Juezuzero: You'll Be Lucky If You Bump into Me

After reading 17 chapters, the current evaluation is that it is a good product. There is no brainless favorability, no dirty thoughts, normal interactions, and love is gradual. I finally met an author who treats readers as human beings [crying] [crying] [crying] It is not easy. It is really difficult to meet a normal author🍅

The novel encounters a heaven-defying author. After a day or so, he becomes stronger than a monster. He tries his best and cannot defeat it [crying]

It's still fun, a perfect blend of great luck and absolute zero. At the same time, it is also in line with the image of the Universiade, and it is also fun to play all kinds of jokes. "I thought there was a speed bump" "Let's Talk to My Insurance" "We are all living hard" "I tried so hard, why aren't you dead yet?" What follows are suggestions I hope it doesn't have a heroine. It's okay to have a heroine, but don't describe the emotional line too much. There are many authors who start the harem just by writing. The writing is not good enough and it makes me sick just reading it. Moreover, the character of the protagonist does not feel suitable for having a female protagonist. I feel that the protagonist drives great luck for his career and Denny, and it is very interesting to make it hollow. If there is another female protagonist who flirts with me, I will feel very awkward. So even if there is a female protagonist, the focus should still be on career. There is also a suggestion that the author does not need to follow the main line, such as where he met such and such people, what agreement was reached, and then add the main line in another way, just like there is no me here, but there are my legends everywhere. Summary: This is the best piece of fan fiction I've read in recent years that made my lungs hurt from laughing. I look forward to a big update from the author.

This is a perfect book. In the early stages, it is more focused on the plot. If you don't have much patience, you probably won't be able to read it because the early stage is really plot-focused. As you go on, you can feel the obvious changes in the author's writing skills, which are getting better and better. It may be a bit annoying for most people. , It's just that the love line was a bit too abrupt, so a paragraph was inserted inexplicably, but I can feel that the author is gradually improving it, and the typos are also very good, almost invisible. Occasionally, one or two are changed in time, and the original plot gradually becomes more and more (after all, Block Zero does not actually have much content until now) ) If you don't write something original later, it will still be quite difficult. , (Let me talk about the point that everyone is paying attention to, the single heroine cat friend (I hope you won't add it. I am an absolute pure fan, and I can only say that it is still readable for those with more heroines and less)) (This article is an invincible article, and the author is really super. The word count and quality are very good. Okay, I hope I can stick with it and don't stop updating. Nowadays, except for the old books, they are basically discontinued. They can be said to be one of the best ones written by newcomers.) (I think Jarvis and Fery can be teamed up because their personalities are really complementary [laughter])

It looks pretty good. I personally feel that this book is quite suitable. It is the kind of novel that comes from the computer. It has interesting points, funny and exciting points. Alas, the thing is that the props given by the system are too many, but it is also a systematic novel. Let's see how the author writes it! ! I hope this book will continue to be written!

I can only say that the only flaw is the emotional scene where Nekomata suddenly joins. Apart from this, the rest of the plot is perfect. I feel like the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas, so he doesn't have to write them at all. The cat looks quite awkward anyway.

This is indeed a good book in terms of plot and character description, but I couldn't like the protagonist and the cat at all, but fortunately I chose to like Farry and Jarvis [laughing evilly]. Oh, by the way, remember @me when they were together [laughing evilly]

God of War in the Seventh Update, come on, it's very well written. I mean, can you give the protagonist some elemental abilities? I feel like the protagonist's skills are a bit simple [laughter]

It's good to read, I loved reading it, and it feels like the book I've read before: Justice

It's pretty good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] The relationship with Nekomata is a bit inexplicable

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It's really, really good to read. Both the setting and the character of the protagonist are perfect, and they are in line with my personal wishes. The most important thing is that there is no inexplicable collapse of combat power and no deliberate suppression, so I really like this book. (I have a small suggestion. I feel that Nekomata and the protagonist were a little stiff at the beginning when they first met and then slowly communicated with each other. Really only a little)

It's so good to read. I was initially put off twice by the introduction and title of the book, but after much thought I decided to come in and take a look.

