Genshin Impact: The Pathwalker Who Strayed into Teyvat

Unexpectedly, it didn't follow the main plot completely. This is the right thing. Even the protagonist of a fanfic should have his own life experience, instead of just copying other people's paths. Come on.

So far so good, but what about the original protagonist? Without Twin Abyss, who would lead?

It's pretty cool, but I don't know why. While talking about imaginary energy eroding Teyvat, he keeps using imaginary energy. According to my personal understanding, it should be that the clock has converted the imaginary energy, right? 🤔

Not bad. The setting is considered novel among the original gods. The plot is compact and the pace is relatively fast. Although the details need to be polished, the overall grasp is pretty good. That is, the use of the setting needs to be strengthened. For example, you can try to guide the right people to embark on the destiny path after explaining the concept of destiny. After all, people who like to watch the elements of iron collapse like the elements of Star God and destiny very much, and the feeling of colliding with other worlds.

Comfortable, this is like a fanfic, the other ones are like a nanny, I like to read this kind of thing, the author should write more.

Not bad, a bit new, but I don't know what the protagonist's strength is and I haven't explained clearly. If you don't worry about strength, the novel is quite innovative and not bad. It's better than the main plot on the market. The most important thing is, can Brother Long get out? If it doesn't come out, how should we push the main line? I'm very curious about this, I hope the author will continue to update

Very nice! Emergency food epic enhancement

You can really leave the book world behind, but this book just doesn't feel like it's following the main story line. But there are all branch plots. It feels like the timeline is before one of the twins wakes up. The first two countries are fine, but if it comes to Xumi, it will inevitably encounter the main plot. There is also Inazuma. One god is imprisoned and the other is locked up in the country.

Not bad, very good-looking, give Teyvat some Star God shock ()

Huangmao Traveler: My family, do I still have a chance? 🙂