After Locking the Frame, I Became the Number One Among Heavenly Beings

Do you know how to write a book after forever? [Sinister smile]

Update soon! [Laughing evilly] It looks pretty good now, but the amount of plot in the game and reality must be kept in check. After all, this kind of writing is like this. If there is too much real-life content, it will be urban pretense [face covering]. If there are too many games, it will be competitive [face covering]. In conclusion, the author has a deep understanding of eternal calamity (compared to normal players, you can't do anything if you have to compete with the masters [face covering]), so you can rest assured that at least there will be no unreasonable various character skills, games, and combos. There is no need to use your brain to analyze it. When I read this kind of article, I usually bring it in myself, thinking about whether I can try this combo [face covering]. Occasionally when I see a weird combo created by an author, I will turn on my computer and ask Master Tianhai to learn it [face-covering]. It turns out that some authors still write too fantasy, or they may be too poorly qualified to learn the "immortality cultivation" technique [face-covering]. But don't worry about this article. At least San Shura still understands the mechanics of this game. So don't worry about seeing weird things. Finally, I feel that the author's pace of writing games is not fast, which is a good thing for me. After all, I don't want to fall asleep looking for articles. Because there are not many words, I can only rate based on the current content. I don't know whether the author wants to be relaxed or competitive? Or maybe half competitive and half Tie Tie [laughing evilly]. So I won't describe it too much. I will review it when the number of words increases. So far non-toxic, easy to use, feel free to watch. I also hope that the author will not make the heroine too vulnerable in the end, otherwise it won't be very interesting to fight everyone when her attributes are broken. You can let the supporting characters (opponents) progress together with the protagonist. The protagonist even directly posted a teaching video and became a cyber guru [laughing evilly]. Cultivate opponents to make the game more interesting. The above suggestions are for reference only, and the author may have thought of them a long time ago, but I still hope that the writing will get better and better and keep it up. I don't want to keep looking for books either.

Yongjie is almost dying, tell us the truth, did Sister Jie ask you to publish novels to fool new players? [Sinister smile]

Why does it feel a bit like that CS go book? It's okay. It's okay.

We will always have our own silly goose (no) The writing style and rhythm are indeed good. Good luck to the author [I learned it]. I really like this kind of book that can be read with your brain.

I'm not an Eternal Tribulation player, but I can get involved by reading the author's book and understand the game logic and charm of the game. Personally, I think that although the daily plot and characters are slightly flawed, the game part as the theme is exciting enough, so the flaws are not hidden, and it is a good and edible book. Also: The author won't update it soon! I hope there will be 20 chapters one day that will scare me to death. If it's still this short, it will only reward you with the heat of eternity [laughing evilly] (although the body is honest enough to tie it up) I wish the author good luck in literature! Enjoy the game? [Sinister smile]

Okay, but it's too similar to Duo Ge, and the writing is not as good as Duo Ge. Give me that, that feeling. Uh, a kind of... The same dish cooked by a five-star chef and then eaten by an ordinary chef... Understand. (Some words are too offensive, so I won't say them because they affect my feelings.) The back is good, If we continue what was said above, Daigo is a five-star chef, and the rest are probably at the level of a three-star chef.

It's much better than other books about eternal tribulation. Other books are full of poisonous points. I wonder if those who write about tribulation have ever played it. They beat this and that in a daze. Even if the shot is stiff, it's invincible. This book is much better than those books. Good luck to the author.

It's good to read. It's the first time I read Eternal Tribulation. I can feel it in my hand. [Like]

It's nice to read, but the author is too short. So short that I thought the author didn't have any

Is there any chance for Qin Bao to show her face? This girl in the multi-tiered queue is really ridiculously strong. She was the first female leader in the third-tier row last season [laughing]

Originally, there were only a few fans of Eternal Tribulation, and it turned out to be hundreds, which is really cool to see.

I feel like the author didn't fight many Celestial Beings. When writing about the Purple Sword and Purple Armor in the shop, he only considered it after losing. The most important money of Celestial Beings was not highlighted. Everything else was fine. There was nothing too poisonous about it.

It's okay, but I'm a novel reader, and I'm not here to see how the anchor changed. The Internet explodes every day, and I don't feel comfortable reading it. Isn't it just for fun when I read novels?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the writing style Being green will be criticized. When you watch twice, a little patience is born, the plot progress has been paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slight praise starts to happen, and the dead harvest starts. The numbers started to drop. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form and praise you The sound grew louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates were deafening and tolerant. The attitude is carried out internally and externally.

Author, I would like to ask you, Lily, whether you want to have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

It's very beautiful, but there are not many people watching it.

It is somewhat similar to Dull Goose, but for someone who doesn't play Eternal Calamity, this book is also very interesting.

OK, this is a real blow to Yongjie fans.

Ye Fei Fei very much did not sit down

It's pretty cool haha, even though I play the Delta mobile game and can't understand it haha

Come on, come on, I'll finish it in one go

Except for the immature writing style, there is nothing wrong with this book. This book is quite suitable for the taste of some players who have semi-retired from gaming. As long as the proportion at the end is not unbalanced, it is a good source of food.

Okay, come on, author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The author must persist

I'm a local dog, I like to watch

Not bad, please post more

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It's well written, with few bad points.

Except for low production and maybe giving up, everything else is fine.