A Maid’s Struggle

Nice! It's not the clichéd kind of story where the maid becomes the mistress at the end. It's about clarifying one's own position and living one's own life in a long and smooth way, which is the most popular among readers! The author should write quickly, I hope it won't collapse later😊

It looks good, and has the feel of Xiao Hong and Jia Yun in The Red Mansion. Some places are not rigorous, but the flaws cannot be concealed. The sisterly relationship between the heroine Xiaowen and her companion Xiaoyu is also extremely touching. The male and female protagonists are both people who are capable of doing great things and live seriously.

It's already very good and everyone wants something. The emotional descriptions are also very delicate. There are not so many frustrating things, and there are no golden fingers. I just rely on myself. The finale is quite heartwarming, and those watching it can't help but laugh.

The novel is still okay. There are a lot of chance encounters between the male and female protagonists. Compared with Xiao Hong in Dream of Red Mansions, the portrayal of this character feels a bit inferior. Although Xiao Hong in Dream of Red Mansions also likes Jia Yun, this kind of love includes a clear understanding of her own position and goals, and more importantly, she understands what she wants, but she will not fall in love with her all the time. What makes Xiaohong tenacious is that she is sober and thorough, does not consume too much emotion, is good at seizing opportunities, is smart and proactive. Therefore, the heroine in this novel is quite different from Xiao Hong. The more I watch this, the more I feel that the heroine is not as good as Xiaohong in Red Mansion. Although Xiaohong is considered to be in pursuit, she is not like this heroine. Chapter 31 is very poorly written, completely mistaking ancient times for modern times. It would be ridiculous to show that the male and female protagonists are deeply in love without even meeting each other a few times.

Compared with other ancient Chinese novels about house fighting, the plot is a little plain, but it is also ordinary and real, the characters are delicately drawn, and the good people in the article are also very nice.

It's very good. The characters are written delicately and each has its own characteristics. It's worth recommending.

Not bad. Slowly describe the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the things around them.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, and it has the shadow of Dream of Red Mansions

For purely ancient Chinese portrait essays, it would be better to use more words when describing the characters' expressions.

Not bad, there are shadows of The Maid in the Red Mansion and Jia Yun, but the plot is broader and the characters are more fleshed out.