Transformation**********

After reading it for a while, I felt that this was not a story with a happy theme. But a good, nuanced piece of work. If you can accept that this protagonist does not have enviable good luck, does not have the talent to stand out from the crowd, or even has the ability to survive independently, but is just a confused and cowardly disabled person. Then I'm sure it won't disappoint. Reincarnation in another world, this imaginative label, can always arouse people's fantasies about magic and swords, struggles and legends, joy and friendship - but these have nothing to do with her. At the beginning of the story, Lulu's anchor point called "home" was torn apart by the war, and her dreams and life were unfortunately taken away. Brokenness is the initial tone, and this strange sense of fragmentation at the beginning is indeed the initial support. As a gimmick in my reading, I felt that the protagonist's desire to live was just a blank instinct, and that moving forward in life was not smooth sailing. However, while reading, I found that Lulu was actually slowly piecing together her life, from revolt to adaptation, and in the process of transforming her sad melody into plainness. I think what she carefully holds in her arms from now on will definitely be a heartwarming story. I hope her life's journey can warm people's hearts. This is a book with potential.

It feels a little bit Japanese, but it reduces a lot of unnecessary dialogue or mental activities, so it won't be tiring to read. The writing style is relatively delicate, and the words and sentences are not like those of a newcomer. Overall, it is a type that makes people read. The narrative perspective is first person, which means that the sense of immersion will be much stronger. Correspondingly, the disadvantage is that the characterization is weaker, especially the male protagonist (probably the male protagonist), who has not performed outstandingly so far. However, the author said that there will be more additions in the future, so look forward to it. The world view of this novel is unfolded step by step. At the beginning, the focus is only on a disabled girl, and at the same time, it is mixed with a lot of memories. While shaping the character, it also shapes the overall world view. I am still very optimistic about this writing mode. As of now, the content is still very attractive to me. It is content that I am willing to update. I personally give it a 4.5/5. I hope the author will continue to work hard. In addition, the author himself said that he has 600,000 words in the manuscript. It is recommended to update it [Blow kiss] What do you mean? Why was it removed from the shelves? Continued on March 3, 2026 It's been more than a month. Isn't it really impossible to save her? [I'm about to cry]

After all, it is a special book that writes tragic stories in warm and happy language. It's a pity that the knight died. I don't know if anyone has read Reincarnated Elf but Goblin Lair (probably called this). The protagonist of this book is a goblin like the knight, a time traveler, and also has a cherished mother. Even though the situation is terrible right now, there is still hope. This feeling is special. It is also interesting to experience the progress of civilization from the perspective of a small person. Also, let me ask how many children the protagonist will have [laughing evilly]

Yes, yes, this is a Japanese light novel😋 wheelchair protagonist It looks very comfortable and gives me a faint feeling of death. After watching the emotional scene between the protagonist and the male protagonist, I felt that the corpse was so warm that it was about to ascend to heaven😇

The style of Japanese light novel is not the traditional upgrade of fighting monsters, it is more daily life, the plot is fresh, the beginning is a bit dark and sad, and the story of the heroine's second life from misfortune to happiness is a bit astringent. There is no problem if you change, but if you marry, it depends on your personal acceptance.

Readers who keep up to date with the latest progress of this book. As a person who pursues pure "story", I am actually not sensitive to the tag reaction of specific themes, so my evaluation will throw away the keywords related to attributes such as "TS" and "different world", and share my views on "Counter Girl" purely from the perspective of the story. The charm of "Counter Lady" lies in its delicate female characterization and excellent story setting. Let's talk about characterization first. Why do I emphasize that it's a female character? Because I want to start by attacking the portrayal of male characters in this book. At this stage, the male protagonist Joel is really a bit too submissive and lacks courage. Although gentleness and strength are also the characteristics he currently displays. I also believe that the follow-up part will complete and supplement the role of Joel, but at the moment I cannot feel the will and charm of this character. So how do you embody the charm of a character? In my understanding, to achieve this, the author should present the characters' dreams and hopes to readers, then deprive them of everything they have in tragedy, and finally gain their own happiness after experiencing repeated choices and losses in despair. Therefore, everyone will find that Lulu, Colletti, Alice, and the daughter of Baron Wallace who will appear later, will be some of the most lovable characters in the existing plot: they have all lost their cherished treasures, but they were not broken by sadness, but bravely made their own choices. These parts that reflect the growth of the characters are the source of my pleasure in reading novels. Let's briefly talk about the story setting. In fact, I struggled with the terms "story setting" and "plot design" for a while, but after repeated consideration, I chose the former. Another thing I like about "The Counter Lady" is that in the short-term plot advancement, the author has buried quite a few introductions that can be used to extend the world view of the entire story. At the same time, when advancing the plot, he will be more inclined to use unconventional methods that readers cannot easily predict but are indeed traceable to resolve conflicts and contradictions in the story. When necessary, he can also adjust the writing style and introduce and explain events in a more "escape" way. Because of these "unusual" points, I was quite happy while watching "The Counter Girl".

