Wandering Through the Heavens, Starting in the Siheyuan

I always thought of those ordinary people who dressed up as supporting characters. It is a passive seizure of the original owner. What the protagonist does is very good. Stick to your heart. And it can strengthen itself. The plot is also good. Then why not give it 5 points? It's because I feel like this article is too female. And I look at the first principle of chronology. It's a single male and female protagonist. Even divorce. Find again. There should be no plots involving the relationship between men and women. One of the charms of contemporary literature. It's women's liberation. Monogamy. Bitter and happy. Of course this article has just begun. If I make a mistake. Will get 5 points of praise back.

(Top middle) Blue LV5, 25.75 Points/50 points First impression 150%: Sense of substitution 3, Attractiveness 2 Basic settings 75%: Plugins 3, Settings 3 Content 125%: Writing style 2, Creativity 3 Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main line 2 Details 75%: Personality 3, Logic 3 Balance points deduction: None Highlights: None Poison points: None Feelings: When I read Chapter 27, it felt fresh at first, but then the routines became repetitive. Moreover, because of the perspective problem, the immersion was even lower. Score calculation: 1.5×5+1.25×5+0.75×16=25.75 Points Difficulty score calculation (test): 2.0×1+1.5×3+0.6×3+0.9×(7)+0.8×(8)=21

It's nice and good-looking. If you have a system and you don't arrange a few women, why do you have a system? 😎 😎 😎

It's super good-looking but too short. Just arrange three or four women. Xu Damao doesn't have the system to have so many women. 😎😎😎😎

Not bad, it looks quite interesting 😂

Very novel novel

Except for the part about dealing with Yi Zhonghai's embezzlement of alimony, everything else is good.

The angle is novel and the three views are correct. It's pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

Interesting and unique

Good. Just a little less