Hpthe Life of a Villain Starting from Scratch

In the first few chapters, I thought this would be a typical counterattack story about a venomous girl, but later on, her joys, sorrows, and joys were revealed bit by bit. I actually quite like this sense of contrast. How could real people not be shaken? Although sometimes I feel that the emotions advance a little faster, the overall rhythm is still gripping.

The heroine is beautiful when she is free and lawless. The emotional entanglement with Malfoy is beautiful when it is sweet, but it is very annoying when it wants to torture. And I don't like this development where the female protagonist is hurt/humiliated and the male protagonist goes to save her and then reconcile. First of all, the heroine is obviously very strong, but she is unable to resist, which is very strange. Secondly, the two of them quarreled because the boy was in charge of too much and was too possessive. This reconciliation did not resolve the conflict. But in the early stage, the free-spirited heroine is really charming, a little fun, and fun

Ahhh, Lila and Draco! This line is so delicately written! The author must keep writing well, I want to see how they develop in the future! (Can Harry also accept it by the way?

Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, I can't get enough of it, I ate it up with Laila and Xiaolong, and I had a great time with Potter. This is the underage love mouth (sighing). In fact, I prefer her sober and crazy side. Love does make people vulnerable, but it is also a unique charm. I like her humor, it's very timely, and I hope my normal speech can be this funny. . The author likes to use dry words, which makes me frown a little bit, but the writing is really great. Why do so few people read it? . . As well as! Can anyone tell me the frequency of updates? I'm shivering in the pit as a newbie.

In the early stage, I thought Lila was quite interesting, with a venomous mouth and a sarcastic temperament. In the middle period, she began to show more vulnerable sides. It is understandable for a teenage girl to grow up in that kind of family and experience so many changes at once. She is in adolescence again.

The character of Draco is quite three-dimensional. The Quidditch scene was thrillingly written,

In 🍅, it is rare to see HP fan fiction that is so exquisite and distinctive that makes people want to read on. Many of them are like routine novels with changed names and settings, but the style and plot are not much different. Support first After three months of hoarding, the teacher actually updated more than 130 chapters... What a model worker...

It's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying][crying] I feel it's the best written in HP [crying][crying] It completely captures Draco's character traits, and Lila is a complete character entity. Oh no why Lila closed everything to Draco... I feel so aggrieved...

Very well written! Highly recommended! I'm not a bastard. . It's been a long time since I've encountered a novel that I like. I hope I'll stick to it and don't end it. It's really good. It's very creative and the characters are very vivid. The relationship between the protagonist and Draco changes in a gradual manner without being abrupt. The descriptions of scenery and details of life in the article are not good. Especially the heroine's psychological anxiety seems to be mixed with insecurity.

It's very beautiful, and the writing style stands out in Tomato… The first ten or so chapters are very amazing. I don't really like the plot of the heroine worrying about gains and losses because of Draco, because in the previous chapter, I felt that she was a dangerous little witch. Maybe this is also part of the character's growth! I specially sent Xiaohongshu to recommend this book, and many sisters liked it and saved it. I hope my wife's writing data will get better and better.

Xiangxiang, except for the part where Laila's psychological processing was not very good, everything else was great! The character is very interesting. The most important thing is that I rarely see Draco's non-OOC articles, and there is warmth between little snakes! Although Slytherin is cunning and cunning, you may not be unable to make real friends.

This book is definitely a conscientious work among HP fans!

This book is so powerful. Each chapter has a sufficient number of words. A chapter of 10,000 words is rare. At present, there are only a few dozen chapters and I am already full. The plot is very delicate and vivid, and it seems that I have no idea how it will develop in the future. It is a very special novel. Keep it and prepare to wait for updates every day!

One of the best HP fanfics on Tomato right now, I almost missed it because of the ratings. Many high-scoring books on Tomato are mindless and cool, but the author of this book has a good writing style, and the understanding and shaping of the two characters Harry and Draco are also very good. However, it seems that Harry is a bit of a tool at the moment. I don't know how it will develop in the future. It is a dream of a threesome.