I really like this writing style with long flow and inner monologue. It feels like a light novel. But in my opinion, the heroine's feelings for the hero are still a bit abrupt? The incident that almost legitimately established the bond will be described by the author later. All in all, it is in line with my preferences. I will always urge you to update this novel [top post] [top post] [top post]

I really like this kind of novel that has its own ideas. The story does not fall into a clichéd narrative. The author is more like a calm observer and recorder, allowing the characters to live independently. The plot is therefore real and perceptible, and the waves arise on their own. The writing style is also very unique. I have read so many novels, but this style is rare. It feels very comfortable to read, like the spring breeze blowing on the face, making people want to read it in one sitting.

Like a piece of sweet and sour candy wrapped in pink🍬The story is peeled off little by little, and it is afraid of melting when held in the mouth, like tears, like fragile ceramics, with lingering sadness, but still smiling. Beautiful [almost crying]

It has a very Western fantasy writing habit. First-person Western fantasy novels are rare. I have only been reading two of them. The author is very attentive. The settings and characters are very good from now on. I just don't know how the ending will be completed. What kind of foreshadowing I haven't seen yet. I'm looking forward to it (´∀｀)♡

The rhythm of the story has been segmented to fit the rhythm of the online writing platform. In addition, the writing style seems to be a bit biased towards female videos, unlike male videos that focus on rendering a certain point to enhance emotions and deepen impressions. There are no big problems with the writing and plot, it's edible!

It is a novel with a light novel flavor. Although it has many bad points: it contains elements of marriage change, the protagonist's life is too miserable, some plots are too preachy, and the plot is too classic and cliche, but still, as a novel, it is interesting enough. It is also one of the few novels in Tomato that I can evaluate as having a light novel flavor. It is enough.

Come on, author, it's a rare good book in Tomato. I like the plot design and characterization. The writing is very online, and the heroine is also very cute. It's my problem that I can't accept the setting of my previous life. Maybe it's because I'm more conservative [face covering]

Absolutely a good book, Mu Yong doubts it Although it adopts the first-person perspective, the detailed and delicate psychological description gives the article a different charm. The writing style is calm and sincere, and the story is treated sincerely. The process of interweaving memories into the narrative is a bit stiff, but it works well with the real story line. I hope it will be updated soon. Please bring up the 600,000 saved manuscripts as soon as possible😋

🔔The latest (not) book Most of the content is pretty good to read (except for some awkward sentences) Also, the part about the emotional line has always felt weird. It's like a male protagonist suddenly appeared in the first volume and quickly changed his negative favorability to positive in an incomprehensible way, and then went offline. I really can't understand it at all. It's like giving a gift to increase your favor But—— Never been in love ( So maybe it's probably like this Also, repent (I started skipping reading after Chapter 2 of Volume 2 before) Maybe it's because I'm really not suitable for reading light novels... Or something like that It's probably all personal issues The book is still very nice 🔔🔔Come on

3 Stars is too low, and 4 stars is a bit high. It's a pity that I can't give it a 3.5. I went to esj to read it. In fact, I think it would be more comfortable to read if I deleted the h. The parts that don't involve love and serious plot are interesting, but the plot and love are hard to say good-looking. Although it has been said for 3 months, the favorability and gender confirmation from the reader's perspective have indeed risen too fast, and there are no major turning points or sufficient length. All in all, the subject matter is fresh and interesting, and the description of the protagonist's psychological activities is really interesting. Write something else The author still wants to write a pure love story, so in a sense, the non-conformity may be considered a highlight, so when I wrote the plot of 0721 (the ones I watched on ESJ), it felt very strange. It felt like I was just writing it at the beginning to keep the readers here, and then later I thought, oh, I still have this label, let's write about it. But maybe I just don't like the part where a girl's heart flutters. And actually, I think the age settings of 14 and 15 are also very strange. Although there are works like Koharu from Another World, I think it would be more comfortable to read when you are older (Fog). Well, this is not the point. In fact, it doesn't matter if you don't care at all. In fact, I don't like to set dark background stories or some inhuman feelings for characters. It is not very suitable in this kind of story, because except that the protagonist can reminisce about the past and deepen his feelings, is it really necessary to write the rest in detail? In fact, when you read about these characters later, you won't have any deep feelings or understanding. But if it were not written in this way, most of the plot of the book would not be able to advance, and it would most likely become a purely daily sweet novel (this is also a good possibility ()). And when I say inhumanity, I mostly refer to the male protagonist, because it's a bit scary to imagine that a person you don't know anything about falls in love with you without any reservation and then pays for you and finally makes you fall in love with him. This means that it takes a long time to write a romantic comedy before a real confirmed relationship can appear (but it may also be a highlight to keep pushing for an uncertain relationship?) Okay, it doesn't matter. In fact, I haven't read many works of the type of marriage or transformation, but most of them are used as starting settings, and in the end they will become completely meaningless decorations, but if they are not completely changed, it will become something that reads similar to blbg? Well, I don't know because I haven't read it, but I think it's better to live with scars than to be completely healed. But it may be that I simply have a perfect fantasy about bianwen. After all, I hope that light novel bianwen can write something interesting rather than hoping that light literature can be a bit literary. Thank you very much for reading a lot of illogical and low-level comments I wrote. Reading is a very personal thing, and the reading experience cannot be the same, so the above is just my own words. If you want to refute, you are right, thank you very much.

