One Piece: I Awoke at Marineford and Fought Akainu with All My Might

It's hard to break down. The subject matter is good, but the pace is too big. The reward items for each episode are too complicated, and it feels like they are strengthened but not strengthened. It is a phantom beast fruit, a deformation of divine power, and a no-lower limit spell. It doesn't take long for it to be empty. And even with so many abilities, Ace and Whitebeard are written to death, so what's the point of setting the time-travel node at the top? (I only saw Chapter 6, maybe there will be other arrangements later) The title of Chapter 7 is explosive, and the previous 6 chapters have given a lot of abilities. That's it for now, there are so many flaws that I don't even know where to start 🙂

No wonder I haven't finished it after writing it several times before. What kind of swordsmanship is Black Sword Level Swordsmanship? Please tell me, the author. Secondly, in the dozens of draws, none of them are skills from this world. Fairy Tail, Bleach, and various anime skills that I haven't seen before. I'm watching One Piece fandom, not other worlds.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Well, interesting

Can you write Luffy to death? If someone else doesn't like Luffy,

I just like this kind of pirate novel that captures all the beautiful girls in the movie.

Not bad, invincible flow

It looks good, I'll keep it up first. If it's not poisonous, I'll like it.

Super nice 👍

Very nice, but there are a lot of typos