JOJO: Magic Skills

Submission substitute: The alternate name "Hotel California" comes from the song of the same name by the Eagles. It looks like a dancer of adult height, standing on the base of a music box. The avatar is a physical avatar and can be seen by ordinary people. Strength None Speed None Range A Sustainability A Precision E Growth D Stand ability: [Hotel California] turns the clockwork to use the ability. When the stand is activated, it is fixed in place and unable to move. At that time, all people who have seen the stand will be cognitively [disturbed], and the stand-in user can perform a certain degree of cognitive intervention on the disturbed individuals. For example, if you see a stand-in in a stairwell and the main body is standing on the top of the stairs, the person being attacked tries to get closer and needs to go up the stairs. He perceives that the other person is standing on top and he is walking upwards, but in the eyes of normal people who are not affected, he is walking in another direction. The degree of [disruption] depends on the complexity of the terrain. The more corners there are, the stronger the degree of interference. If it is in a large open space and flat ground, the person being attacked will only gradually feel like motion sickness, but will hardly be affected otherwise.

As a relatively novice young writer, the content has a level of motivation that makes people interested in guessing the upcoming plot, which is already quite good. I suggest that the stand-in messenger provided by book friends should preferably be a native of the world, or should not openly state his identity as a time traveler. At least in terms of writing techniques, he can be arranged into an original opponent related to the plot, otherwise many time travelers will affect his role as the protagonist. The uniqueness and cheapness of the book lead to a worldview that is too rigorous or too logically broken. Readers who have concerns about this may abandon the book. Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is okay. He has a distinct personality and uniqueness, which can make people put aside this point temporarily. Come on, buddy.

[Do you believe in the rescue position] [I admire the first person to rescue] [Maybe it will shock you] [Tu Tu] [Before I rescue the person] [You can't do anything] [Survival will ultimately require escaping from the manor] [Say it again for the last time] [I'm going to start rescuing people] [Yellow Seafood Banquet] [Factory Director's Family Bucket] [Fisher Girl Aquarium] [Bangbang Mine Array] [Crybaby Forest Farm] [Violin Concert] [Hot Wax Museum] [Sculpture Exhibition Hall] [Fool's Dangerous House] [Spider Silk Cave] [Apostle Cat Cafe] [Honor Resonance] [I Save People in the Name of God]

Jojo fandom is really well written. It's a bit different from Tomato, but maybe I like fast-paced novels or fun novels now. I'm not used to this kind of serious novel anymore. I still highly recommend it, but it just doesn't suit my taste.

It looked good at the beginning, but it didn't look that good after the appearance of the Ashes Organization, and the enemy was indeed a bit powerful. The appearance of the Ashes Organization eliminated the protagonist's intelligence advantage as a time traveler. Personally, I still like the protagonist to have some information, so that the protagonist will not be beaten all the time, and will not be unable to fight back due to lack of information. Usually the protagonist spends a chapter or two to deduce the enemy's ability, and then the enemy will be defeated. Although this kind of poor intelligence routine is often found in anime, the enemy's stand-in in anime basically shows off its abilities as soon as it appears, and then it's about how the protagonist deciphers the enemy's abilities. Also, the protagonist reveals the system to Senna. Even if he is sure that the other party is not malicious, he cannot just reveal the system. Enemies will protect their own intelligence, so won't the protagonist protect his own intelligence? Although the plot of the seventh part of JOJO is indeed good, most people should be familiar with the third to sixth parts. Maybe it would be better to return to the main world quickly and join Jotaro and others. This is the first JOJO fanfic I've read. Although I don't know about other fanfics, the author's writing is really good. I hope he can continue to work hard.

Although the title of the book is jo7, there is actually a lot of original content. Fortunately, the author can still control it, and it has not reached the point of being very broken. It's just that the new enemies seem a bit too strong. In terms of wits, it perfectly proves the saying "Learn mathematics, physics and chemistry well, and you will not be afraid of traveling all over the world". Most of the strategies are developed by the protagonist's own knowledge in his previous life, which is really admirable. As for the character creation, as far as I have read so many chapters, the description of the original characters is actually decreasing. Most of them still focus on the original characters, which may affect some people who have not watched it. Overall, this work requires a certain threshold. You need to understand jo7 yourself and endure the original plot to get a better viewing experience.

It's pretty cool. Although the multi-traveler setting may be a little uncomfortable at first, it's okay. The only thing I don't like is that it feels like Miracle and You are a bit too deified. The ability to strike across parallel time and space is a bit invincible. The original setting is not so outrageous. It has been The only known cross-world strike ability is fan and four-claw bullets. I don't know if I missed it. Anyway, the author should explain it. Otherwise, according to the original setting, if Miracle and You had such a murderous intention, Si Dan would have been killed by Chu Jian, and he would have been given a five-star rating in the end.

It's very funny, the plot is not too toxic, it's watchable, the characters are not OOC as expected, and the writing has a sense of spectacle—! I just like to watch some battles of wits, and I can intuitively feel that the protagonist is slowly improving! This is a trial! !

