What's Wrong with Becoming an Immortal in a Day?

Author, your book is very suitable to my taste. At least the plot is not that cliche, and basically does not step on any evil points. The plot is very dense and not watery. Except for some details that are not handled well, such as the protagonist's ability table is written wrong. There is also a flower-like spirit stone refreshing talent, which in my opinion is a loophole. It is better to choose a talent at random. After the simulation is over, it is better to just choose a point than to refresh. As for the protagonist's choice, sometimes you can choose some experience rewards or money-making talents to make the protagonist's start smoother, and then use the simulator for a lifetime to polish and polish skills. Don't always choose a cultivation level every time and then start practicing skills from scratch. Although cultivation is everything, walking on two legs is more comfortable than one leg. Otherwise, what is the value of cultivating immortals and hundreds of arts? There is another suggestion that is not very good. You should consider it as appropriate and don't be influenced. That is, you can take a different route for each simulation. I see that most simulation books do not even write down the route for the simplest problem. They always write that the protagonist uses precious simulation opportunities to repeatedly struggle and die on a problem. Although this book does not have this problem, you can also use the information advantage of the simulator to let the protagonist survive and collect various information about opportunities, so that the protagonist can have opportunities in every subsequent life. (You should consider it as appropriate. I am an outsider. I feel that you should arrange the issue of opportunity. Throw it out a little bit every time, and then it will be fresh every time. Although it is not the most reasonable, it is more interesting. I hope it will not affect you) After reading this book of yours, I read your other two books. The martial arts one, maybe because you had less experience at that time, felt a bit rough. It was a good read to polish the world view and characters. It can be seen that you have an outline for the third weird book. Although it is still a bit fast-paced, it is already very good. I think it can be regarded as a complete work, but it suddenly stopped, just like the second book. Including this one, I feel it is very good, but the author, you break it off every time you write more than fifty chapters. If you finish it all, at least people like me who prefer your style will go back and read it again. I don't mean to criticize you when I say this, I'm simply giving advice on authors I like and hope you can stick with it, come on! [Love] I hope the author can reply to me [blowing kiss]

Sincere evaluation: There are very few bad points about the characters. If you have reading experience, you can hardly see any bad points. The plot is neither too passionate nor too bland. It can be said that the intersection of fiction and reality has its own story. Emotionally: It can be said that I can see it very clearly. The simulation is a simulation and the reality is reality. For the good people in the simulation, if you meet them in real life and need help, you can help them. If the gap is too big or you can't meet them, there will be no contact. I hope to persevere. Character creation: The protagonist is a person who can be proud but also dormant after recognizing it. He also takes revenge. What is rare is that he has a conscience but not much. In fact, the other characters have not been described too much because of what I said: the protagonist is a person, the strange person is a strange person; the inferior person is also an inferior person. What I said is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you! I also really like Liu Ruyan's characters and think Liu Ruyan is okay. I hope the author of Short King doesn't make her a human, a ghost or a ghost, and then she is instantly refined by the protagonist. And the author of Short King, don't give up. If you don't update anymore, I will have fewer books.

The author suffers from the introduction of the novel, and I suggest that it be revised. Simulation novels are inherently upgraded very quickly, so there is no question of whether to suppress them or not. Reasons for giving five stars: 1-The simulation process involves experience and thinking, rather than a simple running account (a running account is what you did today and what you will do tomorrow, with no mental activity at all) 2-The next simulation will simplify the same experience as the last time (some simulation novels will rewrite the content of the last time, the number of words is obvious) The above two points are what I pay most attention to when reading the simulation essay.

I have read dozens of books on simulation of cultivating immortals, and this book ranks first for me. It is really difficult to write simulation articles. The combat power is too easy to collapse. What should I do if it doesn't collapse? I can only suppress it. All I see is the obvious suppression of combat power. It is obvious that choosing the realm of cultivation is the best, but I just don't choose it. I suppress it. I can't write if I don't suppress it. It's too much. The best thing about this book is that every choice can meet the expectations in the heart. The plot in the simulation is smooth and there is no big poison. It is a fun text in the simulation. Some suggestions: You can arrange some aspects of life, such as teaching disciples, don't mention it in one stroke, why Liu Ruyan was able to reach 100 in the Tower of Babel, what skills did you teach, etc. You can write it appropriately. The plot of slap in the face can also be arranged. The article must be interesting, otherwise it is too easy to be visually fatigued when you are either simulating or on the road to simulating. The last book I read was like this. It felt like reading a novel instead of reading a diary. I hope the author will continue to write carefully and not collapse.

You came from the earth and eventually became a transcendent existence on the Three Thousand Avenues. But after tens of millions of epochs, you couldn't resist the shrinkage of the world. In the end, including you, there were three thousand people in one egg. After a preliminary understanding, you felt familiar but just couldn't remember it. You think this is the end, but there is one person who is different. He has not mastered the three thousand avenues, let alone the unified chaos. Together, you want to kill the aliens, but they are only reduced to ashes in an instant. Before you die, you see the world divided into two parts, rising and falling. Do you remember? It turns out that in the end they are all the souls who died under Pangu's axe.

It's okay. The only drawback is that there are too many simulations. As for the spirit stone problem that others mentioned, I don't think it is a problem, because it is a bug and it is impossible for you to get stuck.

It looks great, but there are a few things in reality

I feel like it's the best simulation I've ever seen. I highly recommend it. The world view should look grander? Looking forward to future updates.

It's okay. Although this book has some poisonous points, it still has its merits. The simulation does not overwhelm the protagonist, and the book is still enjoyable. The Ascension to the Immortal World is also very decisive. I can only say that it is quite acceptable. Finally, I hope the author will work harder and update. I hope the author will not be eunuchs and unfinished.

It's very interesting to watch, there are some routines but the whole book is written very smoothly. It's quite enjoyable, but the supporting characters are a bit cliche.