One Piece: Journey to the World with the Straw Hat Crew

Five stars. For no other reason than for the author, I chose the Fengshen Leg Paiyun Palm Tianshuang Fist that I like. I've been looking for a long time and haven't found much written about this and my martial arts. Or the writing is not good. Come on, author.

I think it's good, I give it five stars. I've always hoped for an author to write a pirate time travel novel. It would definitely be interesting to take the Straw Hats to adventure in other worlds. But no one has written it. I have imagined these, but I can't, otherwise I would write them for myself. Randomly Characters coming to One Piece is also a highlight. For me, it's good. Can the author write about adding some points to the crew, such as Sanji learning the wind god's legs or something, to create a different spark, and strengthen them. Nami and Robin are non-combatants. Strengthen them, and all of them are combatants, haha.

The subject matter is quite new and the writing is quite good. I hope it will be updated continuously. I'm really looking forward to the development of the plot and what kind of waves people from other worlds can make when they come to the world of pirates. There are a few typos in the front, but because I was listening to a book at work, I realized it when I heard it. Later I wanted to submit a correction, but I couldn't remember where it was, but it didn't affect my reading. I also want to ask the author, does this book have a female protagonist? There are quite a lot of good-looking things in One Piece. Personally, I like them more, after all, they have traveled through time, and as a normal man in his 20s, it is normal to have desires. As long as you are not meeting someone, developing a relationship normally is pretty good. But no matter whether it is multiple or single, don't write something that is ambiguous, such as writing ambiguous but not accepting it. You want fans of single heroines to watch it, but you also want fans of multiple heroines to watch it. This is the most disgusting thing. If you write like this, your results will not be very satisfactory, and it will be easy for both parties to be displeased. Finally, I wish my work will get better and better, and hope to achieve good results.

Wow, it looks good! This pirate feels amazing. The plot is very interesting. I've seen people who summon other worlds before, but it wasn't as interesting as this one. Wow, author, you wrote well.

It's okay. I like the Straw Hats to go on adventures in other worlds together, but I've never seen some of them and I'm just confused. People who travel from other worlds don't know what to do with them afterwards, so don't go too far. That was a bit hasty comment, things were not simple when I saw Robin was pregnant...

After reading so much, there is a kind of bug that the protagonist has. This bug will also bring about other bugs. The other bugs don't know how the protagonist's bug feels, so one point is deducted. If because of the protagonist's bug, other derived bugs will naturally have a favorable impression of the protagonist, it will be better. It seems quite novel so far, let's take a look

This is the most beautiful novel that combines alien world and pirates that I have ever read. I feel that if possible, we should write the top battle well, and it doesn't matter if it lasts longer, to depict a more exciting top war. It would be perfect to end it then. After all, after the war on top, I really can't think of what else the author could write. If it were not written well or the exploration of other worlds is repeated, it would feel like the novel would be brought down. But I'm still looking forward to it, author, come on!

Hey, let me sum it up. Everything else is good. The only bad thing is that Robin is pregnant. In fact, this point can be understood later in the finale you arranged. This is a time-traveling, straw hat adventure. You, Robin, are pregnant. You take your son on an adventure. I don't know how you will arrange this poisonous spot. Are you like Roger? Or what to say

I think group wear is also good, especially uncontrollable group wear, isn't it interesting? It's much more beautiful than a single time-travel. Wouldn't a controlled time-travel be boring? Wouldn't an unfettered time-travel look better?

It's very interesting. The one thing that I slightly disagree with is that I hope that the small group can go to another world, but not other worlds. However, the author's arrangement is not bad, but different opinions do not mean that the novel is not well written. This idea is still very good.

The writing is good and very attractive. I just hope to add more interactive plots with other members of the Straw Hats. The plot of the pirate world is also very important. It is best to write about the changes in the Straw Hats. As for the heroine, if you can't write it, there will be no heroine.

It's exciting. The protagonist Lin Hai travels through the world of One Piece and gains the ability to travel to other worlds uncontrollably. If he accidentally takes the Straw Hats to travel through all the worlds, he will experience a thrilling adventure. For Lin Hai and the Straw Hats, this is really an incredible and wonderful trip.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

To be honest, I quite like this kind of group portrait. Could the author please add King Quan Wu Mu from the Little Matchmaker of the Fox Demon? Just choose the time when he comes just before his father is about to kill him. Bringing him to the pirate world will not have much impact on this world [laughing] [laughing]

Although the writing style is average, the writing style on the entire platform, including those that are brainlessly praised, is not particularly good. Other novel websites such as the next door starting point are almost at a level of about 7 or 8 points. The main reason is that the author should be a serious second-time veteran. The number of reads is indeed quite a lot, which personally is quite pleasantly surprised.

It's very beautiful, but I'm not educated, so I can only say that it's very beautiful. However, due to poor traffic, the author's daily update time has become irregular, so I came here to give a good review (≧∇≦) for fear that the author will become obscene.

There are so many worlds, but they haven't collapsed yet, there is something

It is recommended to go to the Fairy Tail world and let Nami learn from Shelia Brandi For the god-destroying magic in the sky, go to "Princess Princess" - (Mengmeng Belia Debiruk), let Usopp learn the language of plants and summon plants to fight. It is very suitable for Usopp and Nami. As for whether you can learn it, it depends on you, the author [laughter]

Adaptation is not nonsense, it should be Kizaru, SpongeBob SquarePants🧽, Akainu Patrick Star⭐, Ao Pheasant and Squidward

This book has four stars in my heart. It is well written so far.

Nice to see! The plot will travel quickly!

The subject matter is novel, and it's fun to take the Straw Hats through other worlds. This kind of fanfic has many plots of its own, so you don't have to copy the anime all the time. The protagonist doesn't lick women, and there are no mindless emotional scenes. It's super awesome.

I felt so happy when I saw Naruto travel through time [laughs]. It's such an interesting story and it fits my perception of anime. It's so cool.

It's pretty good, come on

Group dressing is very attractive, I hope the author can stick to it

It's well written, but I skipped all the chapters where the protagonist appears. I only like the interactions between anime characters.

It's okay, but some anime are forcibly suppressed in combat power. In some worldviews, the power that can destroy the world is suppressed quite severely.

It looks good and the author writes well. By the way, I would like to ask the author if the world he travels through has been arranged. Can we recommend a few worlds?

The writing is pretty good, the plot is attractive, but the writing is average and needs work!

It's a very interesting subject matter. There are too few subjects that allow the Straw Hats to travel through various worlds.