It has Riqing's delicate emotions without Riqing's overly noisy psychological descriptions, which is great. No matter how I looked, I couldn't see where the joy was. People who are old are not suitable for looking at joy, so they slipped away.

There is no huge and complicated background setting, but just the daily life of an ordinary but strong girl like Lulu Anna. The ordinary life is occasionally interspersed with some small episodes. The little girl who was unfortunate in the past also gained a happy future after meeting her own knight. The writing is delicate, and Ri Qingfeng whets my appetite😋

The overall main plot, character creation, and emotional lines are quite well written. But how can I put it, after reading the first volume, I felt like I was seeing a middle school student's composition [laughing and crying], and the memories that suddenly flashed out were quite fragmented. But when interspersed with daily life, it feels good, so I won't go into details. Also, for me, the lack of paragraphs in online articles affects the perception. Of course, it may be because I have less exposure to this type of writing.

The writing style is very delicate, maybe because it is in the first person, and the emotions are quite full, and some details in the world view are also quite interesting. However, the change of the heroine's mood towards Joel is a bit abrupt. It might be better to add some plots, etc., But other parts are quite good, especially for Joel. I quite like the plot design of the role of Coletti. It has a very obvious Japanese-Western fantasy flavor. I personally don't like it. However, because of the author's narration and the handling of details, I don't particularly hate it. In the end, I just hope that the author will write more😭. It's not enough. It's better to have 100 chapters a day😭

How long has it been since I read a novel that tells a story slowly? This story is not a cycle of upgrading, defeating monsters and opening treasure chests, but telling a good story. A story that is far removed from reality, perhaps just a dream. A story that is not the "protagonist" and not lucky.

I've found gold in Tomato. This light novel has a strong flavor. It's a traditional Western fantasy world, but it's not a traditional reincarnation-style novel. It's more of a daily style novel. I like it very much. There is a serious sense of separation between the male protagonist's behavior when the male protagonist and the female protagonist meet for the first time, and the subsequent behavior between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. When they first meet, the male protagonist feels like he can take on a big responsibility, but the more the male protagonist behaves later, the more he behaves like an emmm 'idiot'?

Overall, I quite like it. I have to say that the flaw is that the description of the hero Joel in the early and late stages feels weird, and he doesn't seem to be the same person. I remember it was Joel who said he liked Lulu in front of the guild, which gave me a bold pursuit and a more outgoing person. Later, when I got along with Lulu, I didn't have that extroversion, and was more careful and occasionally dull. I know that maybe two personalities can exist at the same time, but some language should be able to feel it, it is more like two people The first-person narration can better highlight Lulu's calmness and delicacy. Putting aside the weird early part with Joel, emotionally, Lulu really feels very gentle, and her relationship with Joel later is quite harmonious.

First of all, congratulations on discovering a treasure. It has a pure Japanese different world light novel style and an exclusive perspective of the protagonist that is not very common in China (it is rated as the same as "Ikebukuro West Exit Park" and "Spice and Wolf"). People watching it are a little confused and even keep asking themselves whether they are watching Tomato or Bunko. The rhythm is very good, and even mild jokes will not affect the overall perception. It abandoned the overall narrative of ordinary novels and changed it to a collection of units (with a strong sense of substitution). It was enjoyable to read and also stimulated personal emotions. However, it inherits the common light novel style of Memoir and The Riddler. When reading it, you need to use your brain and connect with the context. Although there are few shortcomings, they are still there. Some parts of the article will feel discontinuous and repetitive when reading. All in all, it's eye-catching, can be followed, and I look forward to the follow-up...

Very Japanese, very light novel, very different world Very pure Japanese light novel flavor I can only say that this type is still rare on tomatoes [laughs evilly]

Woohoo, cat girl, what are you doing?

It's good, but the background setting is that only nobles have magic, and only noble marriages are recognized. I hope there will be a way to give the heroine a title in the future, although according to the setting, this seems to depend more on blood ()

Bless every baby who reads this book~

Are you sure the author is not the emperor's uncle? I stood watching [crying]

Isn't it why the front foot is off the shelf after looking at the back foot?