I Picked up a Girl in Distress at the Beginning, I'm Really Not a Pervert

So damn pretty! ! ! This is definitely something that our super awesome Liang Bu Shi Shi has put a lot of thought into writing. The writing style is superb, and he often inserts some amazing descriptions of the environment between paragraphs. The artistic conception comes up immediately and is completely integrated into the article. It is simply too powerful. The growth of the characters is also described very delicately, making it feel like they have slowly grown from high school students to adults. Compared to the second half of the college chapter, I still prefer what happened in high school in the first half. The four main characters are all very three-dimensional, and what happens is very interesting. Especially the images of the eldest brother and Laoban, the author laid a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and connected many things when recycling, which is really eye-catching. (I still prefer the middle part where Lao Ban's story is inserted) The male and female protagonists are pure and sweet, and Su He is so cute. I really like it. Another pair of chuunibyou are also well written. Except that the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops a bit abruptly at the beginning, the rest of the logic is completely connected. Coupled with the author's fresh writing style, after reading it, I feel that the sky just after the exam is brighter [Thinking] [Thinking] However, the author has greatly used the method of time and space travel to skip many time periods. Otherwise, I think the high school chapter could have dozens more chapters, just about the daily life during the winter vacation and the 100-day pledge to the college entrance examination. So I have seen some, but now there are still too few, not enough [crying] I don't think college is as good as high school. Although he can drive, the plot seems to focus mainly on the male and female protagonists, and the other characters have very few roles. I still want to see the author build a larger system. Moreover, after the male and female protagonists have careers, they feel that time goes very fast. Basically, it was brushed off in a few months, and many of the foreshadowings laid before were not recovered in time. I also want to watch my roommates get singled out one by one [face covering] and then many of my favorite characters don't have time to appear. The most important thing is that the ending is too abrupt. Maybe it's because I don't have much literary literacy. On that peaceful afternoon, I read the finished novel and cried all night in the bathroom [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Yes, the long review of Chapter 252 was also written by me in a fit of madness. I really saw this book when I was about to take the exam. I almost went crazy studying at school, and I looked forward to reading it for more than half an hour when I came back in the evening. Then I just saw the previous one that morning, thinking about waiting for the update on time in the afternoon, but it ended [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I always felt that there were still many stories that had not been told, many things that had not been done, and it ended here. It's okay, at least we will support you! Get up and read this book [laugh][laugh][laugh] Let me copy the part where I went crazy [smile][cry][smile][cry][smile] so that everyone can feel my despair at that time: Being displaced without losing anything, what on earth are you doing and why? Why does it end well? Why? I just saw Chapter 250 this morning, thinking about waiting for the update on time at 4pm for the first time, but you ended up [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I really want to cry. I really like this book. I am going to have a blast studying it in school during my final exam this week. I just look forward to reading your book for a couple of hours every night. Seeing their career flourishing, I originally thought that there would be a more exciting story in the future. I could write it for a long time and finish it on a good day (actually I didn't want it to finish at all). I came back every night and looked forward to two chapters, but it ended today. No! ! ! ! ! ! ! No, I'm going to the toilet to cry some more.

Worth watching, don't look at the low ratings Although the beginning is a bit cliche, the character of the male protagonist who is not like the template male protagonist is quite novel. The emotional description is also very delicate. The small details of daily life are quite warm. The emotional line between the homeroom teacher and Kana Sakurako is also well laid out. However, the detailed plot is a bit abrupt when inserted into the main plot. After reading the main plot, it will be much better to look at the emotional line of the homeroom teacher. It may be better to mark the extras. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also quite funny. The female protagonist is timid and slow to react when doing things. Especially when the female protagonist says "I believe you, I believe whatever you say", this is too destructive to anyone. Straight-ball heroine, focusing on sincerity [laughing and crying] I hope the author will be faster, I want to read Jiang Qianzhou's story

After the male protagonist was reborn, his IQ was online. There were no deliberately disgusting plots in the female videos, but the description of the emotional line was a bit bland. It was said that the relationship between the male and female protagonists was gradual, but it was already confirmed that they liked each other in the 50th chapter, and it felt like the progress was slightly faster.