Advantages: The character creation is very good, I can give it an 8 points. ! Disadvantages: Occasionally it can be a bit embarrassing when watching, and the emotional lines are not handled very well. Overall, the flaws do not hide the virtues Can such a few entries be enough to slap Bo Shi Zun?

This work is like a sugar-coated Xingnao pill, exploring the most serious life propositions in the most unorthodox way. It marks the true localized expression of Chinese science fiction literature in the cyberpunk subgenre. Its value lies not only in literary innovation, but also in providing Generation Z with a spiritual weapon to face apocalyptic anxiety - when you learn to appreciate nuclear explosions as fireworks, the world can no longer destroy you. Recommended to all contemporary warriors who secretly practice "fake smile defense" in the real world, this may be the most painful book on happiness you have read this year.

Very well written. The character description is restored.

After watching the ending, I'm ready to read 2 more. The plot was quite interesting, but the cat suddenly moved into the protagonist's house (although the plot was filled in later, I was quite confused at the time). I always thought Nekomata was the heroine, but in the end, it didn't work out and the heroine was Twiggy. He even wrote a side story to link up with the Starry Sky Railway and capture the Star God of Destruction for research. It is estimated that the plot of Ompharos was severely damaged.

Very good, daily life, plot are all very good

I've read Chapter 40, and overall it's fine. There's nothing particularly bad about it. My actual rating is 4.3. I have to deduct points for the Nekomata heroine, but everything else is fine, so I gave it five stars in the end. I don't plan to read it later. If you don't mind the heroine, it's still worth watching.

It's pretty cool, but my main purpose is the protagonist. I don't really want to see the content, daily routine and reasons of his love affair. I feel like this would drastically reduce my enjoyment. After all, I'm here to see the big truck Optimus Prime.

It's a very good book. The protagonist has a physical saint on his left hand and a Cybertronian Autobot on his right hand. We are all living hard. Is that Sunny Pillar just now a speed bump? As expected of Alidu, the speed bump is soft~

The writing is very good, much better than the one next door on Survival on Six Point Street. There were some unnecessary emotional descriptions in that book that made me a little embarrassed and a little jealous. In comparison, the writing of this book is already supermodel.

It's okay. I'm watching it as a 7 or 8-rated fan. It's not particularly good-looking or particularly ugly. It's okay to pass the time. Even though it feels weird to have Nekomata living there all the time, it feels more normal to live with the Cunning Rabbit House. After all, this is considered family, and it has nothing to do with the protagonist.

It's quite nice, but the emotional line is a bit confusing (personal opinion) and it doesn't have any impact. Hit! Cool!

It's a good book, with a novel setting, a pretty good plot idea, and the system's presence is just right. However, because my own ideas (do I have to use the word xp?) Conflicted with the author's, I gave up halfway through. Of course, this is my personal reason. If you like cats and "Can Life Let Me Go This Time", you can feel free to enter the trap boldly. This book is still good.

In the past, I didn't have to worry about reading it and I felt happy. But now that I have to rush for more updates, I feel that I have finished reading the author's updated stuff all at once. I'm a little annoyed, but overall it's a good work. I hope the author can do more [laughs]

Nice. But it was a bit uncomfortable. At first I thought the protagonist was becoming a saint in the flesh, but then a bunch of Transformers appeared.

It was indeed very comfortable for me to read in the beginning. The overall strength of the protagonist has steadily increased, and some subplots are quite interesting. Most of this book is good, especially the parent-teacher meeting where the demons dance wildly. However, there are still some shortcomings, such as the emotional line is not handled very well, but although there are some small flaws, they are not concealed, although the combat power in the later period is indeed a bit inflated. And it feels like it's ending hastily, but it's still a very good book, quite good.

Haojian[laugh][like] When will the Autobots transform?

A very good fan fiction. But Nekomata didn't elbow Twiggy [laughing evilly]