To be honest, I like Jojo very much, but there are very few Jojo fan fictions that I can read. This book gave me a big surprise. Just reading Chapter 10, the image of the protagonist can already be remembered by me. I think highly of this book, and I feel ashamed of my own book. The writing is smooth, and the appropriate metaphors also give me the feeling of reading the original work.

I only read a little bit and found it very interesting. I hope the author will make more updates in the future. The author makes the jokes and text in JoJo very natural, and the wonderful metaphors are just right [like it]. Moreover, the protagonist is not invincible from the beginning, and the villain designed by the author also has his own characteristics. This is my favorite book on Tomato, please support the author [sending my heart]

It's very interesting, not the type where the protagonist is given an invincible stand-in for no apparent reason and then talks about boring daily life. The original characters and stand-ins are also good. It can be said that it ranks well among the Jojo fanfics I have read. This is mainly because there are so few Jojo fanfics. It is even more difficult to find good ones and follow them.

The writing is pretty good, but the updates are too slow. I look forward to the plot and battles in the future.

I didn't read it later, but I feel good now that I've seen it. It's not an invincible start, but it has a growth process, and it's not entirely original. It has the author's own enemies. Anyway, it's good to read. This book is definitely good to read. Believe me, you don't need a reason to believe.

I have seen the highest quality JO fanfic on this platform, which not only shows the growth of the protagonist, but also highlights the determination of the supporting characters. The golden spirit can belong to the enemy who saves the country through curves, the "traveler" who sacrifices his life for righteousness, or even a tumbleweed. While adding new forces to fight against the protagonist group, it can also perfectly retain the famous scenes in the original work. The protagonist skillfully combines the stand-in ability with his own magic skills, which can be said to fully express JOJO's wit factor.

The author has written such a wonderful article, it is really hard to put down! However, I have a small question, I don't know whether to ask it properly-what does the protagonist look like? And, hey, can you give me a hint of the protagonist's cp? Looking forward to the author's reply! @ Medical Nine Essence [Sending Hearts]

The quality is very good, I hope it can be steadily improved. If it is as brain-burning as the Philadelphia shooting but the eyes are bright after the end, there is a high probability that it will be recommended by more people, come on, the author is greatly [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

How should I put it? It's a battle of wits type, the writing is very delicate, and the jokes in it are also used well^ ^, the characters are very consistent with the personality, and the protagonist also has a Chinese flavor (*^▽^*) Highly recommended

It's a very good book. Except for the weird look in the first five chapters, the rest of it is very exciting. Love comes from the old tomato pest. [Sinister smile]

It feels pretty good. At least in Tomato, it really gives me a good feeling. Whether it is the writing style or the setting, it neither completely relies on the original work, nor does it arbitrarily modify and disrespect the original work. It is indeed good, but there will not really be any time travelers other than the protagonist. I still hope that the protagonist will have some intelligence advantages of his own.

The writing is pretty good, and the interaction between the protagonist and Long Long is very interesting. But there are too many descriptions in some aspects The character of the hedgehog is too exaggerated. Almost most female characters have this description The battle is well described and has its own original plot. I take back what I said before This book is very nice Everyone in the team has been quite successful in their portrayal. The personas of the original characters are also very consistent. The interactions between everyone in the team are quite interesting. It can even be said to be cute [take a closer look]

The main reason is that the author is a student at school, so the updates are a bit slow. The new organization that appeared due to the interference of the protagonist is not much to comment on. It is quite satisfactory, but the foreshadowing is good and the updates are faster. It is also a very good book.

Very beautiful, very imaginative, not too funny, and very entertaining It can be said to be the most interesting JO novel I have ever read. I highly recommend it. It is very imaginative and the stand-in battle is a type of battle of wits. It is not a brainless novel. The various ingenuities make people wonder whether the author has personally experienced these events. It is very real and has a sense of immersion.

As long as your writing is good, it doesn't matter if you have a female protagonist or not. There are many good books that have been criticized. At least many good books have been criticized. I don't want to talk about fan fiction. There are too many original swords. Didn't the female protagonist still get criticized in the beginning? Isn't it great now? Writing a book makes you happy. You have to write your own book instead of writing someone else's book. The author cares about himself. As long as your writing is good, no one doesn't like to read it. Don't worry about it. Come on.

It's so good. Please write more witty battles for me. Author, please don't stop updating!

Very good, very good, the wonderful metaphor is very wonderful, even jojo is written out (the system is a fw)

It looks good, and the battle process is very original. It's not like other authors who only play tricks.

Pure blood! There is a wonderful metaphor of JOJO, JOJO's wonderful battle of wits, it is not about hard strength, it depends on IQ! ! ! In addition, there is really a lot of JOJO knowledge in it! It is considered to be the best among all JOJO fanfics!

How to say it? This JOJO novel is not bad at all. At least you won't get tired of reading it. Although it is a bit toxic, it's okay. Mainly because I am not very familiar with the seventh part, so I find it quite enjoyable to read.

Beautiful! It's rare to find someone who writes SBR well. I'm looking forward to the future stories [laughing]

A very intelligent plot that feels like Lee Sin's Bizarre Adventure