After reading it, it can be seen that the author wrote it very carefully. The story between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, deeply rooted in people's hearts, and full of redemption. Come on, I hope the author can create better pure love sweet stories in the future! A small suggestion: some short stories of characters can be written at the end of the full text, otherwise it will easily affect the perception. Also, the ending feels too weird. It feels a bit weird to go directly to the proposal after the game is successful. I can write some more daily life in it, and then write the proposal. But the author still writes very well, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next work [Love] [Love] [Love] (already listed in my "Pure Love God of War" series)

It's really good to read. This novel is the first one I've ever read. I've read many other novels, but most of them stopped reading halfway through. The rest were skipped many chapters to finish. This book is very good in terms of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. , Especially in terms of the heroine's dependence and trust on the hero, the other supporting characters are also good. When the hero and heroine encounter difficulties, friends around them come to help, which really makes me feel very touched. Overall, this book is the first in my heart. I hope the author can continue to work hard and succeed in his studies.

Overall, the plot of this book is very good, and the author writes it well, but I personally feel that the author's writing power is a bit insufficient after about 200 chapters. The early plot is mainly written around their relationship, but by the end of the story, the relationship is basically finished, and there is no preparation for the subsequent plot of the studio. My suggestion to the author is to make the emotional line longer and wait until the end to complete it with the main plot, or to find and introduce a new point that readers of this book can follow. Personally, I feel that the former one is easier, and the latter one is a bit more difficult to find and write, but I think if it is written according to the second method and written well, it will really be a masterpiece), but overall I really like this book [laugh][laugh]

The plot is a bit warm and bland, so it felt boring to me. But the reason why I was bored was not because the plot was bland, but because the supporting characters couldn't attract me. If it's a warm and bland daily interaction story, I only like the scenes where the male and female protagonists get along, such as expressing their affection for each other and flirting with each other. This book is actually quite good. There are no disgusting male and female characters (there is a bit, but the scenes disappear after a few paragraphs), and there are no male characters or female characters that pester the heroine. This is really praised. The relationship between the male and female characters is impeccable, the love is endless, and the soft beauty is by the side. It is particularly praised.

It's a book worth reading. The author's writing is really good, but it feels like it ends in a hurry. It may be because I have a withdrawal reaction every time I finish reading the book. I always feel that the story of Su Chen and Su Chen should not end, but at least I saw Su Chen's wedding. Although the written story of Su Chen has ended, I wish all readers and authors here, and hope that you will continue to write the rest of the story in the book of your own life!

It's worth watching, the plot is relatively coherent, the writing is average, but it may not be very original in terms of creativity. The characters of the male and female protagonists are well portrayed. The early plot of the two of them liking each other in high school without revealing it was very attractive to me. The male protagonist started his own business when he was in college. I personally don't like this kind of penetration and it's hard to comment on it. It is worth watching just from the daily love life of the male and female protagonists. Let me briefly talk about the subsequent plot. There are fewer love plots in the next dozens of chapters. Personally, I think this is one of the few shortcomings of the book. The author's writing style of business writing is still a bit rusty, and some of it lacks stamina. But I still say that: I think the previous love plot is comparable to a 9.3-Point game. It is a pity to end with the plot of entrepreneurship.

Nice! Come on! Dear author, can you add a character who likes to cultivate immortality in the college chapter? Ahem! The name can be Li Chuyi, um... The setting is probably that the King of Han Dynasty from the Tang Dynasty Fairy Kingdom in the Mortal Star Domain in the Great World of Qingfeng was accidentally involved in the turbulence of time and space while traveling in the starry sky, and came to a place called Earth.

This book is generally very good, considered to be above average. The author's explanation speed at the beginning is a bit fast. If it can be reasonably improved and revised later, it may be more comfortable to read at the beginning (the first time I read this book at the beginning, I felt that the explanation speed was a bit fast, and I couldn't remember what the plot was for a while). In the later stage, there may be a few suitable opportunities for popularity, and the traffic of this book will increase.

It's a good read. I really recommend it. The author just needs to rest for an hour or two. He has to work hard. It's a bit addictive, so cool. What did you add to the book...

Emmm, it's well written, but it feels a bit too realistic. It would be nice to give the protagonist a bit of fantasy.

A good book, the plot is interesting, and the characters are well-developed. Although the pace speeds up significantly at the end, it cannot cover up the excellence in the early stages. Overall, a score of 8.9 Is indeed an understatement. It can at least have the strength of a score of 9.2.

