After Forming a Team with the Number One Rebel in the World of Immortality,

Although the progress is not fast, the language is vivid and almost not machine-like. Especially the reverse thinking and probability problems in the fantasy section are very unconventional and can directly capture my interest. The most interesting thing is the plot of using the male protagonist's spiritual roots to publish articles in the name of his sect to make money. The author must be at least a graduate student, and he understands the tricks of our academic circles. I understand it deeply. I understand it deeply😆

It's good to watch, and has the same feeling as when I watched "Lingjian Mountain".

I sincerely recommend that everyone give it a try. I believe this type of novel is not just for me. The author's writing style is also online and the perspective is very novel. Many settings are quite innovative and have great potential. Unfortunately, too few people read it. Normally, the rating on Yangshi is 9 There is no problem in going up. The author can try to change the title and introduction to attract traffic. I added it to the bookshelf early and read the introduction but had no desire to read it. After I really read it, I felt that the writing was really good. I hope that the popularity will increase and the author will continue to write. I like this work very much.

It is a very interesting book. I was attracted to it initially because the characters of the male and female protagonists are very suitable for me. The setting of cultivating immortals is also very novel. The masters are basically academic experts. From the introduction and explanation of many academic studies, it is easy to see that the author has put a lot of effort into it. After 300 chapters, he started to like reasoning and criticizing feudal lords. (This world of immortality advocates equality for everyone), it can only be said to be quite satisfactory in terms of perception. For me, the daily interaction between the male and female protagonists and the study of some academic things may be more interesting. Now that the female protagonist's personal charm has been fully enhanced, I feel that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonist. I hope that the male protagonist will be strengthened in the future. Then the shortcoming of this book is that the author sometimes wants to write too much, but if he can't write it, some parts feel a bit boring (for example, if the male protagonist's promiscuity in the Otsuki Dynasty is streamlined, many chapters can be saved). I hope the author will continue to update [flying kisses][flying kisses], of course it will be more delicious if there are more

It's a bit like Lingjian Mountain, but the plot is very delicate. I look forward to seeing the timid apprentice confess his love to the master and pretend to be confused again [Adoration]

The style is very similar to Lingjian Mountain, so far I feel it's okay, the author will update it soon [laughing]

It is a very interesting daily article, so much so that it is too "everyday" and has many subplots. As far as what I have read so far, it is more than a thousand pages long. The main plot only talks about the protagonist having an abnormal physique, and then briefly explains the manifestations of the abnormal physique, and then it is gone. The rest is all about grinding copies and making money. . .

The writing is really awesome, I haven't seen such an awesome novel on Tomato for a long time.

I saw a small part of it, a bit like there was a Lingjian Mountain in the past

The man is not weak, the woman is not weak, it is very graceful, there is no disgusting cheating behavior, and there is no messy stuff. It feels very good and enjoyable to read.

There was a Lingjian Mountain once upon a time?

Well written and interesting

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Great book, I think it shouldn't be buried

It's not bad, it's a poisonous and dark flow, but some of the plots are a bit long-winded.

Not bad, but I feel the progress is a bit slow. I hope the male and female protagonists will get together soon [Sending my heart]

The update is a bit slow, but it's understandable. There are not many people watching, so I don't have the motivation to update. When will Su Qianling's drama be released?

It's very beautiful and interesting [top post]

By the way, who is the heroine?

Without looking at the back, let's give Xing some encouragement first.

Red and fiery, in a trance

Very good oh oh

After watching it for so long, I still haven't figured out what the hero's obsession is. I'm curious about what the hero's obsession is?

OK for novice authors

So far, I've seen that apprenticeship is pretty good

There is no big problem overall, it's just that the love line advances slowly

It feels a bit like Lingjian Mountain and has a strong smell.

It deserves extra points if it's not the same.

It can be easily funny, but there aren't enough written about it yet.

The quality is not popular. Please author please stop updating.