author needs to work harder [laughs crookedly]

More updates, author, they can do anything [cry][cry][cry]

No, I didn't find such a beautiful book before

The plot is very attractive, I urge everyone to support it