Thanks for the Invitation******

It's good, but some don't show the pig's feet cheating and system follow-up. Even if it is not the same earth as anti-inflammatory and the earth has its own blessings, it is better than uninstalling the system itself or traveling through Douluo first and then fighting to break it. There is also the problem of the pig's trotter talent. I feel like the Crimson King. I didn't pay attention to the improvement at that time, but this hang-up was too abnormal. The anti-inflammatory effect was a bit overshadowed. It was cool, but it started to become poisonous later on.

The combat power and plot arrangement are good, but the emotional drama is very old. It gives me the feeling of a master who is close to the school belle. I hope I won't be banned. Tomato seems not to allow Douluo and Dou Po fandoms to be written. The author should be careful.

To be honest, this book is very bland, and the author doesn't seem to know how to write about combat. But even with this blandness, I felt surprisingly good, a very strange feeling, why is this? Can't understand I hope the author will persevere, work hard, and improve the description of combat [Thoughts] After reading it later, I feel like I don't know how to write about combat? Just one stroke, Spring and Autumn style of writing? [Eat melon]

The writing is quite interesting, but can you add some more combat descriptions? Don't you know how to write? You can take your time.