Very beautiful, very sweet, non-toxic and knife-free, good is good [full] Very good. The main storyline is emotionally delicate and the rhythm is smooth. If you put all the story of the class teacher in the extra story, then the viewing experience will be very good. The male and female protagonists go in both directions, and the interaction is also very interesting [full] In addition, the author updates quickly [heartfelt]

This book is very good. It satisfies the fantasies of some people who may not be too sure in reality. They imagine that they can go back to their childhood and do the things they like according to the memories in their minds. For example, the protagonist, the male protagonist, uses the knowledge he has learned in his previous life to excel academically in this life. I believe this is what many people long for. Just do it, do what you like, and don't care about the consequences to become happy.

@ Wandering without losing a place. Update it quickly. It's too little. It's not enough to read. Can you give me 10,000 words per page? [Cool]

Tai Chi Bar is so good!!! It's just not enough to watch [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger]

After reading so many novels, I rarely want to give a high score. The main reason is that seeing two couples and friends supporting each other is like going back to middle school. I first saw the love, friendship, and sunny scenery in romance novels. The first time I encountered female romance in middle school seemed to open the door to a new world. However, since I graduated and started working, I have always been depressed and can't watch this. Today, I read it again, and I feel as young as a new student. . . Although my first reaction when I saw this was to see if the author was a big female porn star [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly], I still want to say that the author is really awesome, come on, boss!

The author's writing is very good, whether it is the main plot, the supporting characters or the extra parts. I am just curious about what the author thinks about Jiang Qianzhou. Anyway, I guess that when he took a year off from school, the only girlfriend he recognized had a problem.

Not bad, the plot is quite sweet and the inner description is also very good

The content of this book is very complete. The early and middle stages are basically about the development of the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the love plot. When I had more than 240 pictures, I originally wanted to save a few to read again, but a few days later I went on a trip again and forgot about it when I came back. It was already today that I finished reading it. To be honest, after Chapter 240, I no longer have the same sweet feeling as before, and it seems to be muddled. However, the last few pictures also make the whole article more complete, but they are still uncomfortable and form a strong contrast with the previous articles. In fact, I think the author should add some fragments to it to make it less deliberate. In addition, there are some endings for certain characters that the author promised, or nothing happened. However, the author also said the reasons for the finale, which is understandable and will not force it. I also gave it 5 stars. Finally, I hope that the author will produce better works and his writing level will reach a higher level [Like][Like][Like]

Give it a five-star rating. The author's writing style is quite good, but it may be quite different from the structure of most love stories nowadays. Therefore, the article has highlights but is not so eye-catching in the current market, but experience is accumulated. I look forward to more articles [Learned] [Sending Hearts]

It's quite worth watching. Although there are a few characters that have not been buried, it does not affect the overall sense. The heroine is just like the name. She is a growth-oriented character like He Miao. Although she is naive, she is not stupid. And I've read a lot of rebirth stories. Like the male protagonist, who doesn't have a golden finger, doesn't engage in commercial territory, and is a pure Buddhist, it's quite novel.

The whole text is basically non-toxic. Not only is the story between the male and female protagonists wonderful, but the story between the supporting characters is equally wonderful. This long-lost feeling of bond cannot be written by other authors. It also contains some youthful spirit. I will be in my senior year of high school tomorrow and I haven't finished my homework yet. This book made me waste a day, but I still want to say that it is a peerless book [heartfelt]

The interaction and experiences between the male and female protagonists are very interesting, and the plot is also relatively smooth and interesting. The content from high school to college is very good, and it is definitely worth watching in the early stages! But in the later period, the pace of the plot did accelerate, which was not very interesting, and some of the forced plots were not very good. Overall, it's still very good. Although the plot is not very novel, the content is still good.

The writing is delicate, the rhythm is smooth, and the emotions are rich. It is rare to see this pure love that has not been seen for a long time in many harem lone wolf fantasy novels. In the end, the satisfaction of the green first love on campus often makes people think back to their own white moonlight!

It is a book worth reading. It is generally about daily life, from high school to college, covering all aspects of study, entrepreneurship, etc. If you like to read love stories with a single heroine, don't miss it. It is very sweet. After reading this book, I immediately found out that my sugar level was over the limit.

The writing is very good, and the whole process of writing the article can pass the review.

I only watched the high school chapter. It was very good, sweet but not greasy. You can stay at the end of the high school chapter to watch the extra chapter about the class teacher.