It's so beautiful, especially this narrative method that combines the storyline with the original timeline and tells it again from more perspectives, allowing readers to more fully experience the story of the third book. I like it😍

It's quite interesting, but I suggest the author use the word "dry" less to describe speaking, as it appears so frequently. There are also women who always say "I'm in Durmstrang", especially Murong Yunhai who shows off "I'm in Australia" balabala every day.

The description is good, good, good, good, good. There are very few dragons that are not OOC and the changes are not sudden. The author has a delicate heart. I will always follow you [cry] [cry] [love] [love] [please update] [please update]

One of the best HP fanfics, cp Draco, male lead Harry Potter. The heroine is the daughter of Bella, whose father is unknown. Her character is unique, which is rare in dream novels. She and Draco are a perfect match [laughing] The emotional part is particularly well written, it is rich, sweet and a bit sadistic, and very touching. The relationship between the young couple is just right. The writing and writing skills are very good. I praise the author [Love] Please, come back quickly, you still have me as a reader, don't be a scumbag, I will run away if you are a scumbag, this is wrong!

It's pretty average, it's considered a top-notch masterpiece in the fandom. The only thing I really want to complain about is that the author always seems to like to use "eyes flashing" and "mouth corners twitching" to describe the character's expressions. The frequency is so high that I once thought of a fish head with twitching mouth corners and a strange light in its eyes when I saw the description of the character's ecological expression...

It's not a sweet article in the traditional sense, but it's very delicious!

It's so beautiful, teacher, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful ones is so good. Thank you so much for your output.

The author's setting is very good. It's not the kind of cool writing, it's the kind of writing that flows in a long and steady flow, and the writing style is very delicate. The plot direction is very interesting. And the updates are top notch too The characters seemed to come alive, and every description of the plot was like a movie playing before my eyes. The writing is super good. It's not a loss if you join the trap. Come and eat, but no one is sending gifts. It's a pity to see such a good article buried.

The first few chapters are quite good. I like the heroine very much, and the author has always emphasized the heroine's lack of freedom. She is limited by her surname, bloodline, prejudice, etc., And even the wand was almost broken. This led me to think that there would be a long description of the heroine's actions in this regard. I thought that the heroine would be more eager for the freedom brought by power and strength, but I didn't expect that after arriving at the Malfoy house, most of the time she would spend time with little Malfoy. Full stars to the author for writing hp fanfics in 2025 and a writing style that I like at the beginning.

The character development of Sister Bao is too real. She's not perfect, she's even flawed. She was sarcastic, sharp, distrustful, crazy and funny in the early stage, but these were all her protective colors. You can feel that she is actually a very sensitive child at heart. This complexity is really well written, wow wow wow it's so beautiful! Waiting for updates every day! Author, you are my god! Please continue to produce food stably! Give you a comparison!

It's really beautiful The character description is very delicate. Lila is really a person with a very tough core and a strong core. When the Weasley twins ridicule her, she will not feel inwardly or inferior, but will respond with humorous and sharp words. Under the glare of everyone at the Christmas dinner who whispered disdain or fear, her words were still sharp and without a hint of cowardice. She pursues excitement and does not take her own life seriously. She is used to ridicule but feels overwhelmed by other people's concerns.

It is no exaggeration to say that this is my favorite book of all the HP fanfics I have read, and it deserves my five stars. Everyone's personalities match up very well, and all plot changes and designs are very reasonable. Even the background and story of the heroine are novel but not unconventional.

So far so exciting! The characters are well-developed, the emotional entanglements are gripping, and the novel has great ideas for adapting and expanding the original work. Highly recommended to readers who like HP fanfiction, especially Slytherin perspective and dragons! Looking forward to the follow-up!

The way the author creates the heroine is amazing. She is powerful, dangerous, and prickly, but not Su, which makes people believable. A true heroine

It's been a long time since I've seen an HP fan with all three aspects of writing, characters, and settings being online. This book is a real treasure.

It's not a sweet novel, it's not a Shura field, it's the kind of love that is sober, restrained, paranoid, and soul-colliding.