A Journey Through the Heavens Starts from the Courtyard

I always thought of those ordinary people who dressed up as supporting characters. It is a passive seizure of the original owner. What the protagonist does is very good. Stick to your heart. And it can strengthen itself. The plot is also good. Then why not give it 5 points? It's because I feel like this article is too female. And I look at the first principle of chronology. It's a single male and female protagonist. Even divorce. Find again. There should be no plots involving the relationship between men and women. One of the charms of contemporary literature. It's women's liberation. Monogamy. Bitter and happy. Of course this article has just begun. If I make a mistake. Will get 5 points of praise back.

(Top middle) Blue LV5, 25.75 Points/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 3, attraction 2 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 3, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 2, Creativity 3 Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main Line 2 Details 75%: Character 3, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: None Poison point: none Feelings: When I read Chapter 27, it felt fresh at first, but then the routines became repetitive. Moreover, because of the perspective problem, the immersion was even lower. Score calculation: 1.5×5+1.25×5+0.75×16=25.75 Points Difficulty score calculation (test): 2.0×1+1.5×3+0.6×3+0.9×(7)+0.8×(8)=21 ───────────────────

It's nice and good-looking. If you have a system and you don't arrange a few women, why do you have a system? [Cool] [Cool] [Cool]

Not bad, it looks quite interesting [laughing and crying]

It's super good-looking but too short. Just arrange three or four women. Xu Damao doesn't have the system to have so many women. [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

Refreshing, new theme

It's okay. I'll give you some encouragement.

Very good, novel and interesting, five stars.

It feels pretty good, come on

It's okay, keep working hard

Interesting and unique

Very novel novel

Except for the part about dealing with Yi Zhonghai's embezzlement of alimony, everything else is good.

It seems ok, let's add a bookshelf first As for the protagonist, just don't have so many women in the future, study technology and skills, and join forces with the reds in the sky to do it [laughing]

I didn't take over the body, I want to see the plot behind it

It looks pretty good so far, the subject matter is relatively new, but the number of words is a bit short. It would be better if it were updated more powerfully.

It looks good. Keep up the good work, author.

Read Chapter 54. Although it is a nanny story written by a silly pig, it is not sadistic and is quite satisfying.

Good. Just a little less

To be honest, this Siheyuan book is pretty good. It has the feeling of being cultivated silently. It would be better if the writing style at the beginning is more mature. It might become a hit in Siheyuan [laughing]

The angle is novel and the three views are correct. It's pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.