Su Xun, a good young man in the 21st century, traveled through the time when Straw Hat Luffy fell into the sea during the War on the Summit, and then rescued Ace and fought Akainu on the Summit. After that, he accepted the Empress, teased Nami, killed the Four Emperors, and killed Im, opening his own path to invincibility.
Reader comments
It's hard to break down. The subject matter is good, but the pace is too big. The reward items for each episode are too complicated, and it feels like they are strengthened but not strengthened. It is a phantom beast fruit, a deformation of divine power, and a no-lower limit spell. It doesn't take long for it to be empty. And even with so many abilities, Ace and Whitebeard are written to death, so what's the point of setting the time-travel node at the top? (I only saw Chapter 6, maybe there will be other arrangements later) The title of Chapter 7 is explosive, and the previous 6 chapters have given a lot of abilities.
That's it for now, there are so many flaws that I don't even know where to start [smile]
No wonder I haven't finished it after writing it several times before. What kind of swordsmanship is Black Sword Level Swordsmanship? Please tell me, the author. Secondly, in the dozens of draws, none of them are skills from this world. Fairy Tail, Bleach, and various anime skills that I haven't seen before. I'm watching One Piece fandom, not other worlds.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Well, interesting
Can you write Luffy to death? If someone else doesn't like Luffy,
Not bad, invincible flow
I just like this kind of pirate novel that captures all the beautiful girls in the movie.
It looks good, I'll keep it up first. If it's not poisonous, I'll like it.
Alas, if so many mistakes can't make up for it, then you have nothing to say.
Do what you say and leave
Very nice, but there are a lot of typos
Super nice [like]
Unexpectedly, I opened another book
Come on author, I believe in you
Good, good, good, good, good
Dear author, please update as soon as possible, at least three times a day
The protagonist is awesome, the harem is very united, I like it😍
It's hard to break down. The subject matter is good, but the pace is too big. The reward items for each episode are too complicated, and it feels like they are strengthened but not strengthened. It is a phantom beast fruit, a deformation of divine power, and a no-lower limit spell. It doesn't take long for it to be empty. And even with so many abilities, Ace and Whitebeard are written to death, so what's the point of setting the time-travel node at the top? (I only saw Chapter 6, maybe there will be other arrangements later) The title of Chapter 7 is explosive, and the previous 6 chapters have given a lot of abilities. That's it for now, there are so many flaws that I don't even know where to start [smile]
No wonder I haven't finished it after writing it several times before. What kind of swordsmanship is Black Sword Level Swordsmanship? Please tell me, the author. Secondly, in the dozens of draws, none of them are skills from this world. Fairy Tail, Bleach, and various anime skills that I haven't seen before. I'm watching One Piece fandom, not other worlds.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Well, interesting
Can you write Luffy to death? If someone else doesn't like Luffy,
Not bad, invincible flow
I just like this kind of pirate novel that captures all the beautiful girls in the movie.
It looks good, I'll keep it up first. If it's not poisonous, I'll like it.
Alas, if so many mistakes can't make up for it, then you have nothing to say.
Do what you say and leave
Very nice, but there are a lot of typos
Super nice [like]
Unexpectedly, I opened another book
Come on author, I believe in you
Good, good, good, good, good
Dear author, please update as soon as possible, at least three times a day
The protagonist is awesome, the harem is very united, I like it😍