Foreseeing Death, I Find a Two-Personality Little Succubus from the Start

Hopefully a masterpiece [Admiration]. The first few chapters are quite new, but after a wave of small ups and downs, the characters are profoundly created. It would be really nice if there were more dark healing. Maybe you can consider changing to a nice cover [send heartfelt message].

The first dozen chapters were quite attractive to me, but the plot after I stopped dreaming and entered the official version was a bit weak. There is a feeling that I want to work hard to write something exciting, but I have to develop according to the normal plot.

The logic doesn't make sense. Since we know that he can swallow weird things and become stronger, why doesn't 749 just prepare weird things for him? You can also check to see if he has any mental abnormalities when he eats Weird. In this way, you can directly upgrade in seclusion and come out at full level.

The first few dozen chapters were quite good, but the taste changed after it entered the official version. This kind of article will definitely not be as exciting as the one where you fight alone. Moreover, it is not very good to separate the two things of spiritual value and spiritual power. You can just kill time to read it.

The title of the book is good. I thought the plot would be about falling in love with the heroine and getting stronger every day. But in fact, the heroine has very big restrictions and has little power most of the time. The protagonist is asked to join a useless official and slowly fight monsters and upgrade. Moreover, the originally invincible female protagonist will put a lot of effort on the male protagonist if she uses her own power. The first dozen or so chapters are indeed a bit amazing, but the later chapters are a bit mediocre, so it's okay if you want to pass the time. The idea is good, but it's a bit cliche. It's true that being steady can help you get the right results, but I feel like writing something new and novel will get better results.

Poisonous point: I was blocked after 3 plug-in simulations, and then I chose to join the official website.

Once you enter the official system, things will change. It was clear that I was still fighting for life and death before, but after joining the official, I risked my life and lost my fighting power. For seven days, I was still fighting against an organization that could devour the official. After joining the officialdom, do you think the organization would dare to tie you up directly? And they kidnapped you, do you think the authorities will rescue you? The main purpose is definitely to kill you. This is reality. There are no novels that are worry-free if they enter the official website. You have a ghost core in you. If you want to join the official website, why not just let the protagonist's childhood sweetheart know and let him hide your affairs and become a non-staff member? Guess what happens when a stranger under one person doesn't want to be controlled? All the monsters and ghosts in your world come out. Isn't it normal to have a non-staff alien organization? [Vomit][vomit][vomit]

I personally feel that the author has written very well. It is a good novel. I feel that this is not the first time for the author to write. At first, I thought it was just the same old boring routine. But what the author later wrote is also very reasonable. It also avoids dreaming all the time and finishing the book quickly seems like a whim. I hope the author can work hard. I will keep pursuing it.

Great. This should be considered the first time I have finished reading a novel. Although it is relatively short. But it still makes sense. This novel is very creative. The protagonist fights with the future protagonist. Very very very beautiful! ! ! Can you please give the author a thumbs up [shy][shy][shy]

It's not refreshing or bitter, and the plug-in was banned